A'ight herez da rulz:

5 Barz or Ten Linez
No Crew Votez
No Hata Votez
No D/R Votez
No Feedin'
Spittin' at da same time...no "u spit firs' shi'"..
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A'ight?

i 'fold' ur 'body' like 'pants to a crease'//
'transfer' ur 'body fluids' out until ur 'body' is 'dried up' and 'deplete'//

remark the last wordz of a killa buried inside me/
'I' have ur 'balls' cut off put them in ur 'eye sockets' so this bitch can 'see'/

about what im 'sayin sprayin' nothing but 'snipers and rifles'/
'barbarically' remove his 'kidneys' and other 'organs' so vital//

'killin u softly' like 'Lauren hill' with these 'words'//
'fuck wit me dog' u be in the 'dirt' with 'earthworms'//

i mutate ya 'body' like 'mutations of chromosomes'//
I put 15 bullets to ya 'head' 'split ya dome'//

alil quick spit cuz i gotta bounce

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Nice Verse Ill drop a fair vote after both yall drop

vote on this please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67808

nice verse

can i get some voters on str8 jacket vs twistabill
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Nice vs dawg can I get some votes on this battle below? thanks niggas

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67515

Herez da rematch, dawgz...

$Bar 1$
Ma "words" are jus' lyrically "absurd"/ ridiculous bu' ingeniously "heard"/ when I spi', I'm da vet, u tha "herb"/ Ma rythmz flow, they fly off like a fuckin' "bird"...//

$Bar 2$
I I spit in ya'll "faces"/ ma punchlines leave ya so metephorically bloody, ya'll need hyperbolic "braces"/ "disgraces" of RB showni' they "racist"/ jus' fo sayin' 'nigga' gets dem a lyrical "facelift"/ tha list 'o katz merk'd worn on ma wrist like a "bracelet"/ Vertz r only honored ta face me, "face it!"//

$Bar 3$
Hypnotic's like a lil' "bitch"/ He's mo fuckin' homo-sexual than "Lilo and Stitch"/ I've killed dis faggot mo times in this rhyme alon, than da Godfather killed a "snitch"/ Hypnotic's jus' a disease, hangin' 'roun like an uncurable "itch"/ Hypnotic merk'd me befo, but I've flipped da lyrical "switch"//

$Bar 4$
I myself got ma rhymes "lifted"/ Like crack, ma rhymez get ya'll niggaz "addicted"/ when I unleash ma rhymes, I unleash da "wicked"/ I've jus' left Hypnotci lyrically "evicted"...//

$Bar 5$
Yo time is up, it's "null"/ I've surpass' ya, yo limit is "full"/ Betta get suckin' now, bitch, 'cause Ima strung like a fuckin' "bull"!//

Good battle, dawg...

UPPIN(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

both wer real tight
hypnotic always comes with some nice punches
gangsta one eally improved from tha last one i read
i was feeling gangstas flow a little more on this one
very tough vote

VOTE gangsta


can i get some honest votes on str8 jacket vs twistabill

Yo, thx dawg...don't sleep UPPIN(2)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

nice verses by both, but I can't vote cause me and Gangsta One is in the same crew...Gangsta One, drop your verse for the NYG Anthem in our sub-forum.

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67413

Both good

Gangsta out classed Him
in wordplay and dissing

Good battle
vote= Gangsta

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67246

nice shit from Gangsta...u had some tight ass rhymes homie....and Hypnotic....work on rhyming more...and u'll have this shit down pat too aight....anyway...

Best Line from Hypnotic:
nice shit here....Lauren Hill line was nice...lol....

Best Line from Gangsta One:
ur opener and closer was weak...but ur body of ur verse was pretty ill...nice punches all over...tight lines...and u rhymes mad ass shit...

Overall: i think Gangsta One took this....nothing hard on Hypnotic...just work on a lil' more complexity with ur verses...u nah mean homie....keep the shit up u two...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Gangsta One
Vocab - Gangsta One
Metas - Gangsta One
WordPlay - Gangsta One
Flow - Hypnotic (Gangsta ur barz are too strung out)
RhymeScheme - Gangsta One
Creativity - Gangsta One
Complexity - Gangsta One
Violence - Gangsta One

Vote - Gangsta One

peace
4:20

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A'ight thx dawgz UPPIN(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

COME ON DAWGZ DON' SLEEP ON DIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo Gangsta One, could you drop the final vote on this battle, CREW VOTES count on it cause it is intercrew, but I am up 4-0, could you drop a vote?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67413