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Old 05-26-03, 10:11 PM   #1
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Due to popular demand, I'm reopening this thread, submit all your ill topics, no bullshit ones, I want one's that are open, and can invoke creativity. For example...
Going down with the ship <----Like a crew goin' down, or relationship

These should be metaphors where people can see the deeper meanings. Or just dope ones like...
With my last breath.
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Old 05-26-03, 10:22 PM   #2
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Cremation
Head over Heels
Tinted Windows
Where it ends
Pop Quiz
Time Travel
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Old 05-26-03, 11:50 PM   #3
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peer pressure
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taking over
 
Old 05-27-03, 05:07 AM   #4
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terraforming your brain. lmao.

rippling puddle reflections.

locked boxes

life of a narcicist

machine ghosts

next after death.

holding down the fort.

the evolution of the de-evolution of mankind.(the begining of the end)

war.....

pirates!...lmao.

demonic voices.

massive guilt...

rising to a challenge

life from the perspective of a madman.

i dunno,somehting maybe.?
 
Old 05-27-03, 09:03 AM   #5
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knee deep

stairway to heaven <---everybody likes zeppelin

kinslayer(killing your family)

the underworld
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Old 05-27-03, 10:41 AM   #6
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Don't mean to be rude but topics like:
your last breath...
suck.

These topics are gay and for friggin, preschool kids... they're so boring and specific and are directed towards a story or point the verses in a direction...
in my experience (I'm not suggesting I know everything, but in comparison yours don't work as well) I've found that very broad topics are best and leave the most room for creativity on the part of the writer.

ex. simple topics
hell
abortion
infidelity
water
fingertips
red
alcoholism
breath
understanding
God
school
politics
terrorism
fire
dinosaurs
skeleton
eternal life
folktales
peanuts

those work really well because both verses will necessarity be directed the same way.

the diference between these and the topics you've been giving are that where I say skeleton
you would have said skeletons in the closet.... but that's gay...
let the writers be creative.

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Quote:
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Don't mean to be rude but topics like:
your last breath...
suck.

These topics are gay and for friggin, preschool kids... they're so boring and specific and are directed towards a story or point the verses in a direction...


..WRONG..
yes you want topics writers can write about whatever they feel, but when you read my peice on the last breath you will understand i didnt follow the beaten path.. i took it on a different turn.. thats usually how i win.. i usually slap the person with shock.. and my peice for this topic is shock.
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^I agree about leaving the topics open for the people to take the topic how the want.

Topics:


A New Relationship
In Too Deep
What If...
Treasure Hunt
No Way Out
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I will read your verse before I further my complaint....
I am a decent human being.
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Old 05-27-03, 02:10 PM   #10
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^wrd, not like the other 75 percent of rb.
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Old 05-27-03, 02:37 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally posted by Philo
Don't mean to be rude but topics like:
your last breath...
suck.

These topics are gay and for friggin, preschool kids... they're so boring and specific and are directed towards a story or point the verses in a direction...
in my experience (I'm not suggesting I know everything, but in comparison yours don't work as well) I've found that very broad topics are best and leave the most room for creativity on the part of the writer.

ex. simple topics
hell
abortion
infidelity
water
fingertips
red
alcoholism
breath
understanding
God
school
politics
terrorism
fire
dinosaurs
skeleton
eternal life
folktales
peanuts

those work really well because both verses will necessarity be directed the same way.

the diference between these and the topics you've been giving are that where I say skeleton
you would have said skeletons in the closet.... but that's gay...
let the writers be creative.

Peace


Writers still can be creative with the topics we give. Its been proven by many. Sorry if your not creative enough to do it.
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lmao @ Bruk

more topics:
madness
lumberjack
the path of illness
creeping up on life
along the road
drop kicking chia pets <---NOW THAT'S COMEDY!!!

and more to come....
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here some

world war 3
put in placement
old school

can't think of any more......
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Old 05-27-03, 05:50 PM   #14
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cracked
nuts (i can see at least 4 diff ways for this one)
purple sweaters on turtles (lol gay but should prove to be funny)
 
Old 05-27-03, 11:43 PM   #15
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Yea....agree with Bruk....to show that you ARE a creative writer...if you can pull some fucked up shit outta ur ass with a hard impossible topic that makes sense AND is interesting...it PROVES your a creative writer....simply put....you can take whats given to you and give back sumthin unthinkable.....
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