YO CHECKIN IN

are we battlen man or what
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yeah hold on i'll set up our battle right now*********************************************** ************************************

i got this feeling like im battling n sync, be afraid of me bitch dont think dont even blink, ull never find me im hiding under ur kitchin sink//
they call u the young hercules, ur more like a guy who hugs trees/
ur a broke ass wigger, who puts a cap gun to his head and pulls the trigger//
dumbass ur not dead// get off the floor and try again//
if at first u dont succeed/ stop cuz u aint never gonna achieve//
dont ever think im done with u cuz i got something always up my sleeve/i live in the dark/ haunt u when the lights go out/
well cuz wat i read ur mind and i know everything ur gonna say/
"hey cyris im gonna inflict u with my deadly virus that runs through ur fuckin iris"
bitch its been said and if u say it again ill make sure ur bloody and dead//

k spit
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yo


cyris haha I aint even gonna pick//you sound like a computer grab ya dick//I'm the monsta under ya bed//don't get scarred cause tell ya momma thanks for tha head//ima lyrical genius//and you a dick suckin penus//you coudn't bring hotness even if you lived in Phoenix//I killed arnold swarzzanagger//and you next cause I'm the new terminator//and you just a plain ol' hata// that's bout to get merk//even ya mamma said that you looked like a dick that's been jerked//so you betta focus//I put that thang on nigga's like you wit Hocus Pocus//everythang about you is fuckin bogus//cyris I killed yo ass like tha west nile virus//


And I'm not Whyte or Black I'm Platinum

THA PLATINUM DRAGON$

uppin ppl
come on ppl lets see some votes
ty
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uppin4somevotes
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imm haveta go wit chris betta flow and punches


vote cyris



get at dis tho 2


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7512#post567512

k ty u man
uppin 4 some votes
come on now ppl lets vote
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i adjusted hercs verse on ms word and puit it into a proper verse shape, there bout the same level of skilz n stuff

u both had sum good punches n stuff

imm a have to give it to th herc but

Cyris Its all good man, just keep uppin ya vocab man n u will be alright, herc u lucky man, for sumone wit dat many psots u needa up ur skillz

Return the favour man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60387

shit dawg fogot to pole my bad
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Imma give this shit to Cyris, te boy came out nicely and kep some pretty good composure, he dident do anytihng overpalyed like young did. Better flow and originality.

Vote-Cyris

yo i adjusted his verse to space out tha lines and they were almosed equal, cyris was just more consistant....
vote=cyris