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09-18-05, 04:59 AM | #1 | |||
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Implicit - Be You
IP: 28AD 5545
This a track I was supposed to do with RV_Iz_Boot_E but he took too long. So I did it myself. It's me on both verses. The hook aint in it because I'm not sure what I'm going to use there.
http://reflekt.dmusic.com I left feed on Ethan Hawke's Lonely Remix and Leady's Tony Green diss. |
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09-18-05, 03:08 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
Can I Get Some Feed?
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09-18-05, 10:53 PM | #3 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
Word this is better than i thought. Sick flow and who did the beat? It's fire. I could drop a hook and verse on this if you want. ordness. This was ill your flow got me though. I loved it.
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09-18-05, 11:44 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 7F50 B16E
first up, props for Dmusic, lol. Listneing thorugh Audio Tehnica STH-M40fs studio monitor headphones:
The beat's cool. Ememinm-y. The flow is off sometimes, as in too many words in one bar. First verse was cool cept for those parts. Your emotion is close to "on" which makes it slightly "off". That and partly again because of the textflow bars it sounds liek you start off beat at times (or more appropriately, off snare) but you never end off beat. You jsut rush all the syls in there to get to to though. Oh yeah, and your mic's ass, so youre "almost on" emotion actualy sounds like "definitely off" on a better mic. Or at least anything better than an SM47. I think you should practice some other tracks, listen to rappers whos styles you want to emcompass, thne come back to this and re-record it. You'll be shocked at the difference cuz you're too close to "on" to stop. One.
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09-18-05, 11:54 PM | #5 | |||
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IP: 28AD 5545
^Thanks for the advice. Will do.
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09-19-05, 12:05 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 259E 7199
it wasnt bad, i liked it dude, props...no hook though thats a shame, but it was still good without it. nice work
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09-19-05, 12:06 AM | #7 | |||||
Never Around
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IP: B07B 1CF4
Implicit whats your aim.
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09-19-05, 12:10 AM | #8 | |||||
Never Around
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IP: B07B 1CF4
Oh and your audio, You sound like me damn....But not quite as dope yet
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09-19-05, 12:11 AM | #9 | |||
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IP: 28AD 5545
My Aim - Meehahaha
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09-19-05, 03:45 AM | #10 | ||||||
HAHAHAHAH!..i onno
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IP: 1D2D 3134
^LOL @ your aim...
but anyway..i liked it, i thought is would be lacking for your first Audio, but it was nice, straight flow, really nice beat..keep yea audio up man, keep improving..
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09-19-05, 07:50 AM | #11 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 5260 6D8C
i made a verse and i like it, lol holla at me, oh and the song is fucking dope, who made the beat? anyway dope track
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09-19-05, 07:51 AM | #12 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 5260 6D8C
add me on aim: louistown
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09-19-05, 02:58 PM | #13 | |||
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanks for the feed. If you got any links you want me to leave feed on then drop them in here.
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09-19-05, 06:45 PM | #14 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 28AD 5545
dope man, you got a lil jin voice goin on lol j/p....felt it was hott liked it all...beat was dope......felt it was harsh how you said retard...lol j/p...werd man rtf some how
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09-19-05, 07:47 PM | #15 | |||
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanks for the feed. and i'll return the favor on your battle.
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