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Parallel 1 16.67%
Legend 2 33.33%
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Old 12-23-04, 07:08 PM   #1
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Unsuitable Life Parallel ft, Legend, & Dabatos

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Parallel
Patently my parents have there own beef going On
Flows the opposite way of a song to you its Wrong
Hopefully they don’t get mad at each other & Leave
If you believed they would to, bust all there Relieve
Basically y’all would receive a patently waiting Gift
Surprisingly you know this is no myth & get my Drift
I don’t believe how I work with this Misunderstanding
So unsuitable to me and how my parents are Demanding
I really do wish these last 4 years were brought Back
So I would spend time with both then just one, its Wack
Moms trying for money off my dad, whats her Problem
And dads always fighting in court, trying to solve Em
I had no say in this like they thought I was Invisible
They thought I was disabled to people none Divisible
Its like shit people wake up and see whats goin Down
Mom, don’t forget about my Two brothers & I Frown
The reason why we frown is because you seem to Forget
You leave to Calgary and almost feels like we never Met
Dad was always here for us & even took us to Places
James is are half brother but we still go the same Paces
In different ways we still liked knowing both are Their
Most of the times we visited each other we still Share
The latest years gotten real bad but we show are Composer
Standing tall is what is need, to be the greatest Soldier
I want you to, to be standing together on all the Problems
Try working with each other as family like expensive Gems
Its up to you to, to stop beefing and shit, its your Choice
In the days this first began I hated to hear the loud Voice
By the time you realize that you two do such mental Shit
You’ll end up realizing that its about the time you two Quit
Sometimes I feel it’s a competition between both of You
To see whos the best & whos gonna turn out in the long Run
I think you two outdone yourselves this time, its like a Crime
Watching me play ball soon you’ll start a fight on the Subline
Starting to begin in another fight, I don’t want more Confusion
Both got enough started its time to quit this maxed Conclusion
Surprisingly this wasn’t resolved together, theres to much Wrong
The flow has disappeared like a producers outgoing Song
I don’t want this to begin again like another war or Armageddon
It feels like slavery has begun, & now this family equals Gone


My life is so troubled wish def doubled
Haunted by horrible dreams till rubble
So if ya’ll listen a while and feel for a while
You’ll see our troubled life styles


Legend
I saw and I thought I was taught not to scream or hit these beings
As you hate me my love for you increases and hate is decreasing
I feel your pains but in the region of my brains. You see me fleeing
I saw the first fall on me when my dad hit her and I cried but not heard
My behavior was obedient but my life I thought was so damn absurd
I was shot for being stupid and I changed the fucking day it occurred
I was hit by my father but to fight back I thought not to even bother
Because I was warned that if I did it would of been said man slaughter
I was filled with hate for him and the day he beat my mother I saw her
Bloody in the face and saw the broken bones that broke my heart.
From that day forward I was living in the dark waiting to fucking spark.
Hate in my life is described as all but in little meaningful hateful parts.
Mom was now hooked on drugs so I was 4 in 9 families. All for the money
I was never loved in my life. I laugh but you know there was nothing funny
I had problems in life but I swear on my wife you’ll never ever see me running
All I wanted was respect and I would have given my life. Shit just to find true love
I was so close but I had to fucking shot him. Too late I already with blew up.
I was never like you going drunk to the kind of smutty bitches you would fuck
When the gat pops like you I will never duck. Take it like again like I did before
Now I’m done with you and don’t nothing to do with you. I won’t take no more


Dabatos
Have never felt the warmth in a new apartment...
At a young age, me and my parents departed..
Cold night's, shivering, no more life in me left..
So empty I could almost feel the finger tips of death..
Life full of regret, lost luv ones i'd never forget..
Everyday full of struggles, Never had a chance at rest..
It's like tryin to sprint when ur completely out of breathe..
Life's full of stress, destined to forever be depressed..
Life's just like chess, one mistake, you'll rought like the rest..
It's too late for me I guess since I never did progress..
Day after day, suffering from this hunger type of pain....
Lending out my hand, even beggin the poor to spare some change..
It's been year's since i had a sandwich or a boiling hot chocolate..
The only way to end my hunger is to add more scar's on my wrist..


My life is so troubled wish def doubled
Haunted by horrible dreams till rubble
So if ya’ll listen a while and feel for a while
You’ll see our troubled life styles



Ya'll know this is dope.
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Old 12-23-04, 07:17 PM   #2
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iight ya'll upping this shit.
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Old 12-23-04, 07:18 PM   #3
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Old 12-23-04, 07:20 PM   #4
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Old 12-23-04, 07:20 PM   #5
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How many do I need. I don't wanna get banned.
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Old 12-23-04, 07:22 PM   #6
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Old 12-23-04, 07:23 PM   #7
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lmao!! he's not even a mod.
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Old 12-23-04, 07:24 PM   #8
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But still it's a rule and he can get us banned. So I suggest we follow the rules.
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Old 12-23-04, 07:25 PM   #9
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Old 12-23-04, 07:26 PM   #10
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Dayum. This is gonna be hard to follow but what ever. I'll try my very best.
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Old 12-23-04, 10:23 PM   #11
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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Old 12-24-04, 05:39 AM   #12
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Chea. Uppyn. Quit snoozin.
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Old 12-27-04, 08:42 PM   #13
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Upping this shit.
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Old 12-27-04, 10:19 PM   #14
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kool i thought i was gonna write another verse lol...i woulda did it...o well...
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Old 12-28-04, 03:48 AM   #15
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lol yeah but why the FUCK NO ONE LEAVIN FEED BACK. You fucking SLUTS. weerd. I'll return da favor.
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