Aight yall this is my first song, so tell me whatcha think..check it...

Verse 1:
You can say what u please but in the end it boils down to me/
Im the one who stole his house keys and now im back where i should be/
i opened the door pulled out a ruger and sent one to his core/
through his flesh it tore, but i couldnt stop there i wanted more/
i sent eight more bullets through him, hes the one who fucked so screw him/
i cant believe i knew him, but he deserved all these bullets comin to him/
hes the one who pointed a gun at my sister, thank God she was fast otherwise he might have hit her/
but yet he ran up and did her, now im back in hell cause im the ultimate sinner/

Hook:
back in hell for the first time/
i killed a guy so ill serve mine/
even though he wasnt worth a dime/
thats what he gets for doin that crime/

Verse 2:
what the fuck was wrong with this cat, i swear i never wanted to do that/
but he had to find my sister and pull out that gat, and what did he expect, id pull out a bat?/
why the fuck was he tormenting my family, he went to far so i snapped on this G/
now im back in hell so damn me, cause im with Satan and facin my true reality/
while it may not be the real hell it was still hard to find light, there was no day, it was always night/
it seemed like everyday was a new fight, am i really the only person who thought i was right/
the only thing worse is hell, i never would have thought id be stuck in this cell/
this is my new life, no chance for bail, u want more insite in my life, welcome to jail/

Hook:
Back in hell for the first time/
i killed a guy so Ill serve mine/
even though he wasnt worth a dime/
thats what he gets for doin that crime/

Verse 3:
even though i did kill this G, i still had one visitor come and see me/
i had never met this lady, but i had a feelin she was here to save me/
she started askin more questions about that guy, so i told her everything without a lie/
her eyes filled with tears, she was about to cry, so i stared back without a sigh/
i begged her to tell me y she had come, she looked back like i was totally dumb/
her mouth was shaky, i thought she had gum, she said i had destroyed his family and asked if my family wanted some/
she said that he had never wanted to fight, she then said she had been his wife/
she pulled out a gun and i was startin to see the light, she pulled the trigger and ended my life/

Hook:
back in hell for the first time/
i killed a guy so ill serve mine/
even though he wasnt worth a dime/
thats what he gets for doin that crime/

peace.....