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checkin.....I will drop in 20 mins good luck to you cause you might need it..Peace out see when i see you peace....

Son, I Dont Gotta Be On 'Elm Street' To 'Kill Yo Dreams'||
You Might Not Know What I Mean...B-Cuz Ya Only 15||
How IS Jacksonvilles Teams? I do some Carvin' 'Inscriptions'||*
A 'Bowie' Knife to ya Ribs and...Nother Teen is Up Missin'||
Yer Like 'Masturbation' BeCuz Theres No 'Harm' In You||
And while Yer Facin' Adjacent To My Ass, Ill Fart On You||
A Slingshot Just Like 'Bart' Do, Now I've Got Yer Attention||
Yer an 'Oxymoron', Just as Big as A Hot Wheel Engine||
Gotcha Flinchin, Like This One Of Yo Weekly Spellin Test||
Wear A Vest When U Step, Cuz I'm Best At Slashin' Flesh||
Fightin Me? Yo Betta Lunge, Bob, And Check Ya Stance||
Yo Goofy...SO Gon' Wacth Yo Sponge Bob Square Pants||

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* Under Where He's From
Oxymoron- two words together that mean opposite

32minutes....12 min late....I was late before though....but you betta hurry the hell up....


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Fuck-9's, I let my AK send-59 lyrical shots to-ya-mind..../1
Leave ya all "bloody" and "red"...peeps will prolly think you-da-devil.../2
You to me is like 1st to 2nd floor cause ya NOT-ON-MY-LEVEL!.../3
Rappin...you-should-quit...Ya punches...they-always-miss...../4
Cause the only shots ya “AIMING” at, is on ya “AOL Buddy-List”..../5
Ya battles...they-neva-blazed, while im leaving this-faggot-dazed..../6
You might as well call my punches “Dike” the way im having Nightmare jaw shifting-"both-ways".../7
Breakin-legs...jumpin to conclusions...Round 1...GoOfy's-moven-on...../8
You winning? Naw, yo punches are more "outdated" than "Daily-Coupons"..../9
Putting Nightmare in "Deep-shit" for speak-en....Its only for-da-good.../ 10

quick 10

Ya'll both did ok...

What's with the weird rhyme scheme in ya opener and closer, Goofy?

And by the way, dykes are lesbians...they don't swing both ways.

Better flow and harder punches from Nitemare.

Wordplay was pretty much the same on both sides.

No real personals to speak of.

Peace

Hit me back...

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corection to nitemare...OXYMORON (2 words that mean exact same thing EX: U "WHITE" "CRACKER")

okay now dat datz been said, nite mare came with harder punchs.
wordplay, almost the same, but da j-ville nigga wuz up wit the opener and closer (WACK)....nitemarre overall.

WhiteCracker....Thats out Cold...What the fuck make yall naggas think I'm White?

Cuz the avatar is white?

Hmm...Uppin and thanx for the votes


Hit these up too if ya can...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89916


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89598

Goofy came harder than that other fool................................if i could vote goofy would get it

HAHA...correction to new rap order...any oxymoron is something that has contradicting meaning....controlled chaos......loud silence.....fatass anorexic chick.haha

neway....

nightmarre ripped em in all categories......better punches.....and what was up with goofy's flow? i wanst feelin the beat

goof did have a good punch though:

Rappin...you-should-quit...Ya punches...they-always-miss...../4
Cause the only shots ya “AIMING” at, is on ya “AOL Buddy-List”..../5

haha that was good

but the rest couldnt step it up to Night

my vote: nightmarre

yo hit this up.....honest votes nebody reading this post ya link in my thread after vtoing and i'll hit it up for sure

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7403#post887403

2nd Uppin....Thanx 4 Votes

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