Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
you drop first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 03:24 AM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 03:06 AM.

Lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 03:07 AM.

SIZE=1]inactivity in ya crew, that's a major downfall, no one knows ya here
lyric couldn't elevate above me if he was on top of a boardwalk or a pier
cut ya head off and place it in the ocean, u'll be drowning in thought
no skills, ya payed a ghostwriter so when u lose u'll say it's his fault
ashamed cause he was defeated by a newb so his record is a no show
lyric beating me is like a parapelegic boxing and throwing low blows
this kid prewrites proof is in his challenges, 10 lines every time
u should train and become a doctor cause ya bars are fillers, every line
lyric don't battle vets, even admitted to battling newbs, hard challenge
skills, chris reeves has a better chance of walking and keeping his balance[/SIZE]

here's my correct structure

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Your in the hot seat, Actually the whole site's blazing to kill
Cause you’ll be walking on coals, when I fuckin bust your grill
Sayin G-G-G-G-Side, damn man does that shit make him dope?
Nah this faggot is jus stuttering, just mentally unable to cope!
Family's too poor to pay bills, so ya brain and house aren't very bright!
And theres nothin 'left' on his mind, cause this retard aint 'right'!
You aint commin with tight rhymes man, All your shit is mad played
So your goin back old school, dumbass repeating the first grade!
Fake personal don't hurt me, Your punches are whack and always miss
And your jus confusing me, Banks how can you recycle garbage?

not trying to sway votes but he's gonna have a few banks lines in their, their so played, lol, anyways i just wanted to call it before he posts his verse and if by a shot outta hell he doesn't then i'll be shocked but chances are that he will

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good shit lyric, good shit, we uppin peeps

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Lloyd Banks lines? Nope....didn't use any bitch..and way to post that^ after my verse moron

here we go with more net beef, when i was posting it u hadn't posted yet asshole, and everybody else uses the lines so i assumed u would, i was wrong, lol but don't come starting net beef, it was a good battle so let it go

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Voted For: Banks

banks got this, his verse wuz much more creative, chris reeves line wuz dope, dat bars are fillers line wuz pretty whack tho, but for the ovverrall content in da verse u got diz fa sho, an lyric, ya verse wuz predictable, an ya finisher didnt rhyme, banks got my vote hiz verse wuz far more creative n enjoyable

Voted For: Banks

Voting on the ones no one will touch.....

ashamed cause he was defeated by a newb so his record is a no show
lyric beating me is like a parapelegic boxing and throwing low blows
^^^Best line. rest of it was alright but played. i heted the structure. FLow was ok puncher were ok just an ok verse nothing too special. 6/10

Family's too poor to pay bills, so ya brain and house aren't very bright!
And theres nothin 'left' on his mind, cause this retard aint 'right'!
^^Nothing specila here. all played shit. Ok fow and better strucutre and weak wordplay. No really hard punches. 4/10

Not bad. Banks won.

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Voted For: Banks

aight aight...yo banks took this...his personals were so much better...had better vocab, and he got you on the whole battling newbs...both of your structures were wack, but banks just had a better structure, there for a better flow...and lyric, your punches were really weak...you need to step it up if you want to win yo...no hate...jus sayin elevate...so my vote goes to Banks...it was just better

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