Iight i'll drop in a minute keyin up now. prolly 14 lines.
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Ayo......

::Opening::

Our ranks in this battle are Weaponz¹... Ripper²...ya NUMBER'S-UP //
Ya delivery is WOODEN, and I'm 'BOARD' of it like it was a LUMBER-TRUCK //

I'ma take Canadian BEEF 'ACROSS THE LINE'...don't need trucks to roll-to-kill-you //
You'll be almost as "ILL" as me when I SERVE YA RAW with mould-and-mildew //
Like old ladies falling down stairs I'm prone to TRIP OUT and BUST-from-da-HIP //
Wearing ya momma's 'HOOK UP BRA' and breaking it is the only time you've 'BUST'-ED-A-CLIP //
The only way ya 'SHIT' could come close to 'HARDNESS' is getting raped-in-the-BUTT //
You're like a BARBER WITH NO SCISSORS...ya ain't MAKIN'-DA-CUT //
Weapon's head is an INSANE ASYLUM...sicker than mental-illness-wards //
'BITE THE BULLET'...I put more LEAD in ya teeth than ya dental-fillings-whore //
I'll GET UNDER YOUR SKIN by sticking my finger in the hole-in-ya-chest //
Helping me to 'paint my house' is the only way you could 'ROLL'-WITH-DA-BEST //
The F.D.A. told me this 'OX' is safe-to-be-'ATE' //
He's also a mental 'VEGETABLE' so he fills a second space-on-my-plate //

Just Saw This, Checkin In......

I'ma Do A Quick Key, Verse Will Be Up Shortly......
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'Nuclear' Gonna Fight Like America In The War, Get Hit By Their Own 'Weaponz'/
The Only Reason Your Here Today Is Coz Ur Parents Couldnt Afford Contraceptionz/
This Verse Is Systimatically Blowing You Away With My Nuclear Counter-Strikes/
Your 9-8 And Yet You Aint Come To The Simple Conclusion Dat Nuclear Bites/
By Pressing Dat Red Button You Kno Dat Your Gonna Get Annihilated Quick/ (Start A Battle/Launch Nuclear Weapons)
The Rhymes You Spit Are Similar To The Noise Of A Constapated Kid/
You Couldn't Come Wit A 'Personal Punch' Even If You Had Your Sisters Diary Strapped To Your Hand/
These Flows Comin Hotter Than The Desert, 2 Hot 4 You So Leave Your Head In The Sand/
I'll Spit On All Your Fingers Just So You Can Have a Taste Of A Keystyle Defeat/
The Way I 'Flow' I Must Be A 'Swimmer' Coz My Rhymes Are Of A 'Freestyle' Athlete/
Like 'Neo' In The Matrix I Am The 'One' And You've Just Escaped Reality/
Faggot, You Never Knew This But My Rhymes Are Portrayed: Brutality/
Like 'Nike' My Rhymes Fly Through The 'Air' Until I Have Achieved My 'Max'/
I'm I.L.L And Leaving You Fucked Like You've Just Been Diagnosed Wit Anthrax/


Put One Explaination Incase Some Didnt Get It......

Just Checked Out Your Verse......
You Got Sum Good Shit There......
Aight Lets Get Sum Votes......
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Uppin This......
Also As This Is My First Elite Battle, Any Feedback And Tips Would Be Appreciated......
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Uppin for some damn votes.......Why dont anyone vote anymore unless its a d/r......................
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Damn ill as battle and Ripper u had some nice shit kid, but weaponz got it out wit this line.......

iLike old ladies falling down stairs I'm prone to TRIP OUT and BUST-from-da-HIP //
Wearing ya momma's 'HOOK UP BRA' and breaking it is the only time you've 'BUST'-ED-A-CLIP //

^^^LMMFAO......

that shit ended it,,

Damn........you must like votin, this is like tha fifth battle of mine you voted on........Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^
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im going tovote for ripper because i liked his punchlines nice battle im out>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>....
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Aight Thanx Man......
1-1 Uppin......
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