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im tired of waitin so im jus gonna post my verse




here's my verse its jus somthin real quick

ok so u think ur surgeon well im disectin ur brain
infectin severe pain into this virgin like u was expectin my name
when i rhyme im like a lion that cant be tamed
like jupiter i cant be claimed

the only time ur associated with hard bars is in a cell
im put this kids lights out like i was huricane isabel

can u tell? im comin out this battle with a victory
ur punches have no affect its like u aint even dissin me

tryin to be a brain surgeon is the only way ur gettin paid
and yo 4 real fuckin round wit ur mom is the only way ur getin laid

-KEYSTYLE- NA, NIGHT

you're a toothless rambler... about to loose this faster
against me? you seriously needed "better shit"... like a stupid gamber
smash your words... aint violent but i'm a slash this punk!
retract the turd, how the fuck could you stay if you didn't land a punch?
i defeat vets... you're a weak test... your verse fails to eat yet
this kid's delusional... think again... is there anyone you've beat yet?

NOPE... NOW MURDER THIS FOOL
you revere-illness... but neglect-sick-hits... it's why i fighting severe-ly-rics
make you dispair-quickly... i'll smash dead light bulbs... impair-this-dim-bitch!
fear-me,-idiot!... i'll kill a ho... make you die with your mouth open
your name won't "spread out" when the police missing lists' out spoken!
think you're a threat... but got i already lined who i'm gonna herb next (chalk)
i kill with no regret... if you lost the lyrics... this homo couldn't serve here!
i explain-urgence... excellent medical students could get "brain surgeon"
i'd mutilate-tendons... fuck the skull but you seem to make good lame fuckwit!
maxing out the 15 lines... just to go the FUCKIN MILE... ya shit wouldn't "float" found drowned in the NILE!

damn lol.. this was a merking.

vote-brain
hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80962

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surgeioun merked him....took every category....severe that was pretty good for a neb keep elevating
vote=surgeioun goddamit cant spell it...fukit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80972

ayo brain poll on muh battle...

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betta overall verse ...........BSURG..punches landed nicely....creative disses hit good...nice wordplay...

severe started off good but middlewayz he slumped!! did'nt really hit that hard anywayz.....

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okay while this wasn't really a contest severe lyrics did come hard and not bad for a newbie......brain just had the better verse.....all around better.....but most importantly punches win battles and while severe lyrics had some brains hit harder and more often

vote:brainsurgeon

brain surgeon handed it to dis nigga wit punchs wordplay multi's had a good structure and all dat sever ya did bring some tight ass shit but not hard enough vote brain and hit this shit up to please return da favor


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81085

uppin to get this shit over with .................................................. ....................................

Brain killed it, the flow punches, man all of it came off harder an better than severe's..........
Good spits to both, nice try but severe got severely severed......

Vote = brainsurgeon