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deal. I'm going out, I'll post tonight. . I swear.
I'll adhere to the rules, but none of that, "You
post, then I'll go edit my prewrite" bullshit.
But I can trust AMEND, that I am sure of.

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He thought I was duckin, HA!

Amend sweats Quo. . For the record, I condoned his gay life
But for now, I'm occupying this toddler til he's owned by Jae Cyph
In the zone he stays tight, he's burnt. . Afraid, I tanned this fan
Stick to the 2-3, or press. . Cause you're slayed in man-to-man
Nice avy, poser. . Ekko? This bitch can't fend off classics
Stick to Fashion Bug. . At least then you'd fit the demographic
A legitimate win over AxL? Christ, Amend kicks consistent lies
I'll put you out of your misery, yeller. . And click, "Submit Reply"
But I'm not finished! I'd use feet, but my fists'll stomp this "vet"
Brookyln? What a noob. . Amend still lists accomplishments?
I'm too subdued for you. . This loser assumed that he breached hate
Three locations? He forgot to mention he was booed out of each state
I'd say he had a chance. . But then, I'd have to stop and delete mine
Every punch he's done is played. . 10 bucks says he drops a "De-Feet" line
Fuck this kid, no remorse; All filler, you must agree and should mix punch
He disappears after every loss. . So, my friend, I'll see you in six months

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Things To Know
Aliases- LyricAli, Quality, Atta
Atta Was The 9-11 Leader
Always A Muslim Type Name, But He's Not Muslim
He's At RnR & Mod Of Both RB Sites
Is Obsessed With SLiK
In Every Thread Jae Cyph Posts In
Lost Title Belt To Evolve
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Bin Ladin Freak!, Muhammed's Weak - I'll Give Ya Lyric-Ali's Disease
Probably Be, Abolished See - Cause Jihad's To Peace In Theology's
Quality,To Me U Lack - Generic Knock-Offs Never Leave The Rack
I Cant Believe This Cat - An RB Vet, But At Rhyme N Reason's WAK
Leave G. In Stacks, Your Still Nonsense - Stop Grabbin My Pockets
Got The Upper Reach, Kuz I Keep Won's In The Back Of My Wallet
Unless Strapped To A Rocket, This Match Is Mine - So Go Get A Life
Fuckin Shadow, Which One Do U Want To Be With - SLiK Or Cyph
Dickless Dyke, You Wont Score - Until After Your Leaving This World
Got A Muslim Fetish - So When He Dies, He Can Finally Be With A Girl
G.s Unfurled, Like I Gave Him A Whirl - Muhammed Atta's Your Idol?
No Wonder Your On A 'Crash Course', Tryin To Evolve To Ya 'Title'?
Droppin This Rival, Be-Friending Ya Verse - We Can Kick It Together
If U Cant Beat Em, Join Em - And My Word-Perfect Addition Is Never

lets go bar by bar first

G's first

Amend sweats Quo. . For the record, I condoned his gay life
But for now, I'm occupying this toddler til he's owned by Jae Cyph

^^good opener wordplay personals bangin 8

In the zone he stays tight, he's burnt. . Afraid, I tanned this fan
Stick to the 2-3, or press. . Cause you're slayed in man-to-man

^^sickness tha basket reference was on point lol 9

Nice avy, poser. . Ekko? This bitch can't fend off classics
Stick to Fashion Bug. . At least then you'd fit the demographic

^^good punch but demographic? too wordy 6

A legitimate win over AxL? Christ, Amend kicks consistent lies
I'll put you out of your misery, yeller. . And click, "Submit Reply

^^lol yeller nice punch wit personal 7

But I'm not finished! I'd use feet, but my fists'll stomp this "vet"
Brookyln? What a noob. . Amend still lists accomplishments?

^^another legit personal 7

I'm too subdued for you. . This loser assumed that he breached hate
Three locations? He forgot to mention he was booed out of each state

^^^lol first line was dumb but tha second was great 8

I'd say he had a chance. . But then, I'd have to stop and delete mine
Every punch he's done is played. . 10 bucks says he drops a "De-Feet" line
Fuck this kid, no remorse; All filler, you must agree and should mix punch
He disappears after every loss. . So, my friend, I'll see you in six months

^^2 bars one shot only personal in tha last bar lol mix punch ok finisher id say 6 for tha first bar and a solid 8 for tha last

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AMEND...

Bin Ladin Freak!, Muhammed's Weak - I'll Give Ya Lyric-Ali's Disease
Probably Be, Abolished See - Cause Jihad's To Peace In Theology's

^^good opener dont really like ur selective word style but ima look past that and go for content 6 cuz...ali lines played no matter how much u switch it

Quality,To Me U Lack - Generic Knock-Offs Never Leave The Rack
I Cant Believe This Cat - An RB Vet, But At Rhyme N Reason's WAK

^^more of a diss towards RB but oh well..nota well thought out punch 5

Leave G. In Stacks, Your Still Nonsense - Stop Grabbin My Pockets
Got The Upper Reach, Kuz I Keep Won's In The Back Of My Wallet

^^illness wordplay was sick 9

Unless Strapped To A Rocket, This Match Is Mine - So Go Get A Life
Fuckin Shadow, Which One Do U Want To Be With - SLiK Or Cyph

^^uh strapped to a rocket? lol made up for it in ur second line 7

Dickless Dyke, You Wont Score - Until After Your Leaving This World
Got A Muslim Fetish - So When He Dies, He Can Finally Be With A Girl

^^lol 9

G.s Unfurled, Like I Gave Him A Whirl - Muhammed Atta's Your Idol?
No Wonder Your On A 'Crash Course', Tryin To Evolve To Ya 'Title'?

^^personals 8

Droppin This Rival, Be-Friending Ya Verse - We Can Kick It Together
If U Cant Beat Em, Join Em - And My Word-Perfect Addition Is Never

^^^......................sorry i didnt get it sounded like u gave in and sed hey no hard feelings lol 6

total 50

cant go by points cuz AMEND's verse was shorter..seemed as if amend had tha harder personals but Ghod had tha punches and wordplay...flo def goes to AMEND ...creativty mmm tie but as far as from head to toe top of verse to bottom GHOD gets this AMEND seemed to have fell off in his closer like he was tryin to make amends or somethin lol sick battle though

vote GHOD

the fuck? ^^ you contradicted yourself in that vote numerous times. . He didn't poll, so I guess it doesn't matter.

By the way, I'm not on RnR, nor do I mod here. . I do love Slik, and what the hell took you so long?

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ok now. .

are u bitchin or swayin, make up ya mind man sheesh!
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one of the better battles on RB of recent memory..


each of your closers were the best part of your verses..

other quotable lines

Amend

Unless Strapped To A Rocket, This Match Is Mine - So Go Get A Life
Fuckin Shadow, Which One Do U Want To Be With - SLiK Or Cyph

^dope

G.s Unfurled, Like I Gave Him A Whirl - Muhammed Atta's Your Idol?
No Wonder Your On A 'Crash Course', Tryin To Evolve To Ya 'Title'?

^dope..although most people wont get it

Amend sweats Quo. . For the record, I condoned his gay life
But for now, I'm occupying this toddler til he's owned by Jae Cyph

^lmao...

on the whole i believe this was a good battle from two of the better heads at RB..

both had their moments and neither seemed to falter too much..

but Amends originality and personals are what made me decide to vote in his favor

Vote-Amend

Damn this battle was close holy shit so hard to seperate them it had a little bit of everything,,,both had solid punches, personals yada yada yada......but im going on just the punches were written out and how they connected and how hard they hit and with that im going with amend....


vote=Amend

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uppin this
2-1, 2-0
what ever the fuck it is
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G. Hod - I think that you're personal punchlines were pretty nice, because this battle was basically based upon such aspect. I also believe that you focused on more just what happened with your opponent (AMEND) then throw some random shots that wouldn't even relate to him what so ever in the first place. That's what attracted me to your battle verse even more, because it showed me creativity/originality within your battle verse and of course, that's always good. The multis were decent, could've been much better, but some bars had them, as some only had not even one extra rhyme to add to the strength of the scheme in the flow. The structured format in this battle verse of yours was quite good, actually.. At the end, you begun slippin' up and letting bars go longer than others, but overall it was pretty nice for that aspect..

My favorite bar that G. Hod used against AMEND in his battle verse..

"I'd say he had a chance. . But then, I'd have to stop and delete mine
Every punch he's done is played. . 10 bucks says he drops a "De-Feet" line"


AMEND - You threw personal punchlines with some more counted multis, then G. Hod which I appriciated seeing after I had read the whole battle verse. Although, the punchlines really did get G. Hod better than he got you, just your personals I felt affected him more, in my own opinion.. Although, some of your punchlines were a bit boring, although in the end the real creativity/originality was edged by you, though.. As for the multis, you used them enough, pretty much in the middle of both VERY good or TOO less, feel me? Enough were in there to strength the bar up.. Which leads us to structured format, this aspect of yours really was balanced and leveled each bar up into a straight line downwards, feel me? The multis filled up each length of the line nicely and it just made it an overall decent battle verse, pretty well written here, mos' definite..

My favorite bar that AMEND used against G. Hod in his battle verse..

"Quality,To Me U Lack - Generic Knock-Offs Never Leave The Rack
I Cant Believe This Cat - An RB Vet, But At Rhyme N Reason's WAK"


Rating
Vocabulary - Tie
Multis - AMEND
Complexity - Tie
Punchlines - AMEND
Creativity/Originality - Tie (Real evened out, one took it in a few lines and then the other, as well.)
Structure/Format - AMEND

Overall - Decent battle, very personal with some real nice punchlines that added to that "personal vibe." Both opponents came decent in the end, but not "great." Just remember, I'm not trying to be mean, nor rude.. I just like to keep it brutally honest, real, and I like to be able to show my love for the members of Rapbattles, mos' def..


Vote - AMEND

Damn, That Vote Is Legend Material The Way RB Is, 3-1-or-3-0 KO
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Seems People Need To Learn To Read
Let Me Break It Down Right:

Flow-G
Punches-G
Multi-Amend
Structure-Both
Enjoyability-G
Creativness-Amend

Overal-G

This Is My Word And It Is A Good Word. Take Time To Read Both Mc's Spit And You Will See G Won This. It Was Very Hard To Judge Because Both Dropped Sick Ass Verses But I Clearly Thought G Won. Props To Both Mc's For a Sick Battle.

For The Idiots That Want To Say My Opinion Doesent Count Because I Am A Noob Then Just Pm Me Instead Of Saying It Here.

Well No Are Comin PM's From Me, I Dont Care 3-1 or 3-2
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this was a good battle...both came with nice punches...i think amend had tha better verse...very close to call tho...

this line took it for amend...

Quality,To Me U Lack - Generic Knock-Offs Never Leave The Rack
I Cant Believe This Cat - An RB Vet, But At Rhyme N Reason's WAK"

vote- amend