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Blind spit
no crew
no hate
no d\r
no other bullshit
10-15

verse due tommorow 1:00pm

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peace

sorry for long wait this jus wasn't happening


any fuckin ways

this is my check in

goodluck and deadline 1:00pm tomorow

peace

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yo i'ma rip tribal up, like ripped pages in a bible dump//
fuck ya scriptures, u now that past, like ya old pictures//
u gots to meditate to escape tha cold black fate//
man u need ta elevate to tha lyricalist gate, and rap at a mad pace//
with me on tha stage winning, its like ur in confinment//
face it, u suck, ur better at mummbling, ur at ur retirment//
u havent met tha requirments, ur carrer is now in fragments//
my spit is like water and electricity, i'ma jus makin a whole lot of humidity//
i'ma b winner over u for an efinity, jus die like trinity on tha matrix//
i'll wrap ur body up in latex, go sit wit ur quir faggets, and then get squasged like a magot//
my words are hitten ur cranium like it was pellits of titanium//
ur'a grain a sand, and i'ma boulder, i flip u over my shoulder wit my punches i pack//
like u was a punching bag, a kicking sack, be layen black and blue//
i'm like a plague, when u catch me, i poke ya eye and u ch0oke and die//
b stupid and sit on my window and get picked off like a fuckin house fly//

aight waiten yo verse hommin rember blind spit no feedin and shit.
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yo shit i could only give in tommorow

jus found out a buddy of mine got shot his in the hospital

ffuuuuckkkkkkk

sorry dawg i'll spit tommorow before 1:00pm

peace

yo sorry about all this

anyways here is my verse:


I'm the "tyson-of-text" "pounchout" in your chest..
I do this to see you "spit out" the illst but your jus like the rest...

It's a blindspit but couldn't help take a glance at your bars...
I spi the illst, make you slip and "fall" off your rhythm like the japaness attacked by SARS...

Battlin me is like you takin a chance in "Fear Factor" dawg how "much can you take"?...
These words make your "arms and legs" fall off make you "swim" in this words like you was swimmin in the lake...

Thug net, ima keep you "underground textcee wanna be cuz you got murked now your subliminal...
Ima keep these lines and rhymes original tribal will make sure this verse will your chest open so every1 sees your heart is critical...

peace

Aiight.....

Hers da breakdown!!

Illision:Nice verse,shyt flowed nice,wordplay wus good n on point,Punch's were nice!!

yo i'ma rip tribal up, like ripped pages in a bible dump//
fuck ya scriptures, u now that past, like ya old pictures//
u gots to meditate to escape tha cold black fate//
man u need ta elevate to tha lyricalist gate, and rap at a mad pace//
with me on tha stage winning, its like ur in confinment//
face it, u suck, ur better at mummbling, ur at ur retirment//
u havent met tha requirments, ur carrer is now in fragments//
my spit is like water and electricity, i'ma jus makin a whole lot of humidity//
i'ma b winner over u for an efinity, jus die like trinity on tha matrix//
i'll wrap ur body up in latex, go sit wit ur quir faggets, and then get squasged like a magot//
my words are hitten ur cranium like it was pellits of titanium//
ur'a grain a sand, and i'ma boulder, i flip u over my shoulder wit my punches i pack//
like u was a punching bag, a kicking sack, be layen black and blue//
i'm like a plague, when u catch me, i poke ya eye and u ch0oke and die//
b stupid and sit on my window and get picked off like a fuckin house fly//

^^ sum of these punch's i felt wernt dat strong but still good!!.....keep it up!!

Ok Now

Tribal:nice verse,flow wus good,punch's were kin da weak to me but still a good a verse!!.....nice job!

I'm the "tyson-of-text" "pounchout" in your chest..
I do this to see you "spit out" the illst but your jus like the rest...

It's a blindspit but couldn't help take a glance at your bars...
I spi the illst, make you slip and "fall" off your rhythm like the japaness attacked by SARS...

Battlin me is like you takin a chance in "Fear Factor" dawg how "much can you take"?...
These words make your "arms and legs" fall off make you "swim" in this words like you was swimmin in the lake...

Thug net, ima keep you "underground textcee wanna be cuz you got murked now your subliminal...
Ima keep these lines and rhymes original tribal will make sure this verse will your chest open so every1 sees your heart is critical...

^^ i think dis wus a good verse for a newb,soo good job i jus feel illisions gets dis 1!!

Vote:Illisions

Reason:Overall his verse wus better,but he didnt win by much!!.......good battel ppl!!

uuuppppiiiinnnn for votes



upin for some honest poll votes



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Personals- R.I. (I believe he tried to do one)
Punches- Tribal
Flow- R.I.
Multis- R.I.
Vocab- R.I.
Wordplay- Tie (About Even)
Overall- R.I.

Synapsis- VERY CLOSE BATTLE... Reason bein' I do Quality over Quanity... and R.I. suffer'd a loss of quality due to alot of Fillers... but just his overall complexity took the battle outta Tribals grasp... Good battle tho... Pz

illusion took this {only just} maybe because of the experience he has over tribal....dont know that tho......

his verse was overall beta than tribal's..................

vote = illusions

poll vote people, i am sitten at 1-0 and it shud b 3-0 so plz poll vote, holla hommies, UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES.
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Uppin, poll vote hommies and place a honest vote here

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=95580

UPPIN HOMMIES, vote here

yo i think tribal won this. the mike tyson punchout was hott. umm my vote goes to tribal. i wil be sure to vote when i hit 100 posts. yo return the favor and vote on this battle for me

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2570#post972570