i hate to battle a new-b but i guess this will just help him elevate

rules:
10-15 lines
no crew hate d/r votes


i'll spit after u check in

uppin 4 dis nigga to check in

damn it took u long enough

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u spit first cuz i gotta get my other battles closed

A'ight sorry about the wait - i had to do shit yesterday but i am checkin in right now............................................... ....

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A'ight 15 lines? more like a waste of my time/
Your greatest rhyme is like a waste of mine/
we all know why this nigga wants me to go first/
he has to go get the pen to pre-write his verse/
he can talk the big talk - but he can't fuckin walk!/
He's more like a ramblin rappin rapper...with writers block/
it's time to open these cats fucking eyes so they can see/
That this little bitch is just another washed up fuckin' emcee/
Winnin me is like sayin a gay guy survived over H.I.V/
I'm spittin nothin but fire - burning the fuckin' stages/
this cat is behind my shoulder - copyin' my pages/
pullin out a loaded nine - no ones mind is as sick as mine/
I'll battle you and load bullets into you at the same time/
was it worth it? think this shit was picture perfect?/
i'll put your face to the sidewalk, one stomp and curb it/
I put each rapper lined up in a fucking straight lined row/
I kill each of em, your turn, nothin personal, you know?/

Sorry about the over lap of lines...but i couldnt stop....

iight let's do dis shit

doesn't matter who goes first theres no feeding

and i'm changin it 2 20 lines max
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Shit faggot u talkin bout not personal I'm comin wit personalized-text/
Killin u, blowin more power wit my punches like heated verbally complex//
Ur rhymes have no killin ability, everybody reads my shit knowin dat dey feelin-me/
Comin wit punches of all the trilogies i'm the realest nigga u see//
The mutagenic agents I spit'll extinguish the flames light in torches/
Ya shyt gets aborted cuz ya weaker then da paramagnetic forces//
this nigga is elementary, so go back and study, cuz time has tookits toll/
Intelect is a forgetfull 10 years old, and his style is as solid as playdough//

~enough playin around~

now i gotta break-ya-rhyme....i told you ta wait-in-line/
i'll slice ya back wit a knife on fire just ta incinerate-ya-spine//
u sayin ur verse is nasty..thats why i threw tha shit-in-tha-garbage/
i'm pitch'n-this-carnage can't believe this cats hit'n-his-hardest//
claim i'm write'n a novel...yet my story-has-broke-you/
tha sites tired of you...ya even bored-ya-whole-crew//
claim ya kill'n me...i find you a joke...-condem-me/
you've already lost you had a better chance wit oprah-winfrey//

iight uppin 4 votes
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iight this shit's been up for like 3 days and no one voted

c'mon yall don't sleep on dis

uppin 4 votes
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crac u killed dis nigga man
that was a sic sick sick verse
he did ok for a newbie, but i think u punched him to death
hate to free post but i need vets like u to read my shit for honest votes
i got one wit dean in the front lines now and one wit mc killah check'um out and keep deez dope lyrics
holla

aight that wastight that guy did pritty good being a newb and all but crack taks it cuz he had more elavated punches/ rhymes............................................ ....but yo rhymekiller you did aight that was tight.....,not good enough to beat a vet.. but still godd stuff.............................



hey yo people can yago check outthis battle.............i need some honest votes it's a 10 bar...basic....funny..match............
[urlRapbattles.com Forums - metaphore vs nutcase[/url]

REmember 2 poll vote

thanx 4 votin
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Well...

That was certainly quite the merkin...

The newb came pretty good, for a newb.
But, like we see from so many of them...
It was real simple, elementary, whatever adjective ya wanna use.
It still means not enough wordplay, weak metas, etc.
The strongest line he had was the "curb" one.
That was it.

Crack threw nice everything down and took this home easily.

Holla back...
Drop a vote, please...

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do i seriously have to explain this?.....
if he beat me..he ought do what he jud did to ryhmekiller

crackil took this in every imaginable category.....

drop an honest vote here..thanks
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=65626