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understatement 0 0%
Dirty Shanks 2 100.00%
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Old 05-16-03, 01:37 AM   #1
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understatement V5. Dirty Shanks

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no hate
no crew
no dick rydin'
10-15... 1 line = 1 bar

Good luck, I'll post tomarrow.... I gotta get some sleep, and wake up at 5:30am

 
Old 05-16-03, 08:03 PM   #2
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checkin in, I'm looking forward to this dude.
Everyone who votes: you have to be a registered voter, or it won't work!

people seem to think the new system means that the old rules don't apply.
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Old 05-16-03, 10:26 PM   #3
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here we go:

Shanks has lyrical limp noodle, his words never stand out, erectly,
theres nothing 'def' about dephinitions; they can't even spell correctly/
you won't get a 'lead off',you'll never even get close to the 'first base',
Like six 'eyes and lips' spittin this verse, I'm too much for you to 'face'/
my verse is like 'jawin on metal', leavin verbal scars any emcee sees,
you 'bite so many bars', you leave huge teethmarks in your Em cds/
gluin dictionaries in your mouth so your syllables are more than one
you 'ate out Mrs Webster', 'words' get stuck on the tip of your tongue/
don't underestimate the untouchable, you should already know this foo,
you end every bar with an exclaimation, tryin to make people notice you/
like Delgado, I'm 'dee jay'(Dj), "scratching" sounds that'll 'beat' this "cat",
you just whistle commercial tunes, your av says Wal Mart's where it's at/
your words are skidmarks in dirty laundry, I leave you hanging out to dry,
kill you with sharp lyrics? I'll cut into your shanks with buttered knives/

damn, it's hard writing when I don't know anything about you, especially with writers block. That was so wack.
let's see yours
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Old 05-17-03, 12:19 AM   #4
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I'll post tomarrow... I'm very busy.............................................. ........................
 
Old 05-17-03, 11:23 PM   #5
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oK............... Checkity Check .... Key-board Reckin', Check It...

'Statement' must be 'blind'.. crossed ya T and got tha Dot, but forgot ya 'I's'..!
Nah he's A Fan of 'Wally', wit that 'Green' T-Shirt you'd know he's dick ryding..!
^believe it, claimin you a lyricist when ya name's Understatement.. are U serious..?!
I'm in tha Basement expect me to be furious, like bitches with missed periods..!
Just curious.. Are U rockin urkel-specs and turtle necks.. this what ya pain's about..?!
bitch I don't be writin' rhymes on my dick? So keep my fuckin' name out ya mouth..!!
I'mma Cold killa, I'll drink old beer's just so you know I roll iLLah Slammin' So-Co wigga..!
Flippin scripture? Even If I lost to that bitten verse wit'cha, I wouldnt even mind it..
Stuck up bitch Understand, whatever you CALL ill.. you need to Star 69 it..
I break fool's and beat biter's.. my flows are much nicer, such rhymes not for hire..!
These are my lines & the day you beat me P. Diddy Fires His Ghostwriters..!
And next time we Throw lines, Best Be-Leavin'.. I'm writin' mines on cement bricks..!
Ding.. Tha bells ringin & Statement's Under pavement, Duke.. go to rhymin school..
See.. A pack of dawg's could piss on paper and have hotter lines Drop'd than you..!


BlaH....... I match'd yours.. Good Luck..


Voter's begin please....



*Edited my last post to keep tha thread from gettin' clogged.*

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Old 05-18-03, 09:12 PM   #6
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Old 05-18-03, 10:24 PM   #7
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Old 05-18-03, 10:38 PM   #8
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'Statement' must be 'blind'.. crossed ya T and got tha Dot, but forgot ya 'I's'..!

^believe it, claimin you a lyricist when ya name's Understatement.. are U serious..?!
I'm in tha Basement expect me to be furious, like bitches with missed periods..!

Stuck up bitch Understand, whatever you CALL ill.. you need to Star 69 it..

Nice......

damn, it's hard writing when I don't know anything about you, especially with writers block. That was so wack.


Explained my Vote.....

Vote- Dirty Shanks
 
Old 05-19-03, 09:42 AM   #9
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Old 05-19-03, 10:02 AM   #10
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Quote:
Originally posted by billy
'Statement' must be 'blind'.. crossed ya T and got tha Dot, but forgot ya 'I's'..!

^believe it, claimin you a lyricist when ya name's Understatement.. are U serious..?!
I'm in tha Basement expect me to be furious, like bitches with missed periods..!

Stuck up bitch Understand, whatever you CALL ill.. you need to Star 69 it..

Nice......

damn, it's hard writing when I don't know anything about you, especially with writers block. That was so wack.


Explained my Vote.....


^ sed it all
other kid came good.....better then i expected but Dirty's verse was too good....some nice punches in there
please finish off my battle with blaze.....needs one poll vote to show the winner

Vote- Dirty Shanks
 
Old 05-19-03, 10:07 AM   #11
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Please put your votes in tha polls.

Thank you anyway.

& Blaze2K is Under Investigation, and will soon be judged for Foul Play...

More voters please...
 
Old 05-19-03, 12:25 PM   #12
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Ok...

Understatement...

you came off nicely with
decent punches. flow
was on and off. you held
it for the most part. but
personals were definatly
lacking. so that brought
down you verse. vocab
was nothing special...

Shanks..

Dope verse. you came off
with the good punches.
your flow was great. and
personals were noticed.
a very nicely put together
verse on your part...

vocab. Tie
punches. Shanks
flow. Shanks
personals. Shanks
dopeness. Shanks


Understatement 1.5
Dirty Shanks 5.5


Vote. Dirty Shanks
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Old 05-20-03, 09:53 AM   #13
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Old 05-20-03, 12:39 PM   #14
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damn shanks, you ripped me. ah well, my verse was wack, I even said so right afterwards. Good battle dude.
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Old 05-21-03, 09:09 AM   #15
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uppin for votes on this shit people
"nobody sees tears when you're standing in the storm"-Atmosphere
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