RULES:
10 LINES MAX
5 VOTES WINS
NO HATERS D/R'S
NO FEEDING
SPIT YA SHIT ASAP
*****WUN*******

checkin in droppin shortly n all dat goowd stuff

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yo

this battle is 'curtains' for u like u was spittin 'interior decorations'//
names 512 droppin random ass numbers for a name shows ur inferior comprehention//
this is ryme detention, il make a body 'hit tha road jumpin' like 'tight suspension'//
il 'decieve ur vision' punch ur verse wit a 'cable connection' to choke ur word 'reception'//

ya 'mis-take' was battlin me like tryin to 'catch a toddler' on 'camera'//
il hand a 'brain' a 'verbal jumpstart' like u was runnin low on 'stemin'-a//
ur words' or-a-bit retarded', like this dude 'flyin in' rymes from planet duh//-blah
il rip u 'inside out' like i was spittin flesh eatin deseases//
ur 'punches' are 'at ease' like u gettin a hooker to 'hit her knees'//

(quick kill)

ur style is weak, u couldnt 'hit me' if u turned my name into a 'link in ya verse'//
il make u disperse, like my nutt in ur bitchs womb.......maybe worse......//-------blah blah blah

YO HIT MY BATTLE AND MAKE A HONEST VOTE AND i WILL HIT THIS ONE AND DO THA SAME THING!!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54091

u sed spit asap.............................................. ...........................
wat
tha
fuck
are
u
doing
........................dammit lol i bet hes tryin........ this always happens to me......

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another pre-wre...................................well il give myself props
at least i know i got this dude shook

oh well

guess il see it tomorrow

i never pre write and never will just have some damn patience cuz u know freestylin on the net aint everyones life so ill have my verse key'd later iight.............peace

wun
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check...

nigga the only big thing u have is the guy in ya avy
u Arent Rready for Marines Yet so u in the navy
but thats where u belong, you and ya lyrics underwater
shoot a torpedo at ya ass and now im huggin ya daughter
we wont bother goin to ya funeral,i told her i was her father
ill come harder then steel, and ya ass will come short n softer
my lyrics will split-ya-neck better hit-the-deck
leave this scene cuz there aint nuttin-to-wreck
hit ya structure with both hands cuz im ambedextrious
ya rhymes lack hype-ness cuz they aint nuttin outrageous

up it for votes.........

peace

wun
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yo I'll vote on this shit if some hits up my battle..thanks.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=54395

iight uppin for votes..............yo thug that link wouldnt work....
peace

wun
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Ok 512 your verse really sucked....... honestly I aint gunna lie 1 n gone just ripped you apart............ no more explanaition needed trust me...........
vote = 1

oooooook 0-1 his favor.............up it..........

peace

wun
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YO.......sorry 1 but I cant poll vote cuz im at my bro's house and he has got AOL so I cant poll... hopefully when i get home this thread is still open and I will poll vote then... so 512 you got lucky on this vote... for now.......
LaTeR

1 n gone won with easy....no more explination needed..
hit mines up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54429

thanx
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