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11-10-04, 11:41 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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.::Soul 2 Defs' First Song::.
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.::Soul 2 Def Audio Hip-Hop Group::. DeadlyVision R-Rated JPoLL New Method Premanition .::http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/rratedmusic.htm::. Gimmie Feedback On The Song So Far.. Only Hook and First Verse Done So Far.... ~R~ |
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11-11-04, 12:22 AM
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Well....
The hook is aight, I ain't feeling that "Heeeaa" part.... Ya flow was pretty much point, and ya quality is pretty cris.. Not feeling this beat tho.... Lyrics is aight, work on the meta's.. Overall cool verse, looking forward to the rest of it... |
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11-11-04, 01:00 AM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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wow you got mad ego for ya skill level.
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11-11-04, 08:56 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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^Hmm...I Hate You LoL...For A Mod Your Not Helpin Anyone Out...
My Skill Level Isn't Bad At All....Sorry I Don't Have A Studio To Make My Shit Sound Perfect... You Need TO Realize Not Everyone Here Is Working With The Same Shit You Are... I Like The Song and Thats All That Matters...Once I Get These Demos Out and Finally Get Heard...Things Will Happen.. Uppin Dis Shit |
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11-11-04, 08:36 PM
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Street Royal-T
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dont blame equipment, u need to work on ya flow every1 knos a tight emcee would shine wit a $5 mic i would say ya lyrics are str8 and vocab is good BUT its quite borin to listen to ya cos THEY DONT MEAN SHIT you use all this fancy words and it jus sound like ur readin off one of ur topical battles, get a song subject and stick to it "fuck the hype" <----- you sed that in ya verse, but YOUR WHOLE FUCKIN VERSE WAS HYPE. no-one wants to here u talkin bout poppin' a gun cos you will never. stick to wot is true then no-one will be able to diss ya. you need to be oringial not a white 50 cent
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11-11-04, 12:54 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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.::Uppin Dis Bitch::. ~R~ |
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11-11-04, 06:43 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP:
hook: this hook is pretty DOPE...im feelin it....keep it up......
1st: thys shyt aiight...u pause too much...it kills the HYPE....gots me like....where the emotion go...but the lyrics is pretty good hook:again thys is real nyce im accually bobbin my head..... wat happened to the rest of the song? LOL i thought this was complete...there aint no one on after da 1st kat......
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11-11-04, 07:13 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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It Isn't Finished Yet...
This Is The First Single From "Soul 2 Def" The Audio Group. I Am Waiting For The Others To Record... Yea I'm Still Working On That Flow...To Get It Constant Like Talibs...I Finally Figured What I Gotta Do...I Been Listening To The Way Talib and Twista Do It.. I'ma Get It Down...Thanks For Feedback Mayn.. Theres AN Opening In Soul 2 Def If You Interested ~R~ |
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11-11-04, 07:37 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP:
I wanna take dat opening son
unless im alrdy in, i dont know whats going on lol
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11-11-04, 08:50 PM
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"fuck the hype u know we tight"-- not bad, R Rated for a chorus but this is a hype song, am i the only one to notice.. but anywayz, the beat wasn't bad but it gets loud on certain parts... now your content, i don't know what ur content was leading to.. u need to pick a topic and stick to it.. u pausin' wasn't the problem.. it seems like u had a hard time pronouncin' some of your wordz.. and u tried to speed up for 2 seconds but it didn't sound right (the parts where you slurred your wordz to follow the beat)... you shouldn't have done that, but if u still workin' on it, good luck wit' ya..
no hate- just real feedback.. pz..
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11-11-04, 10:07 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP:
It Wasn't Hyped Up At All...
It Was Stating The Point About What Soul 2 Def Is and What I Stand For.. When I Said "Fuck The Hype You Know We Tight" I Meant For What You Heard, Listen and Realize. ~R~ |
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11-11-04, 10:47 PM
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damn, R Rated, don't get all heart felt and stuff- it was feedback, sorry it offends you, but i ain't gonna tell you or anybody else what they want to hear... it's the truth: it don't suck- and never said it does.. the beat was a crunk/hype beat.. that's what i was talkin' 'bout, don't judge the feedback, i'm being real with you... work on everybody puttin' their verses in.. good luck pz..
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11-11-04, 10:43 PM
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hmm.. flow was ok... might be better when you get some more cats on ... kingz verty steriotypical comment... tryin to pull race cards.. even though restricted prolly is just talkin shit...
for some reason i just dont like the first verse the hook was aight
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11-11-04, 10:49 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Well I'ma Rerecord My First Verse Tomorrow...and Fill In The Rest of The Hooks...
Then Meth Gonna Spit...Then Grand... Shit Will Be Finished By Sunday! Look Forward To It ~R~ |
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11-11-04, 10:52 PM
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IP:
Alright then.. that's good, keep doin' u, fuck the haters... i just didn't need you to get personal cuz it wasn't meant to offend you that's all..
ya girl fiya.. pz...
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