10-12 lines
no crew votes bitin n shit like dat
drop asap
u first

checkin in

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ill drop strait afta u

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Like a blocked sewer your shit is never flowing/
You need that unblocked coz the turtle’s head is showing/
Ya gonna meet the ground like a mole crawls around/
‘Penfolt’ by nature, blind, bald, and easily drowned/ (danger mouse)
Give your rhymes to the homeless, arse paper for paupers/
At least it’s a purpose wiping shit off that’s surplus/
Your soaked like a dog - shaggy, smellin and wet/
Shake off your spit get verbal jabs from your vet/
Showing your face is the only way to offend me/
24 letters in the alphabet coz I just killed this ‘mc’/
I aint the type to go soft when its time to fuck/
You’d think you just won bingo coz your number is up/

neva had shame beatin my foes..it wont hurt to pound on u,
ya verse soo wack....i cant help but look down on u.
i'd give u a run for ya money....but you don't have none,
ill tell da truth my first bar's better than...ya first to last one.
u jus below average doin crappy raps..im above the best ranks,
no lie ill have ya face stuck to the floor like wet paint.
ya flows get no feed back....not even worthy of fuse,
and i would say ya shit is played....but it verbally abused.
no respect for wackness...i'll even go as far to say ya shit's gay,
u took friction to the heart...but u already let da win slipp away.

votes plz

n no fuckin dik riderz

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Needin votes here.....plz.............

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pretty one-sidded....Nd got this in every category....here's y....



u fucked it up right there at the beginning....i know whereu was going with down and pound....but u ended in the same two words.....so it was pretty shitty to see that.....Nd had better punches, wordplay, and vocabulary.....i see u have upped ur skill better than ur Necrid battle which is good...but here is a breakdown for u two.....

Multis - Nd
Metas - Nd
Wordplay - Nd
Flow - Nd
Vocab - Nd (definitely)
Creativity - Nd
Personals - Nd
Complexity - Nd
RhymeScheme - Nd
Overall - Nd
Vote - Nd

peace
4:20

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this was pretty much a one-sided battle---i wasn't feelin ndeva's verse at all not goof flow or any good punches---mysterie had an aight flow--couple aight punches---enought to take this win---vote=mysterie

^^actually disagree, i agree with a majority of what joker said, it was one-sided in N.D.eva's favor, he had practically better everything, the first line made me laugh, nice shit dude, props

thanx man,,,,,

uppin for votes, com on dont sleep on it......
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^^straight wordness to all these cats, one sided battle, but i suppose i can break it down anyways.....

structure-tie
flow-nd
vocab-nd
wordplay-nd
punches-nd
personals-nd
overall-nd

nd took this, shouldnt have even broke it down.....but there u have it......

peace........

uppin for votes..............
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...........................Peace!

both cats need elevation
but here's how i think

flow = n.d
punches = n.d
wordplay = n.d
metas = n.d
creativity = n.d

vote = n.d

if i can get 100 posts soon, ill be sure to poll this up

hit this battle up, its being slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84033