Battle Rules:

6 lines
1 day check
1 day drop
3-0 Ko / 4-1 ko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-26-05 at 11:51 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Mc KassaNova has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-25-05 11:52 AM.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-25-05 11:55 AM.

ima punch em and Watch-As-My-Fist-Morph and leave em Scared-With-My-Shits-Gore//
so dont you notice? "Stanza A Small Threat" like TERRORIST DWARVES//.....Haha

ill Stash-Ya-In-Crates cus im like "Comedian Pophets" ill bring Laughter-To-Your-Fate//
I dont even have to Ask-Ya-Fake cuz truth is "ill leave ya on your knees" like my bitches After-A-Date//

Im Raw-With-Such Scripts Ta Make U Crawl-With-Cuts//
cuz even if i "Tied" u to a "Fist, Stencil" u still couldnt Draw-A-Punch!!!//


1. "Small Threat"="Terrorist Dwarves"
2. Self Explainable
3.He Couldn't Draw A Punch If He drew Around a Stencil Shaped as a fist

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Voted For: Mc KassaNova

This Dude Is Lyrically Capable Of Nuttin So Ill Jus Watch Him Easily Rot
Maybe One Day he'll Get Ghanarea in His Ass So His Shit Can Really Be Hot
-weak-
This dude Been a Free Agent For A While Now and He still Aint Been Got
Man Ill Pack Your Punchez In a Cooler.........or Ill Just put Yo P's in a Pot
-weak
You Gone Die Over The Net With My Punchez Taking Over These Curves
You From Detroit?....so You Never be The Champ Like My Name was Spurs
-decent

:comments:....ya verse was pretty weak....the last line was the only decent one you had....

ima punch em and Watch-As-My-Fist-Morph and leave em Scared-With-My-Shits-Gore//
so dont you notice? "Stanza A Small Threat" like TERRORIST DWARVES//.....Haha
-funni, but kinda played

ill Stash-Ya-In-Crates cus im like "Comedian Pophets" ill bring Laughter-To-Your-Fate//
I dont even have to Ask-Ya-Fake cuz truth is "ill leave ya on your knees" like my bitches After-A-Date//
-nyce multis....punches was decent
Im Raw-With-Such Scripts Ta Make U Crawl-With-Cuts//
cuz even if i "Tied" u to a "Fist, Stencil" u still couldnt Draw-A-Punch!!!//
-i see where you was going, but the set up was bad....

v/MC....better punches and kept me entertained....Stanza's was boring and mainly weak


Crew vote removed

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Do You think Im Dumb or some shit thats a damn crew Vote Man

Voted For: Stanza

This Dude Is Lyrically Capable Of Nuttin So Ill Jus Watch Him Easily Rot
Maybe One Day he'll Get Ghanarea in His Ass So His Shit Can Really Be Hot
^^OK
This dude Been a Free Agent For A While Now and He still Aint Been Got
Man Ill Pack Your Punchez In a Cooler.........or Ill Just put Yo P's in a Pot
^^^OK
You Gone Die Over The Net With My Punchez Taking Over These Curves
You From Detroit?....so You Never be The Champ Like My Name was Spurs
^^very uncreative

Well 2 punches were OK....not spectacular.....but OK.That last one is as uncreative as it gets.But u didn't need to come hard.U ripped this cat easily.


ima punch em and watchs-My-Fist-Morph and leave em Scared-With-My-Shits-Gore//
so dont you notice? "Stanza A Small Threat" like TERRORIST DWARVES//.....Haha
^^whack....why say haha at end?
ill Stash-Ya-In-Crates cus im like "Comedian Pophets" ill bring Laughter-To-Your-Fate//
I dont even have to Ask-Ya-Fake cuz truth is "ill leave ya on your knees" like my bitches After-A-Date//
^^wat ya date gotta do with this battle
Im Raw-With-Such Scripts Ta Make U Crawl-With-Cuts//
cuz even if i "Tied" u to a "Fist, Stencil" u still couldnt Draw-A-Punch!!!//
^^^whack

Next time try not to stretch ur lines out.Structure ur shit better so it's looks better.It was ugly.Ur punches suck and I dun have to say why because ur verse says it all.

Vote-Stanza(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196531

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Voted For: Stanza

This Dude Is Lyrically Capable Of Nuttin So Ill Jus Watch Him Easily Rot
Maybe One Day he'll Get Ghanarea in His Ass So His Shit Can Really Be Hot
decent opener
This dude Been a Free Agent For A While Now and He still Aint Been Got
Man Ill Pack Your Punchez In a Cooler.........or Ill Just put Yo P's in a Pot
punch was aight
You Gone Die Over The Net With My Punchez Taking Over These Curves
You From Detroit?....so You Never be The Champ Like My Name was Spurs
coo closer


ima punch em and Watch-As-My-Fist-Morph and leave em Scared-With-My-Shits-Gore//
so dont you notice? "Stanza A Small Threat" like TERRORIST DWARVES//.....Haha
decent
ill Stash-Ya-In-Crates cus im like "Comedian Pophets" ill bring Laughter-To-Your-Fate//
I dont even have to Ask-Ya-Fake cuz truth is "ill leave ya on your knees" like my bitches After-A-Date//
weak
Im Raw-With-Such Scripts Ta Make U Crawl-With-Cuts//
cuz even if i "Tied" u to a "Fist, Stencil" u still couldnt Draw-A-Punch!!!//
this line was a lil played

overall Stanza took this battle.. punches were just
harder, the structure was in place, & the flow was
aight here, Mc K, work on ur structure & lower ur flow
too, ur punches were pretty str8 but u could’ve made
them harder than that tho..

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Voted For: Stanza


Stanza
Aiight Dawg Nice Shit Here punches Was Tight You Had Alot Of Good Wordplay In Here, Your Structure Was Good All Lines Lined Up, You Had Some Good Personals Meta's Was Of The CHain Bruh Good Shits Here

MC
Naw Man You Had Some Okay Punches ANd Wordplay But Didn't Touch Stanza's Verse At All Dawg Get A New Game Structure Was Whacked, Personals Was A No No, Vocab Was Aiight Not Good ENough To Beat Stanza Man

VOte Stanza

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