iight dawg...

8-15 lines
Post and poll
Il spit first

cmon man.... hurry the fuck up.... u arent chokin are u? :P:P:P.....................................

this shud be heated
peep my hsit wit R L
its a sweet battle
uppin/.................................................. ...........

yaz hurry up man............................................... .................................................. .................................

yo i spit a millon and one words per second reckin everything/
and if shayd step in front of one, everyone will hear his scream/
thinkin the queer bitch finaly got bitch slaped/
Cuz he diserved that, fo thinkin he could rap/
just face facts, and belive wat i tell u/
your shit never be like mine, mine has quility value/
yours just worth shit on a stick, or a dick up your ass/
u better hope your vitility don't go fast/
You'll never last, gets the vicois blast, of the Forsaken Yaz/
Il leave u in a cast, Pull out my 12 gage and watch the blood splash/
While your body hit the floor like/
need a say nemore/
or is the the a visual enough story for u to fall for/

Hold up lil edit....

yo i spit a millon and one words per second reckin everything/
and if shayd step in front of one, everyone will hear his scream/
thinkin the queer bitch finaly got bitch slaped/
Cuz he diserved that, fo thinkin he could rap/
just face facts, and belive wat i tell u/
your shit never be like mine, mine has quility value/
yours just worth shit on a stick, or a dick up your ass/
u better hope your vitility don't go fast/
You'll never last, gets the vicois blast, of the Forsaken Yaz/
Il leave u in a cast, Pull out my 12 gage and watch the blood splash/
While your body hit the floor like/
need a say nemore/
or is this the a visual enough story for u to fall for/

aight yo... this guy calls him the forsaken one//
he aint ready for my rhymes ,i spit em faster then a gun//
look i done a few lines and ur already gettin ready to run//
u made it this far but u wont make it any further//
ur brave , i'll give u that , but nothin more//
cause u made a life mistake steppin up to me, i would spit more but i might hurt ur feelins by callin u a hor//
well the truth hurts and ur raps describe that ur under the age of four//
when im done spittin u'll be complainin that ur ears are sore//
alot of u might think im not skilled//
but i gave yaz his new status= killed.

Shit dawg dat was nice, dat like er tightest line u ever spit.

iight uppin fo votes people............................................ ..............................

yall we need some votes............................................. .........................................

yall we need some votes happening!!! >................................................ .................................................

shit i dont know....
umm the first guy... i guess?


"ill murda him n his best friend, fo less den da price of a gold rolley before dey put da bergets in, im on a pedestol as high as the life of Led Zepplin, you as low as the price of the Best Western"

cmon ppl post some comments and vote ................................................ .........................

cmon yall hit the polls up ................................................ .......................

Rhymescheme-yaz
metas-shay-d(not much)
vocab-yaz
finisher-shay-d
personals-shay-d

Sorry but wack ass battle...Shay-ds' verse was a little better.