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Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:43 PM.

Tephlon has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 08:45 PM.

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Close Ya mouth shorty, look at ya Rv house party, but u aint on the dick of Cali?
Fucker, even if you had ''6 Feet''..you aint catchin up ta Me
Saw ya picture, little bald whiteboy an u...Trynna be a Thug?!
I heard of family fun, son...But your into Motherly ''Love''
Its cool ''Bruv''...You just trynna hate 'Cause i know the True You
Cali hates an you follow...Like monkey see...an Whitey Do! (ha haaa)
what you got against My crew?...you couldnt even help them Elevate
now for somebody so dope.... an them bein ''herbs''...thats a shame MATE!
How the fuck are you ''Phat?!''...Ya skills like Snoop on a Diet
Fuck education, i'm goin Librarian on ya ass, so you can ''Be Quiet!''
Damnit! we should of gonn ''Pink Slip''...i wouldda signed wit'cha Blood
cause soon as its Shed, i could of left the site, an knew its ALL GOOD
what you know about hoodz? a 19 year old wit handouts from his Parents
ugly bitch, u couldnt get pussy at a whore-house Clearance!
claimin you got a Girl............ yet your addicted ta Net Beef
only time this pussy is ever ''shit''...is when his mouth Queefz!

Explanations:
Lins provided for the opening 2 bars, but the second bar an the line ''motherly love'' thing, he said somthin in the ''6 feet tryouts'' that implied he has sex with his own mom lol

The elevation line & my crew, he claims he left my crew because of the ''herbs'' when it was his idea ta bring them in an help kats elevate LOL.

oh...an if y'all didnt kjnow already, he is on Caliz dick, check his o.m'z, he rides cali, he followed Cali into the crew, he copied Caliz sig, hell he wants ta be Cali LOL

thats all, if ya dont understand nothin, dont vote...an dont vot on who u like better, vote on the personals an punchlines...an the actual rhymes, an no hate votes or they will be automatially Dq'ed.

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crunk, crunk

good luck Solo.....................

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FAKE PERSONALS LIKE WHOA!!!!!!

nowhere did i imply i have sex with my mom, i implied you have sex with yours dumbass

and for your information CALI copied my sig, cuz he IM'ed me askin how i did it!!!!

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Voted For: Solo

Close Ya mouth shorty, look at ya Rv house party, but u aint on the dick of Cali?
Fucker, even if you had ''6 Feet''..you aint catchin up ta Me
—5…1st line was wack..2nd line was good
Saw ya picture, little bald whiteboy an u...Trynna be a Thug?!
I heard of family fun, son...But your into Motherly ''Love''
—4…blah punch, not hard
Its cool ''Bruv''...You just trynna hate 'Cause i know the True You
Cali hates an you follow...Like monkey see...an Whitey Do! (ha haaa)
—6…eh, nice punch
what you got against My crew?...you couldnt even help them Elevate
now for somebody so dope.... an them bein ''herbs''...thats a shame MATE!
—4…mate? …meh I don’t think he’s Australian, weak punch
How the fuck are you ''Phat?!''...Ya skills like Snoop on a Diet
Fuck education, i'm goin Librarian on ya ass, so you can ''Be Quiet!''
—5…decent punch
Damnit! we should of gonn ''Pink Slip''...i wouldda signed wit'cha Blood
cause soon as its Shed, i could of left the site, an knew its ALL GOOD
—5…punch was okay
what you know about hoodz? a 19 year old wit handouts from his Parents
ugly bitch, u couldnt get pussy at a whore-house Clearance!
—6…pretty decent here
claimin you got a Girl............ yet your addicted ta Net Beef
only time this pussy is ever ''shit''...is when his mouth Queefz!
—4…not really feelin this one

overall…u had a pretty decent drop, better than ur verse against
me the 2nd time, came wit pretty decent punches, good personas &
decent vocab, overall u had an aight drop though…36

This dude took special-ed, but he failed before he started…
That’s why when he speaks he sounds more than just retarded…
—6…nice punch here, & opener
Ya blow more than the big bad wolf tryin to bring down the house…
Why else do ya think that Teph claims to be the mouth of the south…
—5…eh this one was okay
Can’t stick as a vet Teph, that’s why ya begged for a rookie award, yeah…
Tikz thinkin ya deserve shit, only fame ya get is reppin nike sportswear…
—5…good multies…decent punch
I got a question Teph, tell me how many people on RV hate on you fool…
Take an educated guess….oh shit!! I forgot you dropped out of school…
—6…pretty nice here
We playin poker ‘n’ this ace thinks he’s high, but ya got fucked hands…
Can’t punch a line so ya signed out the league to watch from the stands…
—6…nice here, punch connected
Bring in ya Tikz, like a dog I’ll scratch em out until there’s none of ‘em…
Talkin about I got dickriders, Teph should know becuz he’s one of ‘em…
—5…pretty decent, was feelin this one
Tikz are known as hoes cuz Teph does his advertising from curbs…
Tephlon so talented he got dq’ed from the KORV for biting from herbz…
—6…good persona, punch was good
ShottaBOY grew to dopeMAN but a Buck.Shot had Esco-Layde fast…
Rip Tephlon’s names and alias in one bar, so in closing………KizMihAss…
—8…omg dope punch, ur best line in here, & good personas

overall… u had a nice drop, punches here connected, some here okay…
the structure was decent, had some multies up in there, ur closer was the
best punch in ur drop, & the vocab was aight, but overall ur drop was good…
47

no hate…

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Voted For: Tephlon

Its cool ''Bruv''...You just trynna hate 'Cause i know the True You
Cali hates an you follow...Like monkey see...an Whitey Do! (ha haaa)
ugly bitch, u couldnt get pussy at a whore-house Clearance!
^^^
good shit here this wins you the battle, but all those explanations at the bottom are dumb to have

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solo's
This dude took special-ed, but he failed before he started…
That’s why when he speaks he sounds more than just retarded…
^^^kinda funny, but thats bout all i liked outta ya verse. decent wordplay, and personal attempts but nothin hit well at all i dont think.

no hate... good read

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hump this like a bitch................votes people

favour will be returned so stop being lazy fuckas!!!!

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should be a close battle.......

i knew when i saw the name ''skirpitz'' he would of voted for you LOL...

Anyway, its all good, i aint trynna bitch an whine, good luck, if u k.o me in this particular battle, there is seriously somthin wrong wit the voting around here, u gotta admit that

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^^^ not really cuz ya got like 2 fake personals at least

cuz like i said, i never implied shit about fuckin my own mom
and CALI copied my scrollin sig, not the other way round................

but other than that it was a nice verse, a lot better than last time!!!!

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Voted For: Solo

Solo

This dude took special-ed, but he failed before he started…
That’s why when he speaks he sounds more than just retarded…
^retarded stuff is always funny, coo opener

Ya blow more than the big bad wolf tryin to bring down the house…
Why else do ya think that Teph claims to be the mouth of the south…
^haha, damnnnnn…hot personal!

Can’t stick as a vet Teph, that’s why ya begged for a rookie award, yeah…
Tikz thinkin ya deserve shit, only fame ya get is reppin nike sportswear…
^nice bar

I got a question Teph, tell me how many people on RV hate on you fool…
Take an educated guess….oh shit!! I forgot you dropped out of school…
^lmao…bold one…

We playin poker ‘n’ this ace thinks he’s high, but ya got fucked hands…
Can’t punch a line so ya signed out the league to watch from the stands…
^dope wordplay and such, punch as well

Bring in ya Tikz, like a dog I’ll scratch em out until there’s none of ‘em…
Talkin about I got dickriders, Teph should know becuz he’s one of ‘em…
^funny funny…

Tikz are known as hoes cuz Teph does his advertising from curbs…
Tephlon so talented he got dq’ed from the KORV for biting from herbz…
^haha, again dope personal! U did ya research hehe…

ShottaBOY grew to dopeMAN but a Buck.Shot had Esco-Layde fast…
Rip Tephlon’s names and alias in one bar, so in closing………KizMihAss…
^damn, way to rep all his names in one bar…great closer

Had a nice verse right here, stayed well consistent with the hardhitting punches as well as the dope personals. Was really feeling your flow, had that on lock for sure and your vocab was excellent. Structure was cool, opened with fire and ended with it too. No real weak fillers in it, good rhymes too…overall great verse!

Tephlon

Close Ya mouth shorty, look at ya Rv house party, but u aint on the dick of Cali?
Fucker, even if you had ''6 Feet''..you aint catchin up ta Me
^hehe nice opener

Saw ya picture, little bald whiteboy an u...Trynna be a Thug?!
I heard of family fun, son...But your into Motherly ''Love''
^bold personal right here

Its cool ''Bruv''...You just trynna hate 'Cause i know the True You
Cali hates an you follow...Like monkey see...an Whitey Do! (ha haaa)
^calling racist card here huh? Lolz, it’s funny though

what you got against My crew?...you couldnt even help them Elevate
now for somebody so dope.... an them bein ''herbs''...thats a shame MATE!
^uhm no real punch

How the fuck are you ''Phat?!''...Ya skills like Snoop on a Diet
Fuck education, i'm goin Librarian on ya ass, so you can ''Be Quiet!''
^good wordplay

Damnit! we should of gonn ''Pink Slip''...i wouldda signed wit'cha Blood
cause soon as its Shed, i could of left the site, an knew its ALL GOOD
^not feeling this bar, no offense

what you know about hoodz? a 19 year old wit handouts from his Parents
ugly bitch, u couldnt get pussy at a whore-house Clearance!
^hmmmm okay okay…

claimin you got a Girl............ yet your addicted ta Net Beef
only time this pussy is ever ''shit''...is when his mouth Queefz!
^coo closer

Nice one right here as well, but I feel you kinda fell off towards the end…The other stuff was pure fire though, good wordplay here and there, got them personals coming hard and the punches were cool. Creativity was there, flow was on point, structure and vocab were good.

In the end my vote goes to Solo because I feel he stayed more consistent, laughed a bit more at his lines but both had a very nice verse and this was a great battle y’all
And no Teph, this ain’t no hate vote nor dickriding…I read it few times, was close but this is my decision.

Removed by her request

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