alriight lets go:
All VOTE CAN BE DONE BY POLL NOW SO DO IT!!!
Explained votes or they don't count
No c/v or d/r blah blah
16 Linez Max
First to 5
3-0 is a knockout
Verses by 1:30 A.M. or its a DQ

INTRO
you may be unseen to most, but i see you and ur vision.. why are u part of a squad dat got productions in movie positions/

(gimme my L and let me throw my ahes out on dis dude)

u going against rb makaveli..i proove u lost all ready


OPENER

how u mc-ing? da only time u hit da studio.. is when gays recording so they can cum off hard on they demos.. i'mma need site-janitors on dis one, to get dis man swiped off my windows..
u couldnt see what i wuz cummin with, if u wuz inside my dick-hole..u couldnt pop shyt even if u had bubble-licious in ur ass-hole/
get it right, u dont rip mc's u rip wrappers..droppin un-neccessary shyt, "nicca" how bout sum diapers..
if u win, its becuz u wuz text-hyper..
i'm chillin "dawg" droppin bars on ya, smoking fire/
making it hard fo u to come-back like 8-mile competitors..
consider dis battle cat vs pretador..
u need to retire and become a rb editor..
cuz it seemz like da newbiez are even uh-head-of-ya/
so next time u wanna battle with ur chest out,penetratin and muscle embracing, make sure ur wack ass been under sum kind of special elevation/



G'Luck


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yo I though you said you would be around 1:30 when u posted so I was waitin till then, but I'll drop now:

A yo, fuk this battle, I just need one more muthafukin win/
I got TOO much shit to say about this fag, I don’t know where to begin/
You get more excited with men then fat bitches with ho-ho’s/
I’ll have a balls knocked outta place, I’m only comin w/ low-blows/
This bitch might-as-well be invisible the way he’ll no-show/
This bitch acts stagnant the way he’s got no-flow, winning for you is a no go/
You beat me in battle? Yeah and there’s a cure for cancer/
I’ll have ya ass K.O.’d b4 u get a chance to answer/
You say u got ‘moves’? Quit rap and be a ‘dancer’/
You say you got ‘looks’? Get off this site, and be a ‘glancer’/
You aint a ‘tight mc’, you a just a fukin imposter/
If they had ‘em for rap actors you’d have a shelf full of Oscars/

Closer:

Man quit writing rhymes and keep smoking your joints/
Your sorry ass couldn’t beat me in a first to 5 battle if u started w/ 6 points/

i voted in poll, nice battle guys

this vote don't count....THEY HAVE TO BE EXPLAINED>>>>

uppin

aiight

0-0

votes must be xplain

aight.....UPPIN

wake yall azz up

quit sleepin!!! Vote......

whoops sorry yall, mann, ok look, De Niro had sum played lines, but is punches did hit hard than UnEmceeAble
but i liked his finisher tho,
it was close but imma go with de niro for betta punches

aight......0-1 uppin

The hell you did, you don't have the posts. Don't lie about it.
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DeNiro: Are you openly swiping Nas there, or is this a hidden bite attempt? You have acceptable punches. Although this is just long-winded and retarded to me:

u couldnt see what i wuz cummin with, if u wuz inside my dick-hole..u couldnt pop shyt even if u had bubble-licious in ur ass-hole/

No no no.

making it hard fo u to come-back like 8-mile competitors..

NO! Please guys, no more 8-Mile shit...

how u mc-ing? da only time u hit da studio.. is when gays recording so they can cum off hard on they demos.. i'mma need site-janitors on dis one, to get dis man swiped off my windows..

The first half of this is cool, but it wains as janitor-talk begins.

u need to retire and become a rb editor..
cuz it seemz like da newbiez are even uh-head-of-ya/
so next time u wanna battle with ur chest out,penetratin and muscle embracing, make sure ur wack ass been under sum kind of special elevation/

That's all straight.


P.S. In your profile you ponder the psychic abilities of the late Chris Wallace. I don't know if you're kidding, but you might remember, depending on your age, my guess: when you were in your mother's womb, there was a bombing at the ground level of one of the buildings. I don't remember what year... '93 I would guess.
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UnEmceeAble:

You get more excited with men then fat bitches with ho-ho’s/

Yeah, we know, fat people like confections. This is getting played really badly right now, even without people directly biting 50s bullet-filled ass.

This bitch might-as-well be invisible the way he’ll no-show/

This makes you seem lame when you drop second. I don't care what the "circumstances" are.

You beat me in battle? Yeah and there’s a cure for cancer/
I’ll have ya ass K.O.’d b4 u get a chance to answer/
You say u got ‘moves’? Quit rap and be a ‘dancer’/
You say you got ‘looks’? Get off this site, and be a ‘glancer’/
You aint a ‘tight mc’, you a just a fukin imposter/
If they had ‘em for rap actors you’d have a shelf full of Oscars/

This is all straight, no need to use quotations for those though. We get it.

I got TOO much shit to say about this fag, I don’t know where to begin/

You know, I wish this were true. I think the PERSONAL is what is sorely needed in a lot of battles here.
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This wasn't a very pleasing battle, if I could poll vote, I wouldn't. It's really close to being a tie for me. Like, fuck it. But because of flow alone I go with UnEmceeAble. The first half of his verse was pretty wack, and the second half was not bad. DeNiro has some decent shit, but he has to work on getting it to flow well AND keeping the weird-trash lines out of there.
This battle is peanut butter. UnEmceeAble is creamy, DeNiro is chunky. The whole damn thing is more fat than protein.

[QUOTE]Originally posted by LaRyan Shabaz
[B]

The hell you did, you don't have the posts. Don't lie about it.
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i did vote in the poll, anybody can now, so check the rules

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