yeah, lets go
mine will be up shortly, beat me to it and you can pick the line limit

Check Move.....

im throwin 10........

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sorry playboy, 16 lines Im dropping, but
dont worry bout it enjoy ya birthday.......
Ill take it from here







lol right?

They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Look
Stop writing or reciting songs, And understand you aint a vet
...............Just hung around this fucking site too long
Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas
What you expected, warm hugs? these kicks stick to your ribs now
He'll hit the Bricks fast enough to knock Redmans crib down
And Happy Birthday, but dont post none of those rhyme lines, fool
Or I' ma give this 20/20....... like Prime Time News


*Throws birthday cake on the floor, crip walks on it*

*Pix cake up and Smacks u wit it....and Pulls u Back In by ya shirt *

Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle
So Pussy Stop Frontin..like u Holdin Sumtin Skinny Mofo tryna Flex
Observin a Pick Up Game Only Time Nebody Say your whats Next
This 2 Easy.... im writein this wit Out Lookin so call it a No Looka
This time u gettin Fucked and Burned
Like you was on a 30 Day..... Unprotected Rendeavu With a Hooka
I bet you Wrote ya Battle at School and got suspended for Cussin
Ill Smack u wit a "Taco" and Ring ya "Bell"
And go 2 Jail...........For attempt Murder of Eddie Guerrero's Cousin
Fuck what you Had...Ya Lost It Fag......Cuz like ya HotShh ya Asss
Ima Piston that'll Pop ya "Bubble" ....Like tha otha 23 from the Cav's
You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On

*Smacks u and Eats tha Cake u Paid 4.....*

*Nuff Said*



4 tha "Bubble" line...Lebron James has his Own Bubble Gum

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*Pix cake up and Smacks u wit it....and Pulls u Back In by ya shirt *
^^lmao at that

good battle, upping for votes

edit:from NY, but close enough

Ny ....New Jersey same shit.....

good Battle Son./....

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cool battle

N.Tavarez fav lines


They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,

Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas

had some played shit like bricks and lifes a bitch line..rest of the verse was solid tho

TROOP

Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle

^^shit was nice

other shit was kinda stretched like the eddie guerrero and hooka line..verse was str8...just couldn't get into it troops like i could taverez...cool battle but

vote-N.Tavarez

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Tav got it, punches - the few he had didnt hit hard but were way better concepts and... most importantly.. were actual punches. Tr i suggest u work on ur wording and focus on punching him and not the older, played out way of battling. I'mean if u guys got a week to write something, dont just freestyle it and expect to impress. Work on ur shit, think through ur punches, and actually take pride in it and get some good material.

Take a look at PR.com or RM.com none of those guys use this style anymore because its just no longer appealing. Dont get me wrong I dont throw away Tupac CD's or KRS one but still, I wouldnt put that shit in during parties or whatever.

In the end, Tav got it for just merely outshining troop.

V/Tav - who had the lifes a bitch line which was his best punch.

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N.Tav had flow and punches with mad diversity and mu;tie keyed phrases that was cool

They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage

^^This was a nice opener, hi em GOOD!
best line though was this..

Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink

^^Hit witha punch and a mix of multie creativity!.


Troop.
Your flow was ok but it seemed like you were going to far into some kind of E-Net ghetto flow hood nigga fo real.


Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle

^^ Funny shit mayne real creative too but didnt hit well.
that was the only worth while punch you threw...the rest you threw in were kinda plaid or word'd bad. nothing else man real got my attention.

V/ Tav for more consistancy and punches that connected well!

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thanks for the votes
3-0 uppin
good battle troops

lol @ me bein able 2 smash every muthafucka that voted

lol...good drop hot

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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border
And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke
Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH
Look
vs.
Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle
You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On

both had a few good punches but N. tavarez had better wording and was more solid threw out cuz troop had a few wack lines and n. tav only had like one.
vote- n tav

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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border,
Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink


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You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On



ya, Tav got this. not the best drop tho, some played concepts like the lifes a bitch and the bricks lines, but i was feelin the nameplays, the bully on the rocks was fresh. Troops just didnt really have anything in his verse, that new jersey line was the best one probably, but Heat wordplays are as old as text, so i wouldn't give it too much credit.


vote- tav, easy.

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