20 lines max
3-0 votes is a ko
u spit first aight

cool here goes

u come on here tryin to be some one ur not/
but what the hell give it ur best shot/
whats wit the name 50 cent its so lame/
theres a difference between u he got game/
ur a rookie in this game no claim to fame/
u've not hit bak but i know u'll go off track/
ur like a freight train without the pain/
imagine u rappin on a mic wud make the world go insane/
i'd rip ur vocal cords clean out so u cant shout/
bein ruthless is what im about wit my lyrical clout/
ur so slow i fuked ur bitch before u and popped her cherry/
u didnt even know her bush was hairy/
but that bitch only went wit u cos she was blind/
i broke her in just to be kind/
u found out and shot me from behind/
i died and came back to haunt u even my spirit taunt u/
makin ur life less worthless than before/
makin a nigga nervous just settlin a score/
dont know why u come on here tryin to dis/
like shaq at the free throw line ur likely to miss

in battle i KILL MANY and throw em in the LAKE and see the WATER-RIPPLE/ (RIP-ALL)
i will SAW OFF all of your LIMBS, and let my punches FORM-a-CRIPPLE/
let LIGHTNING strike your CHEST, with heavy RAIN, as we STORM-your-NIPPLES/
TEARS-START-TO-FALL as i inject you with EOST-RO-GEN/ (no offence to women but they're emotional)
years-of-hard-work-stall, now you wanna RISE but that only happenin if you puffin on the YEAST-AGAIN/
50 YEARS of hurt i delivered you and you still aint able to produce GOLDEN-rhymes/
you aint got no money to ball, hell you aint holdin-dimes/
your rhymes got tha same amount of hurt as a NEEDLE, i hate- PRICKS/
my performance has got more STUNTS than the MAT-RIX/
in elevation i'm higher than you so you shout wait-bitch/
my life will LAST FOREVER cos i'm ETERNAL-to-THUGS/
tha hate in my HEART forms a BULLET gettin in your STERNUM-and-it-hugs.../
i'm gettin tired of HERBS so imma BURN-EM-these-fucks/

wrong verse allready used that

heres ma real verse

Attacking u with complex multi-combinational abdomenal hits, sueing me for rapping is the only way you'll ever be rich/
Ur average by far, this is a different Story, a new chapter, never judge a book by its cover, read his verse, Title: Wack Rapper/
Snatchin ya vocal cords and lace them into my shoes, now my kicks are speaking to you,
bite my shit all you want, but u could never stomach the chew-thru/
I can play of your name all day, then perform this verse at your funeral serve, but instead I’ll let u live to give u an example of what what I’m capable-of/
It's over son you can go count your eggs, they seem to be hatched, like an obese kid on a see-saw, this battle is un-evenly matched/
I must be flawless on the mic the way I serve these no-vices, the closest u been to sex, is having ya pictures used as birth-control devices/
Your shit is plain (plane), while my rhymes simply rock-it (rocket), if i have to go thru you on my way to the top, then ****-it, Im boarding the cockpit/
If we were battling using our cocks u would fall short, u fall short of a gd composition like a computer error report/
Half of your shit does not make sense, u lack flow, and ya rhyme-scheme is shapeless – none, this battle is like a suicide trial, cuz u'll be dead regardless of the final outcome/
In God we Trust, please put this kid to rest he is ready to go, sexuality is like an angry volcano, this homo is always ready to blow/

wrong verse already used that?????
anyway uppin for votes

ok uppin for votes yall

50.. you have too many battles going on right now. I'm not going to close them.. but another mod might. You are only allowed to have 2 battles going on at the same time.

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ma vote goes to 50 even tho he was dumb n posted the wrong verse in the beginin his verse came harder than fgee 50 had better punches and it flowed betta aight holla bak 1

well fgee gets my vote for the simple reason... How can you post the wrong verse?? Kid you realize this is a battle, your supposed to freestyle, not write it.

yea thats a lil suspicious w/e be more careful next time...it could cost u a battle aight holla bak 1

need more votes ya'll

50 gets it... I was wonderin' about the wrong verse thing too.... but I really don't care, 50's verse was straight ill compared to fgee's... punches and similes were so much better..

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yo man sos about hav in 2 many battles at 1 time man they just set the threads up wit out callin me out
the wrong oh i used the same shit from another battle so i thought of somethin new
aight evey1 just chill

when i battle nothins written down i just spit it off the top
im sure a lot of cats write their shit before battling which is easier
and 50 how cud u get a verse mixed up u donkey????