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Old 06-10-03, 06:03 AM   #1
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Don't peep unless you plan to READ it...

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Roaming through life, woman to woman, day to day/
Cigarettes and alcohol, help me find my way/
I cruise around in park, try to rev the engine/
wear sunglasses in the dark, its true vision/
Refracted through the prism, colors in my prison/
Separated by schism, Classed by division/
Carry the two, wait, no add the three/
Not travelling in life, the tree carves its initials into me/
Regression is my profession, only move forward in reverse/
I promise to love you, for better or for worse/
You should promise me too. its ok, my love is enough/
I see right through you, i called your bluff/
"Leave a message, I'm Out Right Now", Guess no one is home/
Thats a nice mask, it really hide your true feelings/
Secret dealings, keeps your face from peeling/
What you keep up as an act, might not become an act one day/
Then one day you will say i never shoulda acted that way/
You act like you used to, but you skipped a period of evolution/
Victim of mind pollution, subliminal thought redistribution/
Who are you? Are you happy with yourself/
Do you know you name? Hope you are in good health/
But who knows anything in the science age/
You could be famous one day, just die and you'll make the front page/
They'll write nice comments like, "You were an honest man"/
But to be alive today, no one would shake your hand/
I can see all your impurties, even the ones that aren't there/
Smacked in the face, Tell that blind man not to stare/
Look up to the stars, they're looking back with animosity/
Go to the pet store, all out of puppies with ferocity/
What's wrong with you people! Dont you see the truth?/
Raise the roof, Just another way to keep down the youth/
Nothings impossible, i've been trying to do it for years now/
Grazing in the pasture, looking to tip cows, raise your eyebrows/
What do we have now?, See that person over there? he sorta looks like me/
Saggy pants and spray cans, slave to the hip hop industry/
Look at him, i can spot a hundred million flaws/
Uneven jaws, broken countless laws, taken numerous falls/
Hey, wait a second, hes looking back, its all becoming crystal clear/
I think i know this person... looking back in the mirror/

Your interpretations are welcome... people who read it will mos def get it right... pz
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Old 06-10-03, 06:15 AM   #2
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i didnt read that^^
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Old 06-10-03, 06:19 AM   #3
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Roaming through life, woman to woman, day to day/
Cigarettes and alcohol, help me find my way/
I cruise around in park, try to rev the engine/
wear sunglasses in the dark, its true vision/
Refracted through the prism, colors in my prison/
Separated by schism, Classed by division/
Carry the two, wait, no add the three/
Not travelling in life, the tree carves its initials into me/
Regression is my profession, only move forward in reverse/
I promise to love you, for better or for worse/
You should promise me too. its ok, my love is enough/
I see right through you, i called your bluff/

illest, after that it fell off
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Old 06-10-03, 06:48 AM   #4
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^^^alright... any interpretations as to what it was about anyone?
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Old 06-10-03, 07:54 AM   #5
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hahah dope...dope...dope...Some lines were OHH SO GOOD...And some fell off, the ending was straight ill man, top drop...Well done....

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Old 06-10-03, 07:54 AM   #6
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dunno, im too hungover but i did get the tight imagery and the originality or the piece. your multis need a little work and your vocab doesnt have to always be so complex you know.

mos def a few notches above the average.
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Old 06-10-03, 07:58 AM   #7
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I won't spoil the meaning of it either haha leave it for kids to write what they think so you know they read it haha.....

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Old 06-10-03, 08:00 AM   #8
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yea its about u knowing gay porn sites and sayin i clicked them....

but i didnt

and the oter half is about me havin herpes....
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Old 06-10-03, 08:35 AM   #9
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^^^lol... vocab is fun to play around with... and kapone... i WILL NOT JOIN www.swallowitall.com ... i dont care how many free gay porn vids they offer...
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Old 06-10-03, 10:42 AM   #10
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insipre i cant really guess what all of that is about.....and who ever said he was too complex u are incrrect........that was quit complex but not too compelx....the vocab was good.....multies were alrite.......lamo some people peeped and didnt reply.....its herb bashing time.......haha..........good drop by inspire....


lmao please dont promote homosexuality.......i got nuthin
against gays or nun but umm that shits just wrong lmao.....kapone can choose to go to gay porn vid sites if he wants to its not ur life inspire........lmao i'm only clowing there.............
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Old 06-10-03, 07:00 PM   #11
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lol... thanks.... uppin for someone to get it....
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Old 06-10-03, 07:16 PM   #12
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that was tight dawg........keep spittin
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Old 06-11-03, 04:14 AM   #13
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^^^you my friend... did not read it... did you not see the title?
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Old 06-11-03, 04:17 AM   #14
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Nice Verse Inspire...
But Your Sig Lies...

No Free Porn ...
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Old 06-11-03, 04:19 AM   #15
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I liked what I READ...............
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