Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
NO CREW VOTES
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-20-04 at 06:11 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 06:12 PM.

U should be beggin fo sense, like charity askin fo dough from Oprah
battlin me is stupid, cuz it dont take much heat ta' smoke a joka
i'm the coldest cobra, this show is ova.....shit, it's curtains fo u
fuck a white T, i should be given a law suit the way i'm hurtin this foo
wit ya vexin words, u like a surgical tool...u gittin under ma' skin
if i told u ta' raise the bar, your stupidass would run to the gym
ya dumb n ya dim.......try n step on me, n u'll stand in defeat
dawg, in this game of hot potato, u simply cant handle the heat
u act like your punches are strong, but u aint speakin much
cuz if ya lines fail ta' connect, how do u expect ta' keep in touch?
u cant reach me-----dawg, i'll jus swing n defeat ya purpose
u prolly feel like u in dark waters.......cuz all u see is murkage
u think u sly n slick...it's funny how these peeps admire pricks
we should make this a fare battle,
.......................so at least voters'll hafta PAY ta' ride ya dick

i hope u show...

SmokaJoka666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 07:30 PM.

Smoke'll make this kid my personal 'pupil' all the way to death
So if your my pupil...
The only way 'eye' can come ill, is if I was reffering to myself...
Watch this kid get his d/r's...and this thread'll have em all on it
But if ya want to see a forbidden fruit? just ban my opponent...
Thought you had this battle in your hands, but not talkin the talk..
He reminds me of Times Square each year, dropping the ball
It's easy...just ask if he's wack...and the kid'll simply confess
That he's a poor fuck...
..Reason way he's on his feet is cuz his car was repossessed
Just up your punches...cuz right now they're the worst ones...
But it'll be all good...that'll be o-k...well you'd still suck son

uppin fo votes...........................

we need some votes here.............drop links....

Voted For: Kwell

ha ha. yo kwell had a nice verse. i expected more from smoka cause everyone says hes really good and this is the first battle i seen from him. hopefully this wasnt his best

smoka-u had some lines kinda. not really anything that stood out. the only line i was feelin was the line about the fruit. that was ok though. not really hard punch. you had a decent flow though. overall 5/10


kwell-nice verse. especially against someone who is referred to as a vet. you attacked smoka in every line. with nice punches and u had 1 personal usin his name in the opener which was good. ur closer was also good. ur structure was good and so was your flow. u had a lot more punches than smokajoka. overall 7/10


vote-kwell...........

tryna git some more votes....hit this up n i'ma return the favor

Voted For: SmokaJoka666

This was one sided for sure...
Smoka: shit your verse killed all of his lines it was better and your punches were dtrong... nice personals and your flowed very welli dunno why someone voted agaisnt you cos you had this win striaght forward.....i liked the last line... also nice strucutre..... all of yours was came as played and crapp and yours was original

Kwell: your was iight not that good though smoka got you on every line.....your flow wasnst as good.. but it was iight your struuctrew was good....aslo you had iigiht punches and personals but your punches were very much played and it wasny original....

Vote Smoka joke for a better verse and originality

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rating...
smoka:7
kwell: 4
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Voted For: Kwell

ok i wasnt really feelin both but k made a more clean approach and keeped the hits comin smok didnt seem to have a strong structure or flo though i did like the time square line nicely creative. but k had more hits, very simple battle which is ok, defeat and heat prick and dick ....ones and son, so on so on,
hard to choose but k's is more structured.

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Voted For: Kwell

kwell got diz
his verse had da better puns n personals
dat gym line wiz tight
kwell ya finisher iz a lilplayed but da rest of da verse wuz nice

smoke ya flow wuz iight, dat opener wuz weak an da finisher wuznt much better, dint have no wit in yuh puns either

for overrall consistency in da bars kwell got da win

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......uppin 4 votes.....

those 2 votes are bullshit votes... not explained... blah...

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