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11-14-05, 05:09 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Doc "Trin"- What Hapened To the Love
IP: 9CF2 2208
This is the first audio ive posted on here... so yall kats can hear me... im 15 voice is young but it shoulnt matter..
Left feed On. Prey For Me UNF Intermental Per se The Gig will appear No were liek the UK UNF Song- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3091063
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11-14-05, 05:14 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
spelled my own name wrong lol
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11-14-05, 06:12 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
up fags.........
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11-14-05, 06:16 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
com on..........
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11-14-05, 06:17 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
Like this beat..my kinda shit
you come in nice..flows pretty cool.. do fall off in a few places..but this track has a nice vibe..you seem a little shakey on the mic tho...but cool stuff dude |
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11-14-05, 06:19 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
rft on my IS IT WORTH IT track dude
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11-14-05, 06:43 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
ty for feed ......
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11-14-05, 08:04 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
up......................
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11-14-05, 09:23 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
feed u gays....
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11-14-05, 09:37 PM | #10 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
peepin now...
Production:The production was decent..to many beats like this these days:6/10 ====== Flow:ya flow was decent....it fit the beat well..aint too bad fam-7/10 =========== Pressense:I was feeling it all the way through you didnt have enuff change ups tho-7/10 ======= Quality:Ya quality was ehh alright i suppose - 7/10 ====== Lyrics:Ya lyrics were pretty straight...weren't too bad...-7/10 ======== Overall:this track was pretty tight..i'm feeling it...keep these coming. -7/10 I Was feelin it keep um coming |
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11-15-05, 06:47 AM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
come on for feed
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11-15-05, 11:49 AM | #12 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: D40B A0C1
Aight Listenin
Like The Beat Deliverys Nice Good Shit,Your Voice Fits Presence is nice How Long u been Rappin Audio Hook Gets Lil Repetetive But Its Nice Lyrics Are Good Emotions Nice Good Track 8/10 Stay Up
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11-15-05, 03:04 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
ive been doing audio for about 2 years.... hit me up for a colllab sum time^
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11-15-05, 03:48 PM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
up...................
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11-15-05, 04:13 PM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: 75ED D0E0
i like the beat. the flow wasnt bad......you sound kinda like chris brown lol. run it run it....anyways lol. you dont sound very confident on the mic....its good start but you need to work on your delivery / emotion...especially on this type of track. lyrics were aiight...you could up your vocab. im not really feelin the hook. you need something a lil more catchy. but overall it wasnt a bad track
id appreciate if you could hit this up: O.V.Dose ft. Detox - Home of the Cougars
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Songs: O.V.Dose - Saturday Night Fever Battles: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/ovdosemusic.htm Last edited by O.V.Dose : 11-15-05 at 04:27 PM. |
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