Dirty Sally
This is the type of girl I am I'm always craving more
But lately I've been feeling like I'm getting ignored
I really love my man but my mind is too unstable
And I don't feel worthy of his love cause I been unfaithful
My man's homie gives it to me like no man has before
So imagine my surprise when my man walks in the door
Oh damn I pull the sheet up to my chin what have I done?
I try to speak but can't come up with any explanation
Feelings of dirtiness and deception replace satisfaction
I see the plane tickets fall from his hand watch his reaction
My mind is racing I just can't look him in the eyes
I feel his stare burning through me I can feel his despise
I see the ring and the wine I glance at our portrait on the shelf
I really screwed a good thing up and I'm kicking myself
I get dressed quick then try to calm my man down
Honey please don't explode please put the lamp down
I look back on our relationship I regret all the lies
You are the best thing in my life I just now realize
We go with the only choice left and hope the pain ceases
We part our separate ways and try to pick up the pieces...

Speek.E.Z.
She Had A Husband I Knew It Was Wrong To Scheme On This Girl
But When She Sucked On My Nuts How She Looked Like A Squirrel
Banging A Disgruntled House Wife Now This Is The Life
All The Pleasure Of Banging The Wife With Half The Strife
Had Her Moaning Like I Was The First Thing To Ever Touch Those Loins
Keep This Shit In Unison Had This Girl Up And Down Touching Our Groins
Who Can Say No To A Slut That Likes It In The Butt
I'm Like A Disgruntled The Squirrel Way I Bust A Nut
...*hears a sound outside*...
Yo...What Was That I Said To Myself Did I Just Hear Something
Oh Shit Dawg Your Having To Much Fun It Was Probably Nothing...
So I Shook Out My Fears And Took A Look At What's Going On At Hand
Creep This Girl From The Feet And Stopped At The Double D's...Damn
I Couldn't Stop, I Was All Over This Girl Like I Was Her Perfume
E.Z. For Women An Orgasmic Experience For All In The Room
I Thought About It With A Little Bit Of A Chuckle
But That Time Was Coming Hell I Even Felt My Knees Buckle
*another sound*
I Heard It This Time What The Hell Was That...
Dirty Sally: Don't Worry About That, It Was Probably Was The Cat
So I Started To Pound Her So Hard You'd Think I Was A Migraine
Yo Come On Girl Whose Your Daddy Just Tell Everyone What's My Name
WP: Who Is You?
Turned Around To See The Hubby Standing With A Bottle Of Wine
I Had No Thought Just To Go And Grab My Nine
Fuck You And Your Pain Your Wife Is Eternally Mine
Never Met You But With These Bullets I Leave Our Life Intertwine
I Done Fucked It Now I'll See You IN Two To Four If Not More
With That I Got My Shit And Took Off Out The Door

WORDPERFECT ASPECT

invision the temptress- the memory of her mistress-
the incense of defiled innocence-
an intense effection of coming home smelled the scent of cigarettes
It was supposed to be a surprise but the surprise was mine-
Comen home with a bottle of wine with one thing on my mind.
Given you time...i felt that I disrespected and left you neglected.
So as a token of my appreciation-
inticment plus plans for a proposal and vacation
Walk through the door noticed the lights dim-
A half smoked Virginia Slim. And some jeans that belonged to him.
Sat around for a minute i was zoned-
Nah you wouldn't do this...not in my home-
Just then I heard a slight moan.
Journied upstairs and what I saw couldn't compare-
With any pain I ever felt before.
Its not them no their not there...but in the fouls scent of the air.
i crept to my lair and through the lil light glair-that slept through the door-
I could just stair- To see my queen was a whore.
Her screamin stop then moaning for more
Inside I felt tore- why she do this for?
felt a roar of emotion, rational thought met with distortion
Either you love me or you don't there's no portions.
Amidst the commotion- started toward you but halted my motion.
I couldn't move I was terrified, that when I did our love would of died-
Never to be revived I was petrified so I stood by the side and cried-
Dying inside as my bride- defied.
Finally you were done I walked in she looked surprised and tried to disguise
But wait I know this guy.
Is this what you need? Did you ever love me? Or kiss me and see he?
I screamed clenching my fists till it bleeds.
I would of gave you everything this is what you choose-
And the sad thing is in the end I lose.
Damn my minds blown-
cause you walk away with him and I did nothing wrong and still end up alone.
The wine bleeds as if were a sea.
Mixed with my tears I've shed them enough to drown me
fuck it threw the ring heard the gun rung thank you both for killen me differently.

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What the fuck is this?

uppin

good stuff guys i like it

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NO DOUBT SHE CAME THROUGH BUT SADLY LIKE EVERYTHING ELSE THIS WILL GET SLEPT ON

i was feelin it, Dirty Sally, ur verse was good. i liked ur vocab and wordplay the most. Speek E.Z., the verse was pretty damn tight i thought. i was feelin ur flow and wordplay the most, and must i go into detail about Word Perfects verse. it was fuckin dope as usual. from the flow, to wordplay, to vocab it was still all there. great collab u all.

peace.....

thanks man, lets up this to get some more feedback

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Wow...for real..you all came wit fire in this..thi hudnt be slept on..you all brought forth an amzing story an dramatic sequwance of the scenes that occured..that was fucking dope...good collab you 3..keep it up..peace

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

You know.. i heard from sally when she told me she was doing a collab with WP

and i must admit, it seems like WP bring out the best in people

EZ your drop was ILL.. this is the 1st iv heard of you but this was great...flow on point

sally... told you that you would drop nice...never doubt yourself... flow and vocab had me like wow... shes getting up

WP... do i need to say anything man... you impress me with every drop you do... the only lack on this collab was a lack of Realism (thats what i call my flow) lol

great drop kids

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82007

Word- reppin' the fam nicely as usual
Speek EZ- dope...I gotta check some more shit by you...
Dirty Sally-nice shit ma...we need some femceez in Omens if ya interested...

I HOPE SHE EXCEPTS SHE REALLY WAS VERY IMPRESSIVE......
SPEEK WAS AS I EXPECTED AN WAS THE MISSING PRT TO THE PUZZLE.

^^^hey maricon...did I give you permission to speak?????? lol

que covron tu erres pendejo...mama mi webbo gringo!!!!!!!!!!lol


YOUR FROM SYRACUSE PUTO!!!!!!!!!

sally if you like i would love to do another

i thought it was a hot diss
u guys are spittin flames


heat finds u an not u finding heat

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thk u uppin

uppin