yo 10-20 lines
no d/r
no feddin
no crew
no hatin
good luck
spit at same time
45 min afta check in.

checkin in.........................

fuck it im lazy lets go 15 llines aight
15 lines max............................................... ...........

im sorry man i aint sure if im spitin tonight but i'll hit dis up eventually sometime 2day. aight ~one~

sure I can still beat pre-writers don't worry
pre-write all you want you fuckin fagit ima still merk ya ass
FUKIN PREWRITERS

u can spit 15 imma prolly jus spit 10 n e ways iight holla ...............................................

OK sry bout sayin prewrita i just fukin hate them
ya i got 3 quarters of my verse on ms word done so it won't be long

yo here ya go
My 'Radars-Detected' I 'Graph-the-Whack'... Like 'Spines-on-Ground' I 'Flat-ya-Back'!!
Got 'Secret-audios-Hidden' the way I 'Traped-your-Tracks'... Franchise bitch afta I?m
done all your ?gimics? will be ?crys?I 'Spit-it-Lethal' So 'Gasp-and-Turn'... 'Death-is-Near'
So 'Grasp-and-Learn'!! 'Roll-ya-Forward' with Knives I 'Gash-and-Turn'.. Like putting you
in 'Alliahs-Memmories' I'll help power 'Crash-and-Burn'!!...
Just 'Metaphorically-Speaking' Im like 'Firemen' the way I 'Put-out-ya-Flames'.. Im Like
'Non-Belivers' the way I 'Doubt-ya-Fame'!! Call me a 'Shocked-Caller' the way I
'Shout-ya-Name'
Give me a 'Lighter' And i'll 'Blaze-Quick'... Like I do 'Speed-with-Hits' I 'Pace-Fists'!! I
'Sugar-Coat-a-Wrists' Like I 'Glaze-Slits'... I 'Sterile-the-Saliva' But still 'Power' can't
'Phase-Spits'!! Your 'Early-with-Weakness' Like takin 'Late-Shits'...
I 'Top-a-Shadow' Cause 'Nights-Above'... I 'Strike-a-Punch' Like 'Lights-with-Love'!!
Givin 'Power-the-Right' Like 'Abused-with-Violence'... I aint 'Hear-your-Verse'.. shit all
you 'Used-is-Silence!!...

dog dat aint cool I AM NOT A FUCKIN PRE-WRITER SHIT U CANT
JUST GO EVERY FUCKIN WHERE JUST MUTHA FUCKIN CALLIN
SOME BODY A FUCKIN PRE WRITER dayum son its almost 1:00
am here i don't no where u from but im tired. i did this battle
cuz i aint had one in a while, i always spit of da top. when i
meant sum time to day i'd didn't no where i wuz gonna go after
i got up cuz i had sum shit had to do like shoppin. dayum son
i hater pre writers 2 but don't go accusin everyone of being one.
No Beef iight.~0ne~

smoke cheeba cheeba momma said it's bad smoke cheeba cheeba it makes me glad


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o i aint see that nice drop ill it hit back wit out pre writin i promise
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k man sry bout accusin nbo hatin good luck.............................................. ....................................

Damn, I must trully be as hard as a boldier cuz ya flows don't
move-me/
As a matter of fact you wack cuz u got wins by battlin new-b's/
This must definitly be a jamican party cuz dis "herb" takes da
cake/
even if i wuz as high as bob marley i'd no sayin your great is
a big mistake/
beatin me is like a kid wit dyslexia tryin to find A-Sum/
but u cant do that cuz ya lyrics stink so much ya make "sure"
play dumb/(sure is deodorant)
I peed ya shit before it wuz so ugly it scared india irie
and-her-hun/(boyfriend)
shit i cant figure out who sucks more u,a vacuum, or a pamela
anderson/
maybe u should "D'Cyde" to hide cuz ya "ludacris" and imma
lyrically "throw them bows"/
Shit if ya had "Aids" wit a "bladder infection" ya still wouldn't
have "ill flows"/

iight it wuz of da top not pre writin. so let's get sum votes.

i edited stink cuz i spelled it wrong iight.
~0ne~ .................................................. ...........................................
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D'Cyde took this battle hands down.....better wordplay...punches...and flow........nice attempt tryin to come back after his.....but not nice enuff.....vote=d'cyde

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Aiight vote = D'Cyde

His Verse was Much Harder -
From Punches..etc...To ur Multies..had Some str8 Metaz also...
Solid Verse...Franchise..Well your verse Was Good Also..That herb take the Cake line seen it b4..well and some of ur lines wasnt as Hard hittin as D'Cyde...also..

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