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You spit first

see i been in this game before your first word was ever spoken

before your parents seperation and your family was broken

you always have something smart to say like a real text book brotha

i am too but recognize i'll always be better than you if there is no otha

see you can step to these ill words if you wan't but your soon to be rejected

just like i was talkin shit to your big sista bitch you get straight disrespected

see i aint as hard as pac but i'm more of a thug than you

just like the blood test between me and you...the baby's yours and you know it's true

man when you try to spit i don't hear shit i just see saliva running down ya mouth

you~remind~me of what ya girl did to me last night (OH) how quickly she went down south

I'm just spitten fidelity so i don't know why startin to look angry

i really don't give a damn if you do get pissed but strangely

it was your mother who convinced me to take this battle easy

so she got on her knees beggin me not to hurt her baby so i started actin sleazy

I aint gonna break the promise i made to your mamma so i'll end this real quick

(really quick) she said when this over i can skeet on her face (again) after she through suckin my dick

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This kid wants to battle named MC_RIPPA,
But he's just Cinderella without the glass slipper.
Even with a Fairy Godmother, you couldn't rap,
People stay away from your lyrics like a rusty bear trap.
Any MC with half a mouth could eat you for lunch,
Your lyrics are just pillows when you try to punch.
When you're on the mic, people start to flee,
You can't afford your own rhymes on MP3.
You couldn't get amped if you were smoking crack,
My punches come 1-2 and you're on your back.
This battle is more separated than Apartheid,
But there will be no Mandela to restore your pride.
Go back to your TV, go back to your ESPN,
My mother wouldn't do you, she only likes men.

good shit............. VERDICT RORY...............cause his shit was well funny esp that glass slipper and rusty bear trap shit.......................WORD................
any one readin this shit.....
check out my battles with "killa mc" and "complex manthrax" vote fair you crazy kids

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my vote gos to mcrippa
funny,better punches,good flow.
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rory.......vote
in my oppinion you got this with punches
but id say you could use a little work on your structure but everything else looks good

good luck

PeAcE

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