|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|
07-06-05, 04:19 PM
|
#1
|
|
|
Middle Weight
|
Diss To Animosity
IP:
DISS TO ANIMOSITY
ANIMOSITY your plan is an atrocity you stand with curiosity Knowing your velocity is slow and like cheap oil your viscosity Boil under heat so you can’t toil and thunder streets with stamina You poke and jab but a joke with vocab so your grammar Has no glamour you spit the verbs of herds stuff don’t hammer Microphones like Mike Jones your type gone with the wind Like Clark Gable you don’t spark fable, heart not able to blend My friend, you only glitter with yuppies even with a litter Of puppies you bark long, art wrong can’t uplift this critter Need stronger juice you no longer produce good rhymes Should resign as the man who never prospered with his lines I offer you hope but you came softer with quote best accept My help then step with pride, missed the appointment overslept You need practice don’t front whackness is up this month Look never test a winner you can only be a guest at my dinner Best wipe feets before you enter |
|
|
|
07-06-05, 04:27 PM
|
#2
|
||
|
Champion
|
IP:
DONT YOU FUCKIN GET IT YET
Youre shit is weak...you need to elevate so much and stop makin these stupid diss tracks..............THEY SUCKKKKKKKKKK Look never test a winner you can only be a guest at my dinner Best wipe feets before you enter WHAT THE HELL IS THIS
__________________
www.soundclick.com/dollaback
|
||
 
|
|
|
07-06-05, 05:57 PM
|
#4
|
||
|
www.militantmusic.com
|
IP:
I offer you hope but you came softer with quote best accept
My help then step with pride, missed the appointment overslept ^^^^ur weak face the facts be a man and admit it
__________________
Clcik Hear To Hear My Music |
||
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 06:03 PM
|
#5
|
|
|
The Rise
|
IP:
yo this shit wasnt good it was wack but good concept...yup...just work on ya shit or just stop rapping its yur decission?...2/10....~1~
|
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 06:49 PM
|
#6
|
|
|
Middle Weight
|
IP:
Hey Man These Cats Can't Multi-rhyme That's Why They Act So Stupid On This Site Right Here None Of These Cats Even Close To My Ability Ask Any Pllatinum Artist About Them Multi's You Cats Are A Bunch Of Whack Fuck That Can't Multi-rhyme
|
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 07:38 PM
|
#7
|
|||
|
IP:
Quote:
. . . . . . i think we should call OMB over here and teach this wack ass a lesson.... |
|||
|
|
|
|
07-07-05, 12:38 AM
|
#8
|
|||
|
I have a lot to learn...
|
IP:
Quote:
Your shit is wack... And I aint even trying to beef with you, its just the truth. And your shit will stay wack unless you realise your faults. No point sayin people dont understand your multis and arent close to your level... I understand multis, and yours are forced... real forced... theres very little sense in that whole verse. And I bet you aint even gonna realise that... Youre just gonna tell me im wack and I dont understand it. Bnd if you do that, you wont get any better... Instead of talkin defensive shit and getting insulted when someone points out a fault, try to improve it...
__________________
|
|||
|
|
|
07-06-05, 07:34 PM
|
#9
|
||
|
a.k.a prozak
|
IP:
lmfao....yeah u got the skills ta sign shady/aftermath
 u just fuckin retarded get a fuckin life and realize what the fuck ur doin..oh he's merked cuz he's invited as a guest for dinner  |
||
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 08:15 PM
|
#10
|
||
|
in your system
|
IP:
Need stronger juice you no longer produce good rhymes
Should resign as the man who never prospered with his lines ^ i laughed at this line...although it does kinda contradict itself, if you think about it...
__________________
this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
||
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 09:03 PM
|
#11
|
|
|
Middle Weight
|
IP:
Straight Off The Hook Yall Cats Use Played Out Shit I Come With New Shit Every Damn Day
|
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 09:22 PM
|
#12
|
|
|
IP:
Drop a link to an OM you have left feedback on or this will be closed
__________________
The Competition
 |
|
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 09:48 PM
|
#13
|
||
|
ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
|
IP:
damn, son.... thought the whole thing was a run-on sentence... had to backtrack to figure out what the hell you were talking about... some shit didn't even make sense... that viscosity line was terrible... ya multies need adjusting... there is a tut on this on the main page... find it... use it... for a diss it was n't hard-hitting at all... no real punches... you gotta put some real truth behind ya shit to make it connect... all you did was basically freestyle some shyt that kinda sorta sounded aiight together... that ain't gon cut it... if you gon diss someone publicly you need to come at 'em hard or stay on the porch, nah mean?... no hate... just real talks...
3/10
__________________
 CLICK DA SIGGY  "real recognize real but still others remain jaded believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated: wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |
||
|
|
|
07-06-05, 09:55 PM
|
#14
|
|
|
Middle Weight
|
IP:
my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198432
cats should wake up and compare themselves before talking doe |
|
|
|
|
07-06-05, 10:06 PM
|
#15
|
||
|
www.militantmusic.com
|
IP:
your right you do come out with new shit every day...new wack shit that people tell is wack but u still think your a hot piece of shit...fuck off with these lil open mics
__________________
Clcik Hear To Hear My Music |
||
|
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Hybrid Mode
