Starting Time: 11:03 PM Western Time

I believe, we could achieve changing Our Lives a hundred-eighty degree's...
Some don't succeed, Makin em think wut they want they won't ever breach...
Soon full of disgrief, most people seem to never be able to fufill their dreams..
In their mind they scream, thinkin if only i did this, i woulda got it, it seems...
Is thier a real "American Dream?" Where you actually get wut u dreamed of???
Cuz to get it, it seems tough, since alot of us never ever got or even seen love....
We get put down everywhere, we seem to slip at every stair, so we're very scared...
To actually get out there in the real world, but is it fair that we're jst never prepared....
You know before my rhymes I've never shared! But cuz of this site I actually do...
I practiclly proved, that emcee's can have a future as good as any of u white dudes...
And no i ain't bein racist, and no i ain't hatin, but its happend to me jst cuz im asian...
No chance in the world of rap entertainment! Its like my future has already been painted...
My futures set by God, perminatley marked! N before someone has hurt'n me w/ remarks...
Makin me feel like im alone in the dark..with no flash lights... noone to help n guide me...
Guid me to live a life lively..or not even a person to love n protect me n also be beside me...
Alrite..this is my freestyle.. and Yea, i know it ain't good...cuz yea duh its a freestyle..
but at the mean while.. please think of wut feedback to give me after you re-read this in a while...

Ending time: 11:18 pm Western Time