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09-13-03, 03:46 PM
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Welcome To....[ Part I ]
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Welcome To, The Cities Of Rb’s Chosen Few... Our Gun Ridden Towns, But So Beautiful Under Review... This Is Where We Live, Our Cultures Goin Through A Sieve... Streaming Outta Control, Our Cities Are Evil As A Whole... But Can You Judge Us, By These Places Which We Play A Small Role... :.::..:::ThugzDoCry:::..::.: Yo this is TDC reppin the A to the Dam....Amsterdam// But New York, And LA, is where they at my real fam // Moved to this paradise on earth, when i was nine,..// Legaly stoned,^werd hoe's at every street wit asses damn fine// Weed,Booze,Bitches u just name it and its here to find// I think of blunts tastin so damn fine when im in Amsterdam state of mind/ All them fake G's talkin bout drugz, like its a scam, wannabe's like beanie seagel// Just hit the streetz of A'dam, an ull find a heaven where u can do it all legal//...................... *******Bash is shown in a Knicks Throwback fitted ********** *Come on skiddlez tell em where u at dawg..some kinda puddle off mud?* :.::..:::SkiddleZ:::..::.: Hell no dawg its Bronx....yeah baby....what/ Look, its the birthplace of hip hop, milestone in history/ Gone through, over 100 years, of pain poverty, with stability/ Craziness,overcomes all laziness, rappers here are certified perfect/ I didn't stutter, didn't utter the wrong words, and i didn't slurr it/ I rep my city to the fullest to the day that my lights are turned out/ Because to make it in this city,2 different roads,choose the right route/ Its the King of the Ghettos, leader of all Hip Hop and Rap/ Through the many years of the destruction, our heart is still intact/ I owe it to my city, New York, , my borough is the Bronx/ Because its the only reason, why today, I'm here writin my songs/ *Eyo Word~Perfect tell em dawg were are ur days being spend?..........* :.::.:::Word~Perfect:::.::.: My days,? just listen homie im from CROOK~LAND!!!!!! The home of fire syrens-kids playing in broken fire hydrants-tar melt to black clay from ultra viants.// you know the home of the GIANTS-the TWIN TYRANTS-new york chrome violence-give em a moment of silence.......// but we never get one.from BIGGA to JIGGA The city never sleeps.// the streets is watching, the block's on the creep.// my home is sick the alley smell like vomet and hurl-we replace- the torch and place a middle finger on THE STATUE OF LIBERTY like fuck the world.// WE 1 0F THE 5 BOROS WHERE KIDS PACK 4 ARMS LIKE GORO gaphitti artist think they zorro-we liven in DONTES INFERNO.// you know what? this my home-and when i die this will be my burrial zone- BROOKLYN 24 SARATOGA AVE eaither you love or leave alone.// :.::..:::Closin Chorus:::..::.: This Is Our Home Towns, Not as bad As They Sounds... Got Their Ups And Downs, Subtract ional Crime... That’s Why We Gotta Rhyme, Cities In Their Prime... Signing Off, Till Next Time...[Part II, what?....yeah Part II]
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09-13-03, 04:09 PM
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IP:
that was an ill drop...you 3 spit fire..the flow was hot...topic was tight...hot callab... fav part from..thugs do cry is...
"All them fake G's talkin bout drugz, like its a scam, wannabe's like beanie seagel// Just hit the streetz of A'dam, an ull find a heaven where u can do it all legal//" i thought thats was dope...you ripped it there man... skiddlezz had mad flow too i liked this part here... "Look, its the birthplace of hip hop, milestone in history/ Gone through, over 100 years, of pain poverty, with stability/" i thought that was pretty dope..great verse though man... word perfect also spit fire on this collab...i gotta quote this... "The home of fire syrens-kids playing in broken fire hydrants-tar melt to black clay from ultra viants.// you know the home of the GIANTS-the TWIN TYRANTS-new york chrome violence-give em a moment of silence.......//" also the outro was hot.. the chorus i thought was good for this content...all in all you 2 ripped it up...good drop you 3 an i was wondering if ye all had time to gimme some feed back on my joint "different teritorial flow" thanks ye all 9/10
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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09-13-03, 04:10 PM
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yo i ment you 3*
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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09-13-03, 06:22 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
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09-13-03, 06:35 PM
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*Just Try And Stop Me*
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IP:
DAYUM....
3 of u just set the open mic 2 blaze.... i feel bad 4 all the other open micz...cuz u just put them out of business... flow...GREAT wordplay...great vocab...great organization....great structure....great ^^ everything was perfect... all verses fit so perfectly....was really ez 2 read... bravo bravo...**Clap Clap Clap** peace
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09-13-03, 06:38 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
^^lol @ Clap Clap Clap
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09-13-03, 08:26 PM
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IP:
the shit was TIGHT, u three ripped that shit, the vocab was great, the wordplay was awesome, and the content kicked ass. GREAT shit. keep postin yall i really enjoyed readin that post.
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09-13-03, 08:39 PM
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IP:
Nice...
Good stuff... Get soe more ill heads.... Word Life |
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09-13-03, 09:38 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
^Up
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09-14-03, 11:04 AM
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Eddy.
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IP:
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09-14-03, 11:52 AM
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IP:
Tight collab..........................Everyone cameout ill!!!!!!!!...........But why did ya all steal my fucking idea?
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09-14-03, 02:14 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
^^^lol, me and rhytmic thought it up in msn convo, ....so no stealin involved, ....
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09-14-03, 02:35 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP:
Ehhhhhh, these kids are hyping this up too much in my opinion. .
The flow was its best factor, Skiddleez seemed to outshine you both as i read it, just an all around better verse, flow wise - content wise, he had no forced multi's, stuck to the topic, content was decent, nice use of internals to keep my attention - Thugz didnt really bring that element on this piece and you didnt space out the final lines after each verse, so when your supposed to be 'introducing' the next guy - it looks like the line is supposed to be in the verse. . lol. . you may wanna edit that out, iunno. I hadnt seen the topic done before, so that was original i guess, Chrous was a nice touch and Word Perfect had the multi's, i just couldnt catch the flow to his verse at times, he switches styles too much to really keep it down, he switches the pace at which its spit, and that throws me in text. . All in all not a bad piece, made for a decent collab, your styles seemed to compliment each others, nothiong really 'standout' that i feel like quoteing, but it wasnt a bad effort. I Actually liked this, but its just conmstrcutive critisism, no one elevates any from being told 'it was dope' to everything they post. . Eace-Pay!
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09-14-03, 02:42 PM
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Eddy.
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IP:
Thnx for the feed back man , and i will keep some of the aspects, u pointed in mind...
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09-16-03, 07:51 AM
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Eddy.
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IP:
^^cmon,....peepz sum more feedback...
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