8 lines
no crew,hate,or dr
Tribz is droppin first

aight droppin now

Pray for a MIRACLE DOG, i SWEAR THAT YOU LOST
facing a SPIRITUAL GOD, before the first bar I've FINISHED YOU OFF!
I speak in tongues, SYLLABLES MORSED with such a CRITICAL FORCE
my 'delivery got kids hooked' like AMBILLICAL CORDS!
Tribz fights back dont QUESTION THE SORE SPLEENS
leave fists-in-cuffs, a bunch of "twisted-fucks" like "DYSLEXICS IN PORN SCENES!"
I FEAST UPON THIS CANNIBAL, Hannibal dont deny pain
This kids "FUCKED UP" cuz he "LIKES FRIED BRAIN" (triple meaning if you can decypher)

yo that was hot, and yeah i got the triple metaphor, u betta break it down for those who don't or u may lose soem votes, ill hti this again after lectior spits...good verse

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The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

i mean it wasnt that good, i liked a few lines, it coudl have been way hotter, in an 8 liner u have no room for filler

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

wheres the filler? sh kid cuz there isnt one

up for hanible maybe hell spit sometime this year

stfu...can u see i was offline peep his location ya'll

The growin room is where u and ya illiterate rhymes should be//
When u had to break down ya rhymes I could tell u was newbie//
I’m Hannibal lector and tribz is the first emcee to be ate’n//
U swear I lost?…ur goin to hell and meeting satin//
Ur an Idian u got a spear..I got chrome to make u moan//
U claimin that was critical force?..u had not 1 punch thrown//
I’m prayin but its for u cause ya soul is soon to be lost//
Ya rhymes are only tight once a year like tha snowman jack frost//

flow..Tie
punches..Tribz
vocab...Tie
originality...Tribz
metaphors..Tribz
personals...Tie

overall....Tribz but alot of played lines in both verses but good for a newbe battle...keep it up



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93131

no you were sitting here online for over an hour and a half you fuckin idiot
right in this forum

by the way terrible verse, hurry up with those votes

Dogg he had no punches....lol but whateva he didnt have no personals eitha...lol

Uppin 4 votes.....................

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LMAO!!!!! funny..

terrible? nigga it only took 6 mins...why ya talkin nigga show a punch or a personal...yea thats what i thought......nigga i juss got home at 5:55 so how was i on fo an hour and a half but anyways quit ya freepostin fo u get introuble...

yo..tribz took this, no question in the world....y'all tied on structure...no really good personals...tibz ate u hannibal........how ironic...your flow was ok, but u had no content, and crappy disses
vote- tribz

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

the line staht clinched it for tribz for the ending triple metaphor.....for thsoe who don tget it
This kids "FUCKED UP" cuz he "LIKES FRIED BRAIN" (triple meaning if you can decypher)- it means fucked up(shitty fucked up) cuz he lieks fried brain(hannibal lector ate a dude's brain in the movie, and if someone were fucked in his mouth up to his head, fucked up cause he liek brain...good line, hannibal didnt have any nearly as good)

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The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>