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Old 01-08-05, 11:14 PM   #1
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3,000,000 to the best person that can...

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Best person that can write a poem about a certain topic that i pick:

Topic: Your feelings about this person that you really like, your not really that sure if she likes you or not cuz of these unknown clues she gives u, but you also get clues that she doesn't like you, some clues are that she doesn't pick up your calls when she says call on a saturday, and some clues is that she talks to you so long on the phone after just meeting each other...

best writter gets 3,000,000
If its better then i want u'll get 5,000,000

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Old 01-08-05, 11:16 PM   #2
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Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?
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Old 01-08-05, 11:19 PM   #3
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I can do this...
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Old 01-09-05, 05:18 PM   #4
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Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?


actually, i wrote acouple of poems already, just go look in poetic scripture, so no im not lazy, and yes i like this girl, but i ain't gonna show no poem to her..
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Old 01-10-05, 12:03 AM   #5
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Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?


co-sign... lol.......
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Old 01-08-05, 11:17 PM   #6
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Umm... I could do that... but I won't.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 01-08-05, 11:20 PM   #7
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but you won't...
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Old 01-08-05, 11:22 PM   #8
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but you won't...

And i will do it
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Old 01-08-05, 11:21 PM   #9
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you cant ryhme? so it wouldn't be a poem? im confused...
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Old 01-08-05, 11:21 PM   #10
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you cant ryhme? so it wouldn't be a poem? im confused...

Not all poems rhyme
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Old 01-08-05, 11:31 PM   #11
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you cant ryhme? so it wouldn't be a poem? im confused...

dumbass... poems dont gotta rhyme........ i cant write poems..help em mwuhahahah
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Old 01-08-05, 11:59 PM   #12
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damn thats hard how can I not rhyme?its impossible..

umm...


Life's like.heat seeking......hidden signals..Invisible missles
(sorry but it goes with it)
going both ways..Bi-routed..emotions hoping for another path
as veiwing only extended phone calls as the week ends weakining muscles
including the strongest..helpful would be to think of me
as I ponder you..being two faced..but both are very pretty
think before action..your confusing my mind..you'r a brain teaser
giving me gestures and looks..so you can't blame me I'm innocent
is so..you're my shepord and Im the scapegoat..
your playing tug a war pushin me back and away..
you can't give me directions to the desert..so I'm not sure
but I can guess..I can dream..you can play..with my mind
with mindgames..although I don't know if you know..but I'm sure
I want you by my side..like..is just a word hands are a feeling
hands are your future..your the lines on my palms truthfully
but a truthful guess I know I'm don't know..its half your fault
and half mine.. I have and half mind..one side says approach
but your maybe gonna laugh..or you maybe gonna smile
you're your own woman..but your leesh has a blurred owner
you often are caught using mascare but make up your mind



damn its so god damn hard not to rhyme s I used semi-all metas

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Old 01-08-05, 11:23 PM   #13
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lol... I was being a smart ass....
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Old 01-08-05, 11:24 PM   #14
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lol... I was being a smart ass....

lol.......just like the good ol P.S.A days...
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Old 01-08-05, 11:28 PM   #15
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lol.......just like the good ol P.S.A days...

Yes... Same Thing Except Different.
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