Battle Rules:

15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

you spit first.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 07:12 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

West_Side_Kript has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 07:13 PM.

Lyrical Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 07:17 PM.

aiight niggas lets do this im ready im ready you ready lol aiight lets go

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you have no real lyrical talent itz all played and fake/
quit rappin before you bring it down plz for all our sake/
i spit 15 lines all the time cuz i'm good when i rhyme/
bitch resign from rap cuz you suck and aint devine/
dont fuck wit a solja or get left at the crib all wet/
why the fuck you here you hardly have any respect/
you'll never be legendary or scary can never marry/
disrespect you like i disrespect that pussie john kerry/
i'll win be sure to that cuz votez for me aint vary/
dont act all gangsta man you prolly never carried/
you aint a disciple of lyrical skillz your a dip shit/
pay attention bitch clit is what i git even wit the clip/
i believe in hand to hand combat witch you wont understand/
your worth nothing but a cent while i'm worth more than 100 grand/
you think you gonna win i'll beat -u- where you stand/

he say he from "West Side" in "tha Hood"
nigga ill "break" you in half like "wood"1
say he a "kript" he mean "kriptonite"
sit back and watch as i "blow" ya spot up like "dynamite"
he say he "killin suckers" he means "lolly pops"2
imma murk this nigga so bad he gone run to tha cops
this nigga still in "school" and he fuckin with me 3
payin is tha only time he holds a titty
pay attention when you battlin tha King
ill teach you lessons that will make ya head ring
he clain he "real dope" but he smoke to much "dope"4
tha slick this "rope around ya neck" will make you "choke"
"West_Side_Kript" got tha "underscores" cuzz he way down "under"
ill Plunder his rekord and make him wonder
cant think cuzz im "roarin" louder then "thunder"
have him underground like "tupac"5
keep fuckin around you''ll get got 6


1.Boards Break in Half
2.he say he killin Suckers in his Profile
3.he still a Student
4.he Claim hes Dope
5.Tupac on his Avatar but Pac is dead
6."you'll get got" is in owned by me

where the fuckz ur verse. man dont play me.

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there it is mayn chill out i posted it when you posted yours

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i want votes. and so does he but he sucks he wont get any.

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but -u- spit first. oh well at least i can see it.

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yea at least you can see it mayn uppin for votes everybody

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Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

^... Came with some harder punches.
Flowed a hell of alot better.

Both verse were pretty decent. Not feeling all the "" and /
Thats pretty played

Bu overall i think Lyrical came a little bit harder
Decent battle kids ...

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kidz shit but thanx for an honest vote.

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good lookin with tha vote cuzz uppin on votes everybody comon

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