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Old 10-12-03, 04:37 AM   #1
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OMEN PRE: the first shall be last

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I Spit TIGHT~ASS raps....
like my rectom forgot how to RELAX-
Just to get all of my shit out I have to counter react-
with ex~lax.
All I know is spitting ill shit…rappers try to match-
so I tattoo “your dead” To my forhead and help them face facts.
Makes since don’t it?
I use sentence fragments to shatter opponents-By components-
in battles let you get live for a split second-
then get split in a moment,, by using my tongue for a weapon.
Nigguz is lifeless-if they don’t believe I’ve been the nicest-
Since before osiris- and isis-To years after the 911 crisis.
they call me Making Know Centz cause ....my style content is priceless.
from mosaics~ to poetry translated from aeromaic-
To my cells...weather going through mitosis or if the bionuclaic.
My writs embody spirit of lyrics with lymrics-
twice a sick as hermaphrodite clits being stuffed with gay dick.
Who ever want with me we can battle or we can fight-
If you bite…your ghostwriter will be haunted by my poltergeist.
resite killer rhymes….what I write is coherent with flat lines.
I graduated to murder in 1st degree-
homocide ? try suicide- im the only person that can kill me.
you a bitch nigga homo thug with a trigga robbing men for their male figga-
that's some "dick ride to survive" shit like MEMPH BLEEK do JIGGA.
Instigate me to deliver punchlines…but when the fights on-
You be the first rapper to lose to me before I turned the mic on.
Scientists use my saliva glands to innovate ways to irregate-
Im better then you and that is before metaphorsI implicate to exagerate-
Spitting for so long it’ll take a river bed for me to re~hydrate-
Go head do a diss to me with your whole crew-
Air it at your show I bet your one hoe fan would still boo.
Fuck any one who even herd your 16 and felt two-
How you tight on mic…Son your hypeman takes ridlen to amp you.
Callen your boys like that’s gonna scare me-
It wont… but it will consume more space in the obituary.
When I flow I recreate noah arch from start tofinish I can do it-
Make 20 MINUTE verse of how ****** got killed on his own crew duet.
Any one who start shit can kiss my ass-
My lyrical muscle triple the density of vin diesels’ pec mass.
Blast- you and exposing your flunkies make you look out classed-
Your pussy you probably quief every time you get gased.
Being me is automattic- my brains mathmattics-
Compensate for my lack of wack gimics cheap antics.
CENTZ don’t need a gun gimic for his fans to notice the force-
Once the pen starts its coarse…………….
I leave my mark by auotgraphing the coarpse.
Sun burn you to dust the way I son omit.
you get ~rip~ between my verbs like the word sc~rip~t.
son I rep the 757 newport news is my home town-
but in this case 7~5~7 is the my score card in 3 rounds.
That means 2 to 1 your flawless record is through!!!
While I use the math to multiplied-To supply –
an explanation of how im better then you.

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Old 10-12-03, 04:44 AM   #2
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nice drop dawg very nice.. good to see there is a lot of Omen Pride still flowin round here. keep writin dawg u is ill...
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Old 10-12-03, 04:53 AM   #3
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thnx pop
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Old 10-12-03, 05:42 AM   #4
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what would you change
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Old 10-12-03, 06:11 AM   #5
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I'd change m boxer'z at least once a week if I was you WORD...lol...but dope piece...it would be sexier if you dressed it up with some multi'z though...if ya ass gets aim finally I could give you private lessonz......hoe...but anywaz...peep m piece...called "Self Evaluation"...I was experimenting on that shit and I think it came out tight...
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Old 10-12-03, 06:15 AM   #6
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WHAT ARE MULTIS
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Old 10-12-03, 06:33 AM   #7
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it's when you rhyme more than one word...(multiple wordz)...hence the name "multi"...lol...now hit up my piece damnit...before I have to shove my net cock down a throat...
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Old 10-12-03, 06:53 AM   #8
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what you mean
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Old 10-12-03, 06:57 AM   #9
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like instead of sayin' "I'm spittin' flowz...like I'm doin' tae-bo"
you can say "I'm spittin' flowz while you pick ya nose"...lol...not the best example but it's somethin'...now...hit up my damn piece WORDY...
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Old 10-12-03, 07:04 AM   #10
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no difference
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Old 10-12-03, 07:15 AM   #11
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I won't crit this piece man.. but it was a god read read

Multis are.. When instead of rhyming complicate dominate Nomintae blah blah

The prevoius or word after rhymes with it(check all of my pieces for example)

I'll get nominated for being complex complicated

blah blah^^

Another example if you didn't understand

Casually wear of brains is masterfully declared in game

There a triple^^

See casually rhyme with masterfully.. then the word after that WEAR rhymes with DECLARED then brains rhymes with game

Its that simple.. Pz.. You may pay your fees to Potent@greatest.com < lol ..
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Old 10-12-03, 07:59 AM   #12
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how much i owe caue i aint paying a dollar for help writting a dime piece lol
thnk you pop what i do though is put_ to seperate everyword that rhymes there are multis but i seperate them with dASHES
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Old 10-12-03, 10:37 AM   #13
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uppin
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Old 10-12-03, 04:03 PM   #14
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Wordplay is good, as usual. The flow is nice and you got some good punches in there. The only thing lacking are multies. Just improve in the department and your pieces will be that much more solid than they are now. Keep it up fam.
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Old 10-12-03, 05:07 PM   #15
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that was dope homie, u had some good vocab and wordplay, ur flow was on target just like all ur drops, ur content and topic were both original, great job reppin the fam homie, keep droppin, and yo hit me up back bout that colllab wes gonna do.

peace.......
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