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aight, good luck, i'll spit first

okay...lets go..

you claim you a "mastermind", but I got your "brain in shackles"/
I'ma make your neck like "Rice Krispies", cause its gonna "snap" and "crackle"/
I'll "punch you in your gut", so you can "stomach my hits"/
even if you "ate poisoned food", you couldn't "spit sick shit"/
he needed help with his career, so he got some "band-aids"/
your lyrics couldn't be "on point" if they lived on "knife blades"/
"shitting bricks" is the only way you could have "hard shit"/
I leave you dying and crying in my bottomless lyrical pits/
I'll "decapitate" you quick, so you can get "a-head" in this race/
you'll still be behind in this battle, cause I set the lyrical pace/
you would have to "sniff my lines" in order for you to be "dope"/
you couldn't "master" my "mind" even if you whipped it with a rope/

go..........good luck

uppin for Mastermind........................................ ..............................................

mast3rm!nd checkin' in this bitch.......................I'm bout ta break ya off ya heard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A yo,I grab tha mic with little anticipation/
im tha gun blazin caucasin/
he's a victim of verbal constapation/
a fag of tha recievin' persuasion/
enjoys anal invasion and sodimazation/

look,im no psyhic,but heres my prediction/
this fags rhymes are either pre-written or bitten/
my intuition gives me this premention/
mines tha hottest shit spittin/
and on this guys who im shittin'/

good luck dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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This was kinda lopsided Audo obviously one on every aspect in my opinion no beef though masta

hey niggas can you hit this shit up with ana honest vote? thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67863

Audo took this one with a better verse, came harder in every aspect, but Mastermind was aight, he has potential, keep ya head up

vote - Audo

hit this up with a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67829
thx

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If you need help in battlin, check in the Tutoriouls in the wackness emergency center...aight!!!!!!!

u need to lengthen some lines, ass punches, stuff like that, u got the vocab part, but check out Wackness Emergency Center, they have threads in there that have the 411 on battling

Yeah I'ma have to go with audo on this one, although mastermind had a pretty nice spit its just hos punches werent hitting as hard as they could've been

Vote=Audo

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Thanx a lot ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!