20- 40 LINES not BARz
DUE 08-17-03 by midnight central
((mine'll probably be up sooner but just in case..))
No CREW - DICKRYDEN - HATE - SWAYED votes

and by swayed i mean you cant go in another thread
and say "vote on mine then ill vote on yours"
and yo ucant advertise this battle in ANY way...

just simply up it for votes and that's it



oNe

checkin in
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checking in
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Ohio mother fucker its time for you to meet the best,
No wonder this mans so fucking retarded, hes a product of incest//
It like im straight from hell cause My lethal sounds pound ya eardrums and hit ya brain, Leavin it stained with images of infinite pain//
You couldn't be elevated if you was sniffin' the caine, and sippin' the grain liquor during liftoff on a plane//
Ya joints are rotten, tryin' to run with the big boys...ya far behind, Gay sex after the club is the only way you ever cocked a 9//
I'll put my hand through ya chest and smash ya heart to hit a beat, Crack you open,hollow you out, roll you and smoke ya like a Swisher Sweet//
I'll rip ya feet off ya ankles and yell 'kick it', step up with it, I'll stab you in the voice-box with fence picket to keep you quiet like a legless cricket//
You're piss warm at best...I'll spray you with hottness deform ya flesh, hit you with bullets--like Bret Favre, I'll put 4 on your chest//
j~dubya lives past expectations N the guns destroy nations,
Reading my verse he try to match it leaving him overwork like slaves on plantation//
I'll put you on da east of niagra fallz so you flow rght...like a no armed person you put up no fight//9
You cant get with this freestyle feine, spittin obscene, so violent i make cops vomit at crime scenes, I kill millions on contact like listerine//
dubs will separate your jaw from your body now you got freedom-of-speech,this verse clears your mind of a victory like you was dreaming-with-bleach//
without complication i'm erasin this problem with my lyrical vaccination,look how you pacin- put you in german death camps to help your concentration//
ur Flow is slow on the draw that must mean he really sticks to his gun,He got left short of breath like my spit,hit him in the pits of hi-lungs//
You’re mad I stole your thunder and left ya mind a mess in a brain-storm,Knock your conscience out of body and leave ya former figure a faint-form//
You can’t plead for your life cus Tek ain’t running any bargainer’s-market,Like Pearl-in-Pakistan, I’ll have‘ya death more graphic than Hard-Target//(Pearl Was Tha Reporter Cought n Killed In Pakistan)

hit this up...then ill vote here


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73357

my verse'll probably be up tonight or early tomorrow but definately by deadline

:-)
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damn j-dub that shit was off the chain fo sho

only a few more posts & I can vote

hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=73429

and I will come back after Abs drops & I have 100 posts to vote

hurry up dogg
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like "christians against homosexuals" im just here to "set-things-straight"/
every word you say starts fucking tha next cause this bitches text-is-gay!!// (LoL!)
you must wreck-your-brain, comming up with these half ass blatant-scripts/
like "homeless people without a cup" it must be hard for you to "make-some-sense"//
cause honestly you AINT-that-sicc and J-ya-spits must taste-like-shit/
You doo-doo eater..why you here? cause honestly we all Hate-you-bitch!!//
you made-me-pissed and now im heated..take this first aid kit i know-youll-needit/
now take your verse and go-reread-it and dont come back till your flow-is-even.........//

:::2 months later:::::

i told-you-penis...to write something nice but im tired of waiting-for-shit//
i must of took tha "TOMATO PASTE" out ya heart drink cause im "DE-V8-In-THIS-BITCH!!//
the way you "rattling" newbies and snuggin ya huggies leaves you "looking-like-a-baby"/
you could sell your soul to a "HAIR TRIMMER" and STILL you couldnt-even-"FADE"-me//
call my versatility a gilatine, cause it just severed-ya-whole-style/
tha only thing you in "CONTROL" of is ya "PANEL" when you Edit-ya-profile!!// (damn)
ill throw apples and oranges at ya dome with intentions to confuse-ya-roof/
while you throwing slaps and homosexual words to get me abused-by-fruit!!//
you had "SEVEn" WINS and thought you had one more but instead you "GOT-ATE!!"/
your words are like "mosquitos" cause your multis are all "off" like "repelent bug spray"//
to late to learn-from-your-mistakes this bitch thinks he's in a HEARST-now-so-its-safe/
BUT THIS IS NEVER GONNA STOP ILL BE LEAVING BATTLES VERSES-AT-YA-GRAVE!!!//...((BITCH!!!))

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uppin for votes
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vote here.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=73606... and i will vote here... peace out doggs....but jdubya took it... better everytihng...


"Karat"

Just to put my 2 cents in

....this bar was elementary as fuck....

cause honestly you AINT-that-sicc and J-ya-spits must taste-like-shit/
You doo-doo eater..why you here? cause honestly we all Hate-you-bitch!!//

just my two cent if i could vote

i'd say j~dubya

punches was a lil harder
flow i'd say was equal tho
vocab is 100% j~dubya

thats my two cents if it means anything

thanx 4 listenin

uppin 4 votes
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wtf no offence i thought absaloot came a lil stronger wit his punches but flow metas complexity multies and everything else was about even tho but props 2 both tho im out holla

*how much would coulda wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck wood*

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