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Old 05-07-06, 10:40 AM   #1
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Old 05-07-06, 10:42 AM   #2
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Old 05-07-06, 12:43 PM   #3
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Old 05-07-06, 04:38 PM   #4
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wanna drop tonight? if u busy dats str8
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Old 05-07-06, 06:13 PM   #5
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I can probably drop tonight. If not tonight, then Tuesday (because I have to work Monday). I'm about to go to my mom's house, so when I get there if I see that you posted, I'll post. If not then we can just both post by Tuesday.
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Old 05-07-06, 08:39 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by precize
rexless career so short he needs ladders to reach his fans..
im the zeus of rap, no wonder all my lines are greek to dan..


Quote:
Originally Posted by mimesis
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make




for bein a swagger jagger, your gonna be receivin smacks..
zeus of the league??
more like Martyr of LBL, cause ur gettin crucifed for believen that..


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Originally Posted by mimesis
Lmao @ this.

You guys make it sound as if a hogwash/mom or hogwash/girlfriend concepts are original or freshly dope. I've recycled that same line 4 other times. . I can get links if need be.




jus gettin started, i would drop some more lines..
but you would take
them like a "Champ" Too..and then go Re-use um 3 or 4 Times..
after this match you'll be ruined, i wont even let your ass speak..
im bringin sumthin fresh to the Table, but you'll prolly Feed off it like last week..
mimes heads gettin big with all these wins hes tastein..
but after this his Ego Trip, ul be a Meer National Lampoon Vacation..
look mime jus STFU and take after your fine click..
cause your Skills so lost...google couldnt even find it..
dont u think u should come with that weak wordplay jus a tad less..
gon be a shutout..
cause mime tryed to Take it to da house and forgot his address..
yea your ill, i'll believe that if u bring a point..
only wants to go 20, u prolly got a job..
but this fag should be used to juggling two Things at once..
dont see whats so great about a mime verse, but all these cocks love it..
no fist fighter..
last time he talked with his hands..it involved sock puppets..
throwin punches, till your winning chance goes dim..
hes gonna get floored so much..a b-boy could break dance on him..
put the heat to ya grill and let it burn in ya face..
this loss..
ul hav mime seein 6-1 so quick, roger maris ul turn in his grave..

g/l....

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Old 05-10-06, 05:16 PM   #7
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Lmao. I think it's pretty gay to research posts that people make on THIS site, pick out only the sentences that you need to make a punch, and then take the post out of context. . but now you're following me around on OTHER sites too? Way to take the faggotry up a level. .

Quote:
Originally Posted by Precize
rexless career so short he needs ladders to reach his fans..
im the zeus of rap, no wonder all my lines are greek to dan..


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make


The league knows you're a bitch. . and you will get wrecked, cause. .
You take pride in having your BEST punches summed up in my set ups
Shouldn't step up. . it'd be best if you just dropped the pen, queer
Cause I'd take this league down to Cize. .
. .but I'd need a shovel and about ten years
You're fucking hopeless. . not on my level, you're getting sonned but yo
You'll catch so many Hits From The Streets BET'll pay you to run the show
I'll murder you. . guns, knives, bats, nines. . ha, this kids just wack dude
Now it's in the hands of the judges. .
. .which just means you're going to get bitchslapped too
I'll keep hitting your fucking fat ass. . chubby, I sound the sickest. .
So when you brace for impact every damn dentist will go out of business
Who the fuck you think you are?. . just watch son, you're the worst
But you aren't full of shit. . cause you just dropped some in your verse
It's done. . believe it's true, I'm beating you. . just ownin' your ass
I don't plan to Cize up. . cause you won't get one vote in this match
Just look at the mags and stats. . we all know you're just dull and rattled
I'm power ranked 1. .
. .you're just able to power out 1 quotable per battle
This is over. . I can't believe all the bullshit I've heard from this guy
If your Pre-size. . that just means your smaller then words can describe
So fuck it. . but let me close this out, and I don't mean to be rude kid. .
But your claim to fame is having me flip your concept. .
. .10 times fucking better than you did

And no, nothing I posted was feeding off of his verse.
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Old 05-10-06, 05:30 PM   #8
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dope verse mime.....lets get some votes
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Old 05-10-06, 05:38 PM   #9
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yea your ill, i'll believe that if u bring a point..
only wants to go 20, u prolly got a job..
but this fag should be used to juggling two Things at once..

vs.

Shouldn't step up. . it'd be best if you just dropped the pen, queer
Cause I'd take this league down to Cize. .
. .but I'd need a shovel and about ten years
I'll keep hitting your fucking fat ass. . chubby, I sound the sickest. .
So when you brace for impact every damn dentist will go out of business
Who the fuck you think you are?. . just watch son, you're the worst
But you aren't full of shit. . cause you just dropped some in your verse
It's done. . believe it's true, I'm beating you. . just ownin' your ass
I don't plan to Cize up. . cause you won't get one vote in this match
Just look at the mags and stats. . we all know you're just dull and rattled
I'm power ranked 1. .
. .you're just able to power out 1 quotable per battle


Onesided, sorry Precize you just came to simple you have some okay concepts nuffin to great you just need to work on wording them better. Mime is more experienced with his so he dropped nice. Good solid verse barely any flaws in my opinion. Basically, Mime took it off consistentcy.

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Old 05-10-06, 06:00 PM   #10
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dont see whats so great about a mime verse, but all these cocks love it..
no fist fighter..
last time he talked with his hands..it involved sock puppets..

vs

The league knows you're a bitch. . and you will get wrecked, cause. .
You take pride in having your BEST punches summed up in my set ups
Shouldn't step up. . it'd be best if you just dropped the pen, queer
Cause I'd take this league down to Cize. .
. .but I'd need a shovel and about ten years
I'll keep hitting your fucking fat ass. . chubby, I sound the sickest. .
So when you brace for impact every damn dentist will go out of business
Just look at the mags and stats. . we all know you're just dull and rattled
I'm power ranked 1. .
. .you're just able to power out 1 quotable per battle
^harsh but true.

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Old 05-10-06, 06:59 PM   #11
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dont see whats so great about a mime verse, but all these cocks love it..
no fist fighter..
last time he talked with his hands..it involved sock puppets..

vs.

The league knows you're a bitch. . and you will get wrecked, cause. .
You take pride in having your BEST punches summed up in my set ups
Shouldn't step up. . it'd be best if you just dropped the pen, queer
Cause I'd take this league down to Cize. .
. .but I'd need a shovel and about ten years
You're fucking hopeless. . not on my level, you're getting sonned but yo
You'll catch so many Hits From The Streets BET'll pay you to run the show
I'll keep hitting your fucking fat ass. . chubby, I sound the sickest. .
So when you brace for impact every damn dentist will go out of business
Just look at the mags and stats. . we all know you're just dull and rattled
I'm power ranked 1. .
. .you're just able to power out 1 quotable per battle
This is over. . I can't believe all the bullshit I've heard from this guy
If your Pre-size. . that just means your smaller then words can describe
So fuck it. . but let me close this out, and I don't mean to be rude kid. .
But your claim to fame is having me flip your concept. .
. .10 times fucking better than you did

mime so easy. dude, precize. wtf? i thought u were so much more better than this. no real punches at him, alot of threats or just jokes. you definately need to come more harsh and actually diss your opponent. look, this is text, not a street battle. look, i had to learn that to. that means you gotta word them punches with some kind of impact. keep trying, dukes. but mime, great verse. ran through homeboy and what not. good job on your part.

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Old 05-10-06, 07:05 PM   #12
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V/ Mim

sorry, but im not quoting anything

Mim won this incredibly easily
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Old 05-10-06, 07:56 PM   #13
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after this match you'll be ruined, i wont even let your ass speak..
im bringin sumthin fresh to the Table, but you'll prolly Feed off it like last week..
look mime jus STFU and take after your fine click..
cause your Skills so lost...google couldnt even find it..
dont see whats so great about a mime verse, but all these cocks love it..
no fist fighter..
last time he talked with his hands..it involved sock puppets..

vs

The league knows you're a bitch. . and you will get wrecked, cause. .
You take pride in having your BEST punches summed up in my set ups
You're fucking hopeless. . not on my level, you're getting sonned but yo
You'll catch so many Hits From The Streets BET'll pay you to run the show
Who the fuck you think you are?. . just watch son, you're the worst
But you aren't full of shit. . cause you just dropped some in your verse
It's done. . believe it's true, I'm beating you. . just ownin' your ass
I don't plan to Cize up. . cause you won't get one vote in this match
Just look at the mags and stats. . we all know you're just dull and rattled
I'm power ranked 1. .
. .you're just able to power out 1 quotable per battle
So fuck it. . but let me close this out, and I don't mean to be rude kid. .
But your claim to fame is having me flip your concept. .
. .10 times fucking better than you did


Eh..

Pre – 3
Mim – 6

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Old 05-10-06, 10:42 PM   #14
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after this match you'll be ruined, i wont even let your ass speak..
im bringin sumthin fresh to the Table, but you'll prolly Feed off it like last week..
cause mime tryed to Take it to da house and forgot his address..
yea your ill, i'll believe that if u bring a point..
only wants to go 20, u prolly got a job..
but this fag should be used to juggling two Things at once..
dont see whats so great about a mime verse, but all these cocks love it..
no fist fighter..
last time he talked with his hands..it involved sock puppets..
(3, they weren't really that great though)

vs.

Shouldn't step up. . it'd be best if you just dropped the pen, queer
Cause I'd take this league down to Cize. .
. .but I'd need a shovel and about ten years
I'll keep hitting your fucking fat ass. . chubby, I sound the sickest. .
So when you brace for impact every damn dentist will go out of business
Who the fuck you think you are?. . just watch son, you're the worst
But you aren't full of shit. . cause you just dropped some in your verse
Just look at the mags and stats. . we all know you're just dull and rattled
I'm power ranked 1. .
. .you're just able to power out 1 quotable per battle
So fuck it. . but let me close this out, and I don't mean to be rude kid. .
But your claim to fame is having me flip your concept. .
. .10 times fucking better than you did
(5)

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Old 05-11-06, 01:32 AM   #15
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Shouldn't step up. . it'd be best if you just dropped the pen, queer
Cause I'd take this league down to Cize. .
. .but I'd need a shovel and about ten years
^^
this line is very closely biten or recycled
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