iight
10-15 lines max
no hate
no crew votes
u spittin first
ill spit either 2nite or tomoro
iight g-luck

come on man damn u takin a long time its been allday peep this and spit
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IIght im goin out hit this up and ill spit by tomoro dont duck neither111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

Me Duck?

Ill spit otmorrow or tonite, havent decided yet

peace********************************************* ****

^^^^ yo whiel u cats wait on spittin can u all hit this up
honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83729

CLEAN battle66 htiti up honestly or dont hit it up at lall
ill vote inhere when u all drop

Apprentice and his 'stretched lines', wit 'Elastics' he Fights
Your styles like 'Barks Soft drink', each verse 'Really Bites'
'Wont know wut Hit U', A Golden Eye 'Facility' Soilder snipped Frum 'Air Vents'
I confess Im not a Newb, youve been fooled this here's a JKX Experiment
Im a Vet 'Not yet Exposed', Police deciding whether to 'Strip-Search'
Going out on a 'Sunday Night'? Only place This Kids going 'Is-Church' (church day)
There Aint no 'Friendship' between us, this aint the boarder at 'Bobolo Island' (can/usa)
Im shootin u 'Worse Low Blows' than answerin 2 'What is the Capital of Tailand'?
This line may be a Filler but your lines are just 'Shit', they're 'Fertalizer'
This battle? you 'lost the whole thing', equiped wit a 'Home made Circumsizer'
Ur From Mohegan Gangsta Shit? Thats faker than Pro-Wrestling
And as for Ur Murked List, 'None' those names R Worth-Mentioning
U always Compliment ur own Rhymes! in Brackets he writes "Great"?
But If his lines are so good, why is Aprentice Eleven and Eight?
Im cookin this dude his shits 'Raw', 'seals' served in 'Iglu Huts'
I know ur name is 'Aprentice', but around me there aint no 'Short Cuts'


Note

Personal about him complimentinjg his lines:
He always writes (OMG) and shit like that after his verse lol
funny this

And an Apprentice can be a shortcut for gettin around highschool quicker

And youve all played golden Eye, first board, the facility, u take out a guy frum the vents

That should do it


SPIT

^^^^hehehe iight this should be quick lemme start spittin now it shood be up in a min or two lol wow..................................

What are u laughin at u wack bitch?


Lol apprentice kid? who the fuck are u?

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2 minutes?


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The appetizer:
shut the FUCK up^^ faggot ur dismissed, neverless a bitch,
the way ima rape u, will have u limpin dude/
m not gay its just the newb principle/(new principle)

now raise ur hand b4 u catch multiple roasts, after u dead my spits will fucken scar ur ghost/
its obvious ur personals came from d/r an checkin my posts, ur flow looked hard to most/
but aprentice far from them, my rhymes like cement the way they go hardenin/
Swiffs mouth im skatin and fartin in/(skat:shittin in 1's mouth)

IIght ur just a fucken homo:

if u checked my profile ull see im sik wit it/
my rhymes are like b4 a fight, the way u get quick witted/
disfigured shitake leadin to tearage/
who swiffs an mcee, nah faggot it dont mean miscarridge/
ive added multiple rappin talents, even if u divided my flow Aprenitce is not ur average/

your blessed to even recieve these lines/
ya tic toc flows is walkin invisible mines, rhymes like carpenters they way the entrappin weak minds/

fuck your lines and fuck what u think/
you can go 16 but ur rhymes go nowhere like a roller rink/

I hit you wit multis and multiple head shots, hit u in ur thorox/(lol)
stomachin aprenticekid is like downin a bottle of fucken CLOROX/

LOL, ok, werk on ur flow tho

Upin................Honest Votes............................................. ...................................

kwik breakdown...........

punches=app
flow=swift
sustainment=app
metas=app
creativeness=swift
origanality=swift
vocab=app
im a punches person so vote=appre'

hit this up...........make sure ya do
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83865

Most of Swifts' meta's or "word play" wasn't tight. Sorry dog. some of em...A.K. rhyme scheme didn't seem to go well. But thats what people said about mine but I know my shit flow. A.K. should work on his line organization to make it understandable as possible. He had 1 or 2 tight lines but Swift had like 3 maybe. Swift, to me was just a lil betta.

^^^ u sway again and ill spit another verse u embarasment to life.............................................. .................

aight peeps i voted on this so can one of ya cats look at the thread that i posted.............................cheers......... ..........