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08-06-06, 03:35 PM | #1 | ||||
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45. Image (0-0) vs 46. Hell Yeah (0-0)
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08-06-06, 10:22 PM | #2 | ||||||
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word. thanks kemp. lets make it 12?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233018 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233110 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233011 Last edited by Image. : 08-10-06 at 03:35 AM. |
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08-07-06, 09:27 AM | #3 | ||||||
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ill be here
12 is fine http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2818098 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233011 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2818102 Last edited by Hell Yeah : 08-13-06 at 12:38 AM. |
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08-07-06, 09:26 PM | #4 | ||||||
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only 10
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He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then
N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him Got rap documentaries jumping cliffs into toilets or they just disappear While the directors are left saying they were following his career N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward Last edited by Hell Yeah : 08-07-06 at 11:06 PM. |
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08-09-06, 08:05 AM | #5 | ||||||
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ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on
ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u ur rhymes expired, ur not dope, n i wont hide this the only trigger you ever pressed was on fucking time crisis hell ur verse is degrading, i got ur dreams slowly fading everyones got hell doing more bending over then military training read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access? Last edited by Image. : 08-09-06 at 08:12 AM. |
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08-09-06, 12:13 PM | #6 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then
N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him kinda weak Got rap documentaries jumping cliffs into toilets or they just disappear While the directors are left saying they were following his career ehh N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head weak Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you poorly worded Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward decent closer All in all, I honestly didn't like your verse. your flow was of by like one or two words in most lines and your punches were kinda weak and played man. you got the battle thing down but you should come more complex next time. ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on wak... its right up there with momma jokes during a battle stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u good line, shouldv'e been written different but still a good line. ur rhymes expired, ur not dope, n i wont hide this the only trigger you ever pressed was on fucking time crisis Ultra wak - I wish I never read this line hell ur verse is degrading, i got ur dreams slowly fading everyones got hell doing more bending over then military training Wak read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access? ok line but really poorly worded. Your style is decent but most of your lines just need to be reworded. you got ok concepts but you just need to know how to word em.' better. You both def need to elevate but you did ok. Just need to work on your material and come harder next time. Keep it up and ya'll be str8 V/ Hell Yeah .... ... .. RTF in my battle with Oz.
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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here.. Last edited by Wordz Ahgod : 08-09-06 at 06:00 PM. |
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08-09-06, 12:34 PM | #7 | ||||
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While the directors are left saying they were following his career
N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward vs. stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u this was a weak battle. hell had some pretty decent concepts, but nuttin too hard hittin. some that ish could've been alot better, with the better wordin. but not too bad against this fella. image, naw son. ur whole verse wasnt't good. the one concept i quoted was kind of funny, but nuttin great. work on coming with fresh material and better wording. v/ hell yeah!
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08-09-06, 01:03 PM | #8 | |||
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--Hell Yeah--
He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him >>Really stretched. Also, why would sperm review him? Bad opener. Got rap documentaries jumping cliffs into toilets or they just disappear While the directors are left saying they were following his career >>You had the concept but very poor delivery. N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head >>Kind of watered down, but okay. Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you >>Delivery is atrocious. Not a very hard hit. Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward >>Okay closer. --Image-- ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on >>Really bad opener. stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u >>Concept is there but wording is off. ur rhymes expired, ur not dope, n i wont hide this the only trigger you ever pressed was on fucking time crisis >>This was pretty horrible. hell ur verse is degrading, i got ur dreams slowly fading everyones got hell doing more bending over then military training >>No... read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access? >>Bad nameplay. Vote: Hell Yeah BARELY. Neither really had lines that I dug. The delivery needs to be brushed up by both parts but HY clinched it. |
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08-09-06, 05:57 PM | #9 | |||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then
N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you vs read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access? if u really both verse u'll see dat dis was kind of one sided and hell yeah won dis easily...image ya last line was dope...u gotta come with some clever shit dog v/hell yeah
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08-09-06, 07:37 PM | #10 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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hell yeah:
He's wack texcee, they already learned that lesson so they don’t need another then N sperm doesn’t have to review the guy since it already covered him ^^wack opener Got rap documentaries jumping cliffs into toilets or they just disappear While the directors are left saying they were following his career ^^no N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head ^^ehh Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you ^^no Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward ^^decent attempt at wordplay Image: ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on ^^ok stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u ^^ok ur rhymes expired, ur not dope, n i wont hide this the only trigger you ever pressed was on fucking time crisis ^^decent hell ur verse is degrading, i got ur dreams slowly fading everyones got hell doing more bending over then military training ^^wack read this rap bitch, punch some sence into ur wackness how the fuck are u posting, does hell have internet access? ^^stupid Both verses were pretty weak but image had 1 more quoatable than hell yeah so hes got my vote V// Image
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08-10-06, 01:43 AM | #11 | ||||||
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1-4.
i coulda done better if i wasnt busy. |
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08-10-06, 02:44 AM | #12 | ||||
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Hell Yeah...
Nobody thinks you’re a threat at all when their facing you, dude Only reason any decent head thinks your Dope is cuz their lines get Wasted on you Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward -vs- Image... ill fuk u up till theres nothing left, hells always burned on ur like a computer bitch, one touch n u get turned on stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u Hell Yeah's flow was garbo....Image read better Hell Yeah's last bar didn't rhyme....but, wait...after readin his last line. It really didn't connect...or make that much sense to me. I mean it does but it don't? V/ Image
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08-10-06, 03:41 AM | #13 | ||||||
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upping 2-4......
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08-10-06, 10:34 AM | #14 | |||||
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hell yeah definitely took this imo. he had the naacp line, although his wordplays and lines were stretched, he made it a point to diss the opponent. i felt like image was wastin his time here because he only had so much...he had about two decent lines in my opinion.
hell yeah made me laugh, and wins my vote for humor v-hell yeah
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08-10-06, 12:19 PM | #15 | |||
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N Ya girl has trouble understding my punchlines for text
Cuz my concepts are like a bag, always going over ya girls head Ill leave this dude in a hospital bed for even thinking he's hard After my fists leave him black the NAACP’ll freak when I give Image a-ward vs. stop with the attempts that shit is plain rude man put it this way…. so it wont have to look at u v-Hell Yeah |
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