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Old 06-24-03, 10:41 AM   #1
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Literally and figuratively…I am tha most ferocious…
Terrible with tha words…I’m most atrocious…
If posted…all I hear is ‘nice spit Linez’…’sometimes’…
‘I don’t understand your flow, but I’m…
definitely uppin’ this…’cause your punchlinez is sick!’
How quickly did they forget, that rap is a thing that’s heard…
Only tha most simplistic flows…spit by herbs…
Who don’t really know words…are easily readable…
My vocabulary’s like chirps to birds…unconceivable…
I blurt tha verbs with deliveries that stretch tha bars…
I’ma corvette to cars…my milky way is except tha stars….
I’ve raised tha bar so high, you jump like you’ve stepped in tar…
Tha best critique: ‘nice speech…I can learn from your technique’…
Then may be from tha depths you’d reach…
High enough to tie my shoe-lace…God bless tha weak…
Knowing that there is no hope in posting against me…
I have an attitude that no nut could out wrench me…
Rhyme mechanic…with a lot of torque…I turn on herbs for sport…
You’re out of luck if you turn to your words for support…
Tha latest report…I’ve rewritten Johnny Cochran’s shenanigans…
In court…”If you can’t spit…you must quit”…and I’m standin’ in…
Tha court yard, victoriously screamin’ as tha verdict is handed in…
I’m damagin’ any MC that ever picked up a pencil…
You couldn’t paint your pictures perfect if I gave you stencils…
Your rhymes are so simple a concept…
That a mathematician gave you bomb threats…
I’ma parallelogram in a rectangular medium…
Stretching tha seams again…with ominous freedom…
What I look like to you is a quirk…and it irks you…
That I have superior works…you can’t work through…
So tha next time you can’t understand my flow…
Put your hands down and just say you don’t know…


I'm Back after some downtime...freeze....
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Old 06-24-03, 12:23 PM   #2
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I Don't Hate It....Its Hott..Pure Fiyah Mayne
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Old 06-25-03, 08:26 AM   #3
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Thanx, I'll check you out dunny...peace
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Old 06-25-03, 11:55 AM   #4
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do my eyes deceive me?....can it truly be?....it cant be....it is?...it is linez! back from whereever it was tha tyou went away to...you rback...with a dope ass drop...v.nice linez. very nci eindeed...the battle cat side ot ya im guessing,very consistent with teh flow...stopped an dstarted a the begining ,nice touch...good lines like johny cochrans ...lmao that was good...made me laugh several times linez...much enjoyed...

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Old 06-25-03, 02:04 PM   #5
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sick wid it,, this post was john blaze..

If posted…all I hear is ‘nice spit Linez’…’sometimes’…
‘I don’t understand your flow, but I’m…
definitely uppin’ this…’cause your punchlinez is sick!’


stanza was so fuckin true, worded excellently..

nice work jo.

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Old 06-25-03, 02:13 PM   #6
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Wow................Nice Shit Linez my fellow brotha.....masha allah......Sick COntend Love the FLow

Overall have to say 8/10

Nice drop
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Old 06-26-03, 09:16 AM   #7
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thanx Gus, Ruthless, and Atetrack...sorry I've been away for awile but I don't always have a computer and life is mad drama...man yesterday, a friend of mine( a muslim brother of mine ) got robbed, took four hot ones and passed away--please pray for him and all the dead muslims...you never know when you gonna go...and I'm not feeling it today, because I'm 1200 miles away...I won't be able to go to the funeral, you know we bury em kinda fast...but man he will be missed...anyways I might write about it, may Allah have mercy on his soul...forgive his sins and put him in paradise...we muslims got to do better, worship Allah more and prepare for our death...life is short no matter who you are...we need to be more serious...peace
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Old 06-27-03, 09:12 AM   #8
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uppin cause ya'll sleepin
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Old 06-27-03, 09:38 AM   #9
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this was bananas dunny...the vocab, the topic, man everything...masha Allah dunny you got nice skill....representin the Deen namean...respect and wahid
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Old 06-27-03, 09:44 AM   #10
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Thanx Narc...I want to colab...you have a herb you want to diss I'll be there...you want to talk deen I'll be there...let me know...peace
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Old 06-27-03, 08:12 PM   #11
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shit was siiiiick yo....nice word play n metas...like this line alot...
"I’m damagin’ any MC that ever picked up a pencil…
You couldn’t paint your pictures perfect if I gave you stencils…"
that was hott....stay up.....~1~
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Old 06-27-03, 08:36 PM   #12
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that was some tight ish right there...daaaaaaaamn!

when i read it the first time i was like ya know.. but the second time i was like LOL

the madd wordplay was awesome...hott vocabs and man the flow totally fits the piece perfectly...

"I’ma parallelogram in a rectangular medium…
Stretching tha seams again…with ominous freedom…"

^^there is something along these lines that definitely liked the piece

i liked it ...madd drop!
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Old 06-27-03, 09:36 PM   #13
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that was a really dope battle keep spittin
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Old 06-28-03, 08:59 AM   #14
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It's not a battle dunny...but, ummm thanx anyways
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Old 06-28-03, 05:46 PM   #15
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wordplay was dope...hott vocabs and nice flow..keep this up
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