Love is one of the most powerful things in the world. True love is the greatest of all. Through everything that happens, or goes wrong, that love is always there. It may drift away, then without even expecting it, it burns back and bright. After all is done, and everything calms down, you sit and think about what you miss and your heart feels like it sunk into you stomach,.... you see it. You miss being loved for you and nothing else. You miss being held by the one you love. You think about them all the time and after it all you relize your in true love.......... No one could ever replace that spot in your heart. You just sit wounder and think. Is this all real and true??.............It is and you are in true love.......

Aww how sweet. I loved this piece babe. This is one of your best. It shows whats coming from your heart, and thats what matters. Its full of emotion and love. You're love is grand, and that gurl is really lucky to have you. And I'm sure that she knows that. Keep up the awesome work. Most respect.

nice drop, i like the topic, if i had'nt already felt love i would know what it is now. some nice immagery, u didnt stray off topic.
but may i suggest that you organize it into stanzas next time, as it makes it easier to read, well much love

aiight

peace

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This was adorable.. the emotion was there and everything fit perfectly. Cant say anything else about it.. Nice piece.. keep 'em comin!

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simple put and i have to agree it is adorable. it was a good read, and made me happy inside just reading it. theres nothing wrong with it that i can say, its so simple put theres not much more you could do. but i like it simple put like this. the emotion i could tell was there, u could see you sitting there smiling and happy writing this, and im happy for you and her!!!! oh yes and i liked very much so how you ended this piece too.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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^uppin for sweet. Its a good read.

Thank all of you. All my emotion isn't ment to be kept in so I let it out. I have found my true love and relized a lot more now than before. I'm gonna edit and up a past writing. Just reals like a good time to do it. Respect to all JT

Good drop JT. Good structure and great topic. I know how you feel JT, I have been in the same thing as you. It feels good to love someone like this, but it feels even better when they love you the same way back. I really dont know how it feels to be loved but I hope to soon find out.

MM

i thought this was so sweet and adorable i have to agree. you has so much emotion running throught it. the structure was there. and it is a topic alot of people can relate too. you can defentaly tell you put ur heart into this piece great job

Everything I write is backed up with my heart and it's full out emotions. I love her with all my heart and soul. Thank you much. Spect JT aka "Demon"

JT- this is my first read from ya, just gotta give first of all madd respect for the true feelings, such emotion, and just a purity in it. oh yeah did i mention that it was really well written-lol-youdont come cross pieces like this too often, it'll put a tear in ya eye no matter how tuff you think you are, great read keep droppin, lookin foreward to readin more of ya stuff.
-B

how cute
this was a nice read, nice message,
the emotion is definetly felt in this piece
...keep it up
i know how it feels to find the one

^ i can relate, that's when you realize that it's real
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nice piece

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the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."

What can I say that everyone else hasn't? This was spiel of positive emotions in the end. Right?

Love is a strange subject. And I like to think I know it pretty well. You see to also know it pretty well. And there really isn't much I can comment on except, this is good stuff.

~Islam~

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I'm taking that as a compliment.

aww how cute! i totally loved it...it was easy to understand so if someone who doesnt know what love is reads this...they'll get it...well keep writing cuz ur shit is good.
mcl...

love it and love you