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VOTES MUST BE BROKEN DOWN IN A BAR BY BAR FORMAT SINCE THIS IS A SHORT BATTLE-ALL OTHER VOTES DO NOT COUNT!!

EXAMPLE
BLAH BLAH
BLAH BLAH

^^WACK

BLAH BLAH
BLAH BLAH

^^OK

BLAH BLAH
BLAH BLAH

^^DECENT..

both verses due 25 min after check in

good luck

I'm known best to disturb shit, I prevent mercy cuz I'm the first one to curse it
Plus my punch lines connect like this battle is cursive
Not alarmed by this faggot, dom has no life so he stays on the boards
Shit he'd prolly knock shaq from winning rebound awards!
I'm always elevating, while your going down
You wouldn't be a Dominator if you lived in Hockeytown!*

*-dominik hasek, plays for red wings, detroit=hockeytown

checkin

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Im'a be leavin ya verbally raped - feeling like a catholic alter boys
Cuz when your rappin bout sports your bound ta get deestroyed
1500 posts n Rappad still thinks playin scrabble with his gram is wordplay
Ive turned so many posers like u into herbs I could fill an ashtray
Im'a boil ya with my word and string you out like spaghetti
Then be splittin your wig like my keyboard doubles as a machette

Dominated got this becuz of his punches,vocab,and flow.That otha nigga was to basic
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^^you win the explanation of the year honors......good thing you didn't poll.......read the rules folks.....

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I'm known best to disturb shit, I prevent mercy cuz I'm the first one to curse it
Plus my punch lines connect like this battle is cursive
^^^Ok

Not alarmed by this faggot, dom has no life so he stays on the boards
Shit he'd prolly knock shaq from winning rebound awards!
^^LMAO but u been on longer them him

I'm always elevating, while your going down
You wouldn't be a Dominator if you lived in Hockeytown!*
^^Weak

*-dominik hasek, plays for red wings, detroit=hockeytown
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Im'a be leavin ya verbally raped - feeling like a catholic alter boys
Cuz when your rappin bout sports your bound ta get deestroyed
^^ nice

1500 posts n Rappad still thinks playin scrabble with his gram is wordplay
Ive turned so many posers like u into herbs I could fill an ashtray
^^Kinda weak

Im'a boil ya with my word and string you out like spaghetti
Then be splittin your wig like my keyboard doubles as a machette
^^Dope


Voteominator

plz return tha honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90316

I'm known best to disturb shit, I prevent mercy cuz I'm the first one to curse it
Plus my punch lines connect like this battle is cursive

^creative punch, kinda weak set up.....8/10

Not alarmed by this faggot, dom has no life so he stays on the boards
Shit he'd prolly knock shaq from winning rebound awards!

^good punchline, 7/10

I'm always elevating, while your going down
You wouldn't be a Dominator if you lived in Hockeytown!*

^wasnt really feeling it, good idea but blah 5/10

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Im'a be leavin ya verbally raped - feeling like a catholic alter boys
Cuz when your rappin bout sports your bound ta get deestroyed

not too hard...good set up though....plus feeding 5/10

1500 posts n Rappad still thinks playin scrabble with his gram is wordplay
Ive turned so many posers like u into herbs I could fill an ashtray

^feelin that punch, good set up and punchline 8/10

Im'a boil ya with my word and string you out like spaghetti
Then be splittin your wig like my keyboard doubles as a machette

^hardest punch in the battle, creative punch all around.....though i dont realliy like when punches in text refer to the computer.....but its all good 9/10



winner by points: Dominator

good verse though by rappad, alot of could of changed the battle if it was a bit longer...

yo i took the time to hit this up with the explanation yall wanted....so both of yall hit this up with an honest one, its a close battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90336

ok heres the break down folks
rappads verse

I'm known best to disturb shit, I prevent mercy cuz I'm the first one to curse it
Plus my punch lines connect like this battle is cursive
flow was off here dawg and punch didn't really hit4/10

Not alarmed by this faggot, dom has no life so he stays on the boards
Shit he'd prolly knock shaq from winning rebound awards!
better than your opener but still kinda blah..so 6/10

I'm always elevating, while your going down
You wouldn't be a Dominator if you lived in Hockeytown!*
^no..ended weak personal was blah...4/10


Dominators verse

Im'a be leavin ya verbally raped - feeling like a catholic alter boys
Cuz when your rappin bout sports your bound ta get deestroyed
ok punch here coulda been better 5/10

1500 posts n Rappad still thinks playin scrabble with his gram is wordplay
Ive turned so many posers like u into herbs I could fill an ashtray
much better was feelin this one more than opener 7.5/10

Im'a boil ya with my word and string you out like spaghetti
Then be splittin your wig like my keyboard doubles as a machette
decent not that great though but 5/10

rappad total 14/30
dom total 17.5/30

short battles are harder to judge cuz u cant make up for a bad line or two

anyway
dominator win
better flow and punches
no hate to rappad..i know u can do better
poll vote=dominator

oh yea could you guys breakdown this battle and drop an honest vote for me....
preciate it
thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90484

I'd Just Like To Make It Clear

Both Of You Need Help...

Actually Ima Hafta Go Wit Rappad On Dis...

You Both Really Suck Da Long Slong But...

Rappass Was Betta...

I Wont Vote Though Cause I Aint Tryna Waste My Time Breakin

Down A Weak Battle...

-Azaz

uppin

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Seriously...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90540

Peep Dat And I'll Give You My Honest, Serious Vote...

Holla...

-Azaz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90529
^^ peep clean battle

but anywayz this was a coo battle
rappad had sum good flowz an punches
bu so did dominator...
vote - tie...but i mite see again an vote for who wins....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90529
^^ peep