yea yea my bad on this one man ima restart heres his verse

PALE'S
/With a 5-12 record son you cant compete
your nothing more than an amature trying to handle the beat/
/Are you gonna hurt me when I start blurting you loss thirteen and other obsurd things/
/You dont have a mind such as mine so I stop to remind you of the time youve been rapped by 12 other guys./
/Theres no surprise with a size of the hole they left behind thats the reason that you cry when I insert from behind/
/You didnt like it before but now your a man-whore that goes door to door only looking for more/
/ You can beat me in this battle and it dont matter what they say, cause that wont change anything, even the fact that your gay/
/I didnt mean to start beef cause I know that this is your house,
but before you battle son take that cock outcha mouth./
/I didnt mean it Uben, I just didnt want it to be boring
let me make it up to you when I have pancakes with your mom in the morning/


uh thas hmm my turn
Cock back rewind and think how you swallow my ryhme
you wont be near me ever even you tried to follow~my~prime//
how you talk bout comming in from the back?
last i heard you was still figurin out when your balls where gonna drop into yo sack//
its called puberty u aint gotten there
your the type to try an shave before you even got any hair//
you thinkin being punk is bout kickin flags and screamin antiflag
but when this battle is over ill be the reminding you that either way your still a fag//
ill shave ya bald and draw a mouth on your head so you can "speak your mind"
ima show this kid words that contain heat cuz he'll be theone to never find//
i consider u an herb no matta how many wins u git
the only time youll ever spit shit is when your cleanin my dick//
try to think of ryhmes that shoot fire through a punch
your still imature even in rap cuz las i knew you was still
bringin one of those juice boxs for lunch//

iight thas all ima spit so let tha votin commence

U've Been Gone For So Long, U Forgot Ta Set A Battle Up

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UH RIGHT VOTE PEOPLE ILL VOTE BACK ON YOURSyea yea my bad on this one man ima restart heres his verse
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Dang son I thought that there wuz no feeding

But I guess you had long enough to write something and respond almost a month later.

.| i give this to uben sonned |.
.| better flow, structure, wordplay n punches |.
.| pale horse needs to elevate off gay lines |.
.| i'll poll when i get enough post |.
.| til then can u hit this up with a vote |.
.| http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=82921 |.

Thanx for tryin to sway vote Bionicle
That wuz just the angle I took the Structure is straight though
This wuz my first battle and the cat never showed and now he is gonna spit somethin after almost a month I spit stuff that wasnt pre write and made it personal and this cat still took over week from the last time I pm'ed him to spit and his junk still aint betta than mine, Just take the facts into consideration.

AHAHHAHAHA
/Theres no surprise with a size of the hole they left behind thats the reason that you cry when I insert from behind/

PALE
that was sick shit lmao made me laugh

UBEN:
ll shave ya bald and draw a mouth on your head so you can "speak your mind"
ima show this kid words that contain heat cuz he'll be theone to never find//
^ i seen the first punch before but not worded exactly the same but it still made me laugh

this was a decent battle
and over all im go with PALE even tho his structure is weird and hard to follow
he had a more effective verse

please pay back the favor on hazy vs tonya montana

pale verse was on some gay shit...he said when he insert rom behind??....hey i dunno!!...but your verse was to elementary..nothin really hit cause majority was gay jokes...disses were iight

uben did'nt hit that hard either...he had a couple punches that landed well...other than that he was pretty basic...

vote uben he edge this!!

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vote = uben

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