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U spit first

CHeck In


And yes, you are a pussy

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okay check this.. my first battle but whatever..

look this guy that i am battlin calls me a pussy,
what the fuck is his problem, when he said it, it shook me/
but look at me now i'm back in full affect,
ready to take on whatever he says in his dialect/
he can stand with my rhyme and battlin skill,
damn after this battle is over even he will tell me my rhymes is ill/
even when i am spittin, destroyin the mic,you'll love my lyrics,
you look at me like i'm ur idol, even when i work for cyrix/
he talks to me like i'm shit, like i have no ability,
but when i battle i make u motherfuckers really see/
how i act when i am on the offensive side,
once this battle is over u will have lost all ur pride/
u try to fuck wit me, but u will see my glock is my tool,
but fuck it instead i will drown u in my pool,
this is over, but i had fun, so i will aim at u then shoot my gun.

Kid all u spit were Fake personals, You R just a Liar
U said this was your first battle? You need to Retire
This is Over? no you blew you structure way outa Proportion
Battlin me was a bigger mistake than pregnant Teen Abortions
Please u dont gota Gun, keep tryin to fit in wit them ghettos Clicks
And and only time youve ever cocked sumtin was beatin off a Dick
My shits outa this world like PPl wit heads shaped like Cones
Ill put this bitch on the flat line like dead wireless Cell Phones
I hate you worse than Cartman shows towards his friend Kyle
Up against ur verse I just stepped into one big giant Shit Pile
This just ruined your thanks giving theres no point in Celebrating
You could Escalade towards heaven and still not be Elivating
THis had gota be the wackes verse Ive posted in History
But its puttin u threw more pain than Depression Kids in Misery
Your a fridge witout the light on you skillz are very bad
A chance in earning a win is what Doggy wished he had


LOL what did u just write

Uppin

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yeah i know what the fuck that was a good flow dawg.............................................. ..................................................

yo no hate to yog dogg but ima say swift took this...he came harder wit the punches and had more personals, yog dogg had a tight flow, but swifts punches were hella good.

yo swift if u got the time can u hit up yog doggs and my battle wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84781
itd be much appreciated.

peace......

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yo was it really fair u allowing a newbie 2 spit 1st while uve a record of 10-2??
i aint makin excuses 4 ne1 but u started by commenting on a guys 1st battle??
"Kid all u spit were Fake personals, You R just a Liar
U said this was your first battle? You need to Retire"
yog came strong on u too "he can stand with my rhyme and battlin skill, damn after this battle is over even he will tell me my rhymes is ill/
da majority of ur verse was tight 2

LOL my verse was shit and so was his

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Right....this was weak....um seeing as to how swift had some lines that can be considered punches in a remote sense, I guesss I gotta give this to him.....but I don't think he tried.

The newbie just needs to elevate, like every other newbie out there.

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