no line max
no hate votes
and no changin your lyrics after you post
check in first

checkin in

I cruise at a speed with my gat blastin
leavin the shrapnel in ya back, passin’

only to leave a towel and best-wishes, got u in the moment reminiscen’ <who did it>

I thought to myself..........
“Wait I must finish the job”
Make that nigga look robed

I grabbed my knife, jeopardized ya life, by jacking your spleen
quick enough to leave ya blood blue and green

*takes the pills*

And when I take my pills, I get a bit feisty and rude
I swear I can’t be touched in this mood

I cut your spinal cord...jump...opened the door

pushed the pedal
and tossed the metal

bye...bye... u gone...
Now I’m burnin rubber on ya mom
not slamin the breaks but I’m turnin...will hittin the RIGHT SPOTS
dustin it while I burn the cops!

Now I’m Minute-Maid
cause it took me only minute, and ya...mamma...was made
<my bitch>
If you gave me 2
I would have came back for ya crew
so what you gonna do?

Hold up everybody I think I'm battling the incredible hoax//
he said he'z poppin pillz to rap stronger thiz kidz funnier than Jamie Fox tellin' jokez//

You cruise at 120 well I swang & bang at that speed//
& when I get through bleedin you kid it'z goan be my cum that you bleed//

Not literally punk I see you getting excited thinkin that I'ma actually gonna fu@k you//
I'm just goan do you so bad that even if you were tied to a guitar STEVIE RAY VAUGHN wouldn't pluck you//

Your lyricz stink like horse shyt I think they call it manuer//
you couldn't get paid if you were donald trumpz son & dubbed the next entreprenuer//

I really didn't even need to show up to win thiz here battle but I'm in it//
I'm what missy elliot wantz your what she don't want Mr.Minute//

Your rhymez are elementary and they'll never make you no cheddar//
Fool I shyt rhymez that beat yourz & my unborn son could flow better//

I ain't got to explain my verse cuz it speakz on it'z own//
so good-bye, good riddenz and farewell to the deep dark unknown//

Poll Vote = Defiant

Reason = Much Harder Punches and Flow. Could still do with work but not much!!!

Check out my battle with Chrit,

Pz

AY PEEPZ......MAKE SURE WHEN YOU VOTE THAT YOU ALSO MAKE YOUR VOTE IN THE POLL @ THE TOP OF THE THREAD OR ELSE IT WON'T COUNT


UPPIN' FA VOTEZ

defiant took it on punches, and a better rhymes scheme/ flow

vote=defiant

vote=defiant

reason=better punches and multis
vote on xplicit vs. vendetta

UPPIN' FA VOTEZ

sorry for freepost but also come vote on j.Smith...vs. Vendetta

vote, defient
tha otha nigga-ya dont need to explain so much, itz ztops tha flow, just spit it and let peeple figga it out
for real- who tha fuck dont know what metal iz??

UPPIN' FA VOTEZ...........MAKE SURE YOU VOTE ON THE POLL AT THE TOP OF THIS THREAD ANYONE CAN VOTE IN THE FRONT LINES IT DON'T MATTER HOW MANY POSTS YOU HAVE!!!

yeah and quit freepostin vendetta yosorry ass nigga...vote on your own shit cuz

UPPIN FA VOTEZ

nigga thats a win for you defiant you took this, poll vpte defiant,

now vote on my battle its labled scarface kapone, please poll vote, and explain, asap