Another Day In Tha Life Of A Loser With Nickeled Pockets
Shadowing Another 24 Hours Planning Out His Freedom Project
Nah Scratch That, Liberty Can't Even Be Held Above Heads
Im At Leisure, But All Stimulation Is Unraveling From This Thread
Fabric Beds Between My Stupidity And Tha Creek In Tha Doorframe
Summoned To Trap Tha Honour You Harbour But Forgot Tha War Paint
Meet Tha 21st Centuries Version Of Judas, "How Do You Do Sir"
Don't Mind Me, Im Here To Cloak Your Backbone And Your Tumour
"Excuse Me, But Do You Have Change For A, Moderately Clear Soul?"
Piloting Low Skies With Tha Wind Brushing Ominously In My Ear Hole
I Fear Gold, Ressurect For 9AM And Inhale Tha Worker's Air
Sludging Through Modern Times, Decoding Single Words To Prayers
Onwards Beyond Terms And Cares, Quaters Down, But Smiles Up
Watch My Career Go Down In Flames Because One File Was Corrupt
Thats What You Get Giving A Child Luck And Giving Him Scissors
If Only Trip And Impale Appeared In Tha Same Sentence, Go Figure
Now Trigger Fingers Use Pointers, Drafting To Absolute Warriors
Aimed Like Lemmings To Stroll Right Into Tha Offices Of Coroners
Ignoring Commands From Centurion Foreigners, Dead Deaf's Walking
Left Desk's Shortage In Tha School Portion Of Teaching's Torment
They Lay Sheets To Mourn Men, Or To Hide There Guilt From Others
Us Lowlifes Built From Blunders Use Solecism To Quilt Our Wonders
Tha Real From Above Us Is Inept, Tugs Us Big Steps Beneath Death
When It All Descends We Are Merely Broken Links In A Street Quest
What A Way To Reap Breaths, Let Us Rest, Bask In Tha Re-Occurance
Although Tha Sleeping Hurts Us We Merge Tha Agony And Bleed Deterrence
Leave Tha Version We Thought Was Actuality To Build Us A New Body
So Faces That Stand Out Are Abnormal To Tha Children Of Bubonic
Reeled In Super Sonic To This Oxymoron Logic, Hooked On Asperity
My Rook Seized Without Anyone Exerting Energy, Memory, Remember Me..?

We Never Get A Break Through Playing By Tha Rules
Cause Tha Rules Were Made For Us To Lose
We Never Get A Break Through Playing By Tha Rules
Cause Tha Rules Were Made For Us To Lose

Game Over! Gamer Over!

To Continue Please Insert Coin

VERY WELL WROTE PEACE I LIKE THIS ALOT

the game of life right?..... lol.... yo man, I liked this... shit flowed nicely, crazy vocab as usual.... and I liked the metaphor concept in this... definitely feeling it....
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Thanks For Tha Feedback You Two

i hope your tring to get record deals or atleast make some type of CD, you got the talent, im sure you would get signed if you tried. it makes no since to be wasting rhymes on the internet when you could write this good.

Yup.... Im Way Ahead Of You On That There MyK

Thanks For Tha Reply Bro

that shit was crazy yo...feelin the topic and vocab...i have listened to some of your audios and them shits nice...respect man...one

Thanks For Tha Feedback And Respect Narc

this iz nice juss like the rest of ya shit lol
im feeling this like crazy, oh yeah, ya audios are hott too

keep it up

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Flowed Well, Had Nice Vocab. All In All a Tight Piece. Keep It Up Man.

Reprezentin Uganda, lol

dis piece wuz sick fo realz.I liked tha metaphorical thought behind it as well,gave it even more originality.Bars flowed nice as hell too.Stay ^
-Avi

one word, wow.
rb vets still showing herbs how to write it up, great vocab and imagery in this, an original concept to boot. great sense of flow, rhythm.

dopeness, keep posting.

Yo, man, shit was dope once agin, one part that caught me, straight,

"Thats What You Get Giving A Child Luck And Giving Him Scissors
If Only Trip And Impale Appeared In Tha Same Sentence, Go Figure
Now Trigger Fingers Use Pointers, Drafting To Absolute Warriors
Aimed Like Lemmings To Stroll Right Into Tha Offices Of Coroners"

Thats some nice shit there dogg, been watching your shit for a while, always good, few words I didn't understand but haha, very advanced vocab, concept to this is dope, keep it up.....

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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excelllent verse n-demik,loved it all the way through was tight as a mother...peep my shit sometime if you ge thte chance...yor audio sounds mad nice...
big propz bismillah

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