3 Different Styles... 3 Different Writers..3 Different Perspectives.
and 3 Completely Different Takes On The Topic.

Chrits Hardcore Gankstuh Steeze

You's a hard nigga... Tho only thing I hear til Chrit is seen...
Hated purely because the melanin dont fit the color scheme...
I can get cabs... big deal... someone can take my place...
Stereotypes have me dispising all about my own race...
Who made these fucking rules?... White kids cant be thugs...
Only wiggas... You know... the cats the MAKE the drugs...
Is it so hard to think of a poor white kid from the street...
Who felt the heat... Who was forced into stealing to eat...
I guess reality is what you see... So enjoy your sheltered life...
Blind your eyes... dont acknowledge my pain and strife...
Find bliss in ignorance... If you stay blinded no existence will there be...
So fuck you!!! And Fuck society!! With that blurred vision of me...
-Chrit

Now To Flip It Over To A More Deep Style, G.Hod

Tangled emotions mangle the potient to successful entrances
My angle is potent, and well-learned. . My rest pulls sentences
That is, via dreams - not so wonderful as they tatter heckled bloods
Whilst grief is instilled in the mind, our dreams'll shatter replicas
A wonder of life, the thunder is light - as my lantern kept us patient
We've plundered our sight in fears of dreaming; is the answer deprivation?!
Are we at fault? Can our problems simply be compressed with sedatives?
Of course not; But the images remain blurry whilst we stress the negatives
A nimble system of simple prisms are likely more effective than the whole
The symbolism of evil images has sadly been elected by its tolls
Let me conclude as I scoff at the nearest gay acting bored
I confess my mind's a blur, as the mirror sways back and forth
-G.Hod

And Now To Finish It Off, Sureal

Various Images Rush, The Shadow Box Opens.
Hurting Within, When Death Rushes Hope In.
Intoxicated Dreams, From Ignored To Extreme.
Childish NightMares, Full Of Weary Screams.
Thoughts Of Happiness Disintegrate In Sorrow.
Making Selfish Feelings, Almost Seem Borrowed.
Here To Stay, Maybe Thoughts Merely Given Away.
Heartache Another Roadblock, Just Causing Delay.
Scattered Thoughts, Causing Minds To Fall Apart.
Memories Forced, Leaving Morally Bleeding Hearts.
Follow Styles And Trends, Wondering What Mimic Is.
Engraved In Stone, Are All Of These Blurred Images.
-Sureal

Wow...

I dont fit in that open mic at all...
Like whoa

at least you got in... my POS drop was given a 'you need to elevate'

Chrit your drop while not like the other 2 was very good (and u told me you dont do open mics) good flow, and it made tons of sense (refer to bottom)

G. Hod

Are we at fault? Can our problems simply be compressed with sedatives?
Of course not; But the images remain blurry whilst we stress the negatives

loved thay line.. the flow was great and the vocab was what i like to see

Sir Eel...
while yours was unique i felt that your piece was a great compliment on both the other parts... you seemed to sum up the previous 2 drops

this was good and Chrit gave me inspiration to drop an OM
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529

this was off the hook and while all three came correct i gotta give the trophy to ghod. he simply came the hardest and with the most emotion.

Are we at fault? Can our problems simply be compressed with sedatives?
Of course not; But the images remain blurry whilst we stress the negatives

theres alot that can be said about that line right there but for now i'll stick with it just ill. every verse brought a little something different to the table and each one added to the entire piece in its unique way. props to all for putting together such and awe inspiring piece.

i thought this piece was ill,all three had a sort of rythm when it came together, good rhyme scheme,wordplay multis and structure from all three. over all i rate this piece 10/10.keep spittin.~!~

i was supposed to be on this.
ill reply later, i hve school. .

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Woa!, chrit, u mad?.....lol^^


Nice collab,...all three came in real diff styles,...but still, ...stayed on topic, .....in my opinion,flowed well, nice vocab....liked it.

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Word...
Subject hit closer to home than most....

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*Uppin*

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Upping for some real feedback...

Chrit:

You are probally the only one who can make a hardcore type of style work on the internet. Your whole verse came out dope, every line was on point. This line stuck out for me, i really felt you here.

Is it so hard to think of a poor white kid from the street...
Who felt the heat... Who was forced into stealing to eat...


G.Hod:

Very easy read, your flow is outstanding, along with your structure. Your verse was very deep in emotion, I like how there was a great change in styles. Your verse was placed well in this collab.. The line i thought that grabbed me the most:

A wonder of life, the thunder is light - as my lantern kept us patient
We've plundered our sight in fears of dreaming; is the answer deprivation?!


Sureal:

Your flow and vocabulary were superb, really worked on this I can see. I like the short line style you were using for this piece it fit well. Line that i got grabbed by:

Intoxicated Dreams, From Ignored To Extreme.
Childish NightMares, Full Of Weary Screams.

Final Comment

Overall: great collab, all three of you came strong with good flow / vocab / imagery.. keep this up and ill be expecting more from all of you..

not so hard on ya self chrit ya still brought it...................all verses i felt..........mainly g.hod his verse was tight................

Alright...how can i break this down.

*thinks*





I got it... Ill start with Chrit.

Chrit's verse was more into the whole not fitting in the soceity. Aspect of racism flowed from his words. Reflected discrimination is still at the corner of our an empty space in our minds. Poverty is upon the grasp of most people. Giving them the reason to do un acceptable things and making scrambled decisions. YOur perspective introduction throughout the whole piece was incredible. COnstructed simple words derived from reality came out great. Sometimes when u look in front of a mirror. Your image is blurry. You can ask me why..Chrit. Your a HOE!..
....maybe your sleepy.


Who's next? Oh yeah..G-HOd

...Middle part can sometimes be sketchy at times ..I know it wasnt arrange based on anything...but yours came really strong...the idea with yours was about the stress that comes and goes in a persons life. It seems retractable...depending on how you would see it as a perfect interpretation with images being so selfishly deformed and questions storming asking whats wrong. THe fact that youve used deep sensational terms aspired your part and perspectives to be totally upgraded and different. You acquired a skill where you can make a topic deeper than what it seems.


And of course...last but not the least....

Sir Eel..

...Very much uniquely done. The scraped images and terminology combined through reality. Your vocab was really good. The idea from your part..was about seeing past through the present and future. THe dimensions of experiences that mustve been cause so much hurt and pain that would retiredly ended up being blurry. Left to right and top to bottom vaguerously awesome.


OVERALL

...From the INtro about life then ending with somewhat death-like ending came together with this collab. Great Piece.

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Damn...

Now that was a breakdown...

Huge thanks to shiznit and saul...