10 - 15 lines you know the rules

Here is my verse

I don’t care bout my battle record I’m registered crazy
I could be 0 and 30 and you still couldn’t faze me
Your rhymes are lazy mines are dope that’s pays me
Smoke that shit to spit, leave you like “on the mic MoS sprays me”
Everything you wrote was prolly prewrit, I don’t doubt it a bit
If you didn’t ask some dude in basics if you could barrow it
Now your swallowin it, Fed up then get up and show some sarrow bitch
I done knocked ya ass back into tomarrow wit a lyr-i-cal beatin
I done beat Feeble's teeth in so deep on this puss tampons can’t stop the bleedin
Got you seein stars, I don’t use discretion in my bars to those I’m hurtin
Done knocked out your lights so, Bye Dawg….This battles closed curtain
You just witnessed a microphone insertion in ur hole your no virgin
Nope not no more not since MoS iLL done became an anal sergion

Please try and be as prompt

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your gonna need to kick back and reboot once i kill you/
ya computer will recognize my record, even if it dont phase u/
you gotta win list...dont even think about adding my name/
turn you insane, with these lyrical beatings,remember my name?/
put holotips to fill the holes in your chest/
'cum harder'...down the 'y' in your breast/ (yeah virgin thats what it looks like)
you aint ready for my cum'in' back...like 'gay men'/ (they cum in back')
hussain said, droppin bombs on you feels like ur in a play pen/
for certian...your the one behind the closed curtain/
your hurtin' yourself while im busy, right here merkin'/
check wheres he's from it says-blank/
fukin shit ass rapper...from the septic tank/

vote up that was my worst spit ever. dont mtter.

feeble got this in my view, more punches.
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ummm crazy battle lmao
feeble minded won this, mos ill needs to work on punches lol
feeble didn't come his best, be it was enuff

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my vote goes to feeble...this line killed that shit

'cum harder'...down the 'y' in your breast/ (yeah virgin thats what it looks like)
you aint ready for my cum'in' back...like 'gay men'/ (they cum in back')
hussain said, droppin bombs on you feels like ur in a play pen/


haha funny shit.....nice punches too...wordplay iight...and flow was hot...overal 9/10

vote - feeble minded

feeble why u battling kids lyke dat?
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vote=mind

no competition

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Ay yo feeble DAMN this line was drastic

you aint ready for my cum'in' back...like 'gay men'/ (they cum in back')
hussain said, droppin bombs on you feels like ur in a play pen/

That took the battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats the best's line i heard for the day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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the wordplay of MoS iLL was really deluxe......
so he gets my vote....

look at my shit with da reason..........please!

peace!

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IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

im sorry mof...but he didnt have any wordplay...do you know what wordplay is? i had wordplay tho...

cum'in' back....that is wordplay...up to you to decide if its good but its wordplay..he had flow but no wordplay...so go get some glasses

yo uppin will hit up a batytle for u fairly bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 vote on this 1st though or leave========------------rrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeergffffffffffffffffffff ffffffffffff

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gotta giv it 2 feeble even tho i think it was closer then peeps been sayin. he did enuff 2 merk mos but i dunno how u cud beat chrit wif rhymes like that. respect dogg cos u know wen 2 come hard. peep my battle

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